I'm Really Not a God

B-frame is very important in this type of novel, and the author's control over B-frame is really poor.

{"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New Book Trial Reading"} As we all know, in this strange world, evil gods cannot be summoned casually, but... Why am I the one who is summoned? "On the other side of the white gray mist, is the ancient existence from the stars," "You are the great god who cannot be described, spoken, or listened to," "You are the incarnation of the fire in the world." [Content]: In order to solve the constant whispers in his ears, the male protagonist who came from time-travel decided to try an extraordinary ritual. However, after the ritual was completed, a woman said: "Great Lord of Fire, I am willing to give everything I have to resurrect my daughter!" Let's see how the male protagonist maintains his superiority! [Book title]: I am really not a god [Author]: Writer l2Qrmd [Tag]: Mysterious flow, Pretending to be a tiger and eating a pig, Western fantasy [Status]: Serializing 4. 10,000 Words [Recommendation Index]: 🌟🌟🌟🌟 [Evaluation]: 🌹 Using the male protagonist's initial psychological description as a medium, we unfold the background of this world and a corner of the mysterious training system. 🌹 This book contains many elements that are very similar to Mystery, including extraordinary people, rituals, bathrooms, spiritual seas, forbidden objects, etc. 🌹Although the similarity is relatively high, the author still has his own imagination and wrote his own story, not mindless transfer. And it can be seen that the quality of the article is trying to be closer to the mysterious, and the author is also learning from Cui Yuda's style. 🌹If it can maintain such quality, I highly recommend readers who like mysteries to read this book. [Reader Group] Readers who like Lord of Mysteries; readers who like Western fantasy, Cthulhu, and ideological elements can give this book a try. [Disadvantages]: It is reasonable to guess that the author is a loyal fan of Mystery (I am the same), but can I not use the name Aurore? There is a sense of separation between two people who are obviously not related. [Picture]: Maine Coon cat with cat face mask in the book

Shen Nong's food test, the proper poisonous weed

New authors will always encounter problems on their way to growth, including doubts, disgust, incomprehension, and... Some problems that veteran authors also encounter frequently. There is no way, language and the amplifier effect of the Internet will amplify the emotions contained in the language, and even distort it and become unfriendly. Improve yourself, believe in yourself, avoid blindly following other people's opinions, keep your heart firm, and with a little luck, you will find a treasure one day. May you be blessed with success in the end.

I can't even understand it when I copy it, it feels so inconsistent.

I don't know what is written, nor what the author wants to express. There is no coherent theme at all. It's like plagiarized paragraph by paragraph.

It is recommended that the god should not talk too much to his followers, let alone ridicule or the like, as this will give people no sense of his identity as a god. Even in the early stage of the mystery, in order to obtain information, the protagonist had to contact all kinds of people, and he also maintained a sufficient sense of mystery. The part about the saint you wrote directly dragged the gods to the mud, grinding and grinding. In fact, your book is quite attractive, but this aspect is really not good enough. I think it is better to write a summoning ceremony using sectarian struggle as an introduction than to establish a saint.

Wow, this coolness goes right through the center of the earth.

Don't summon me again, I'm not an evil god [Already turned into a cartoon] Deep Sea Embers, in fact, this is the routine. The protagonist himself is a natural disaster and an evil god. . . It is very scary in the eyes of others. Highly recommend everyone to see Deep Sea Embers. Really awesome

I just came in through a recommendation. I didn't expect to see the eunuch just after I came in.

This protagonist is most likely someone who can't walk when he sees a woman.

These chapters are well written, It should be a new author. Come on^0^~

I can only say that there is nothing B-level about the descending of God, and it is very disappointing.

He's a eunuch, damn (｀Δ´)!

I have seen similar stories before. The author did not make the connection between gods and humans very smooth and full. The way of heaven is ruthless and powerful as hell, while the way of humanity is mediocre. It is not easy to balance both.

Collecting forbidden items, my mind is almost going bald, please save the baby. If you have any good suggestions, you can say them below, in the following format: 1. Name and serial number of the forbidden object 2. Ability: 3. Cost of use (the heavier, the better) 4. Origin of the forbidden object: [ps: Dark direction, weird direction, creatures, items, any imagination will do] Thank you! ! !

What should I say? You wrote the protagonist so well. But the performance of the protagonist is not up to par.

The content is pretty good, good luck to the author. There are a few things that need to be changed. First, when the protagonist turns into a god, he criticizes too much and is too straightforward, and the majesty of being a god is lost. Second, there are a lot of typos. In several places, someone has written a chapter for you to correct me, but they have not been corrected. I feel that this book will become popular as I read it slowly. Typos really affect the perception.