Start Liver Experience Leveling up with Ghost Captain

Monster-killing upgrade article, a chicken's experience

In the first twenty or thirty chapters, I feel that the rhythm, characters, and narrative are very comfortable! But in the subsequent sub-plot, it feels like the author is a bit inexplicably impatient and seems to be twisted together.

There's nothing scary about Ghost Ship at all, it's just a laid-back and boring story.

I was obviously looking forward to it, but I actually rushed out.

What's going on? What's going on? It's already the 4th day, please update soon

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To farm monsters or just to farm monsters? Hollow

As long as these animals are not female, it's fine

The setting is good, but the writing still needs work. The description of the environment needs to be worked on. Some places are all based on imagination, and the dialogue between the characters seems to be quite stiff. In some places, it would be much smoother if you change the description words or fill in the modal particles. There are also descriptions of the transitions between scene changes and dialogue changes. I feel that the language of the article is not polished well. What attracts me and is still reading is the setting, but the setting can be more imaginative and clearer. There can be some contrast between the characters and behaviors, which will be more interesting. The protagonist of Yuantong's new book is also a captain, so you can refer to it. I have also finished reading the author's last book Willow. If that book can be said to have failed to grasp the pacing and run out of inspiration, this book (at least the first dozen chapters) did not seriously polish the plot (including character dialogue, character, image, environment description, daily life, etc.). Between spawning monsters, you can write more daily life and complete some interesting plots that you like to see                                                                                                               Image, environment description, etc.

This novel reminds me of the Starry Railway, and the name Sanqi is so instructive 🙂

Great book! Praise!

I want to see rivers of blood😃

Wow, that's pretty cool. I found out at noon today that I will finish chasing it this afternoon. Marvelous