The Master of the Fountain of Youth: Immortality Begins from a Taoist Boy

There is a heroine, but the plot of Death and Blue Ox is the most poisonous point. The appearance of these two plots is somewhat unclear, and the use of the golden finger seems to overwhelm the protagonist. It is considered inferior among those who can read it. It can only be said that it is not considered a poisonous novel.

Personal complaints Other places are fine, but the pet in your last picture made me vomit. First of all, all the resources he needed to transform were given by the protagonist. What right does he have to be angry and blame the protagonist? Secondly, there are definitely not so many people scolding Qingniu for not transforming. You actually transformed in the first place. It can only be said to be a failure. Even if you transform, you still write disgusting things.

The previous article was very good, I stayed up late to follow it. There is a bull coming from behind, it disgusts me to death. This guy eats the protagonist's stuff, takes advantage of the protagonist's stuff, alienates him in various ways, and blames the protagonist.                       ，，，，                                                                                                                                                                               but I keep a dog at home to look after the home and care for the house. This ox is really poisonous. It is so poisonous that even Shen Nong could poison it to death. Even more white-eyed wolf than white-eyed wolf. If I were the protagonist, if this cow doesn't survive one chapter, it will be turned into steak, sprinkled with cumin, and have some beer.        ，，，，， Run away first and come back after the protagonist has finished eating the steak.

Why is it all the same routine? After a short stay, the family will be wiped out and run away.

Now that I have read it, I can see how toxic it is. The protagonist is wonderfully called the middle-aged man. He has countless divine objects and bears the sworn hatred of heaven and earth. However, he is not as perfect as others at the age of 22. The protagonist is also 62 years old and achieves great success. At 82 years old, he forgets the hatred of heaven and has no wisdom. Er, one might say that it is the dregs of heaven and earth, a waste of 60 drops of the divine fountain of youth. One drop can make you 20 years younger. A 20% chance of accumulating experience. Sixty times and sixty defeats. When you first taste it, you will be shocked, shocked, angry, and incurable. In short, it is better to taste the poisonous weed and go away!

The sect is looking good, what will you write after it is destroyed?

The old book is not finished and will not be updated, so I secretly start a new book 🙂

If you keep writing like this, you will probably be close to being a eunuch. Forget about the lack of updates, the quality of the plot has dropped rapidly in the past two days. First, a female protagonist appeared inexplicably (although she was under the guise of practicing law), and then an enemy appeared to take advantage of her and deal damage to her spiritual pet. It doesn't mean that these two plots cannot be written. If the writing is good, you can add more space. If the writing is poor and you have to write it hard, it will be "you have a way to kill yourself." This kind of plot makes readers very frustrated. Changsheng Goudao doesn't just have to be a "real dog" all the time, endure the pain and finally punch the nursing home. If there are not enough updates, we can only quickly skip this plot. For example, Song was recognized for his magic method, and then it disappeared, Xiao Qing actually betrayed him for various reasons, and then the protagonist's red dust method skyrocketed by leaps and bounds. Otherwise, if you are stuck here and feel aggrieved, another group of people will probably have to leave. I wonder what you think of these two plots?

I'm not optimistic about it, saying that I will do it again as a son later. The protagonist is just young and not a different person. How do you know that others can't find out if you don't know Qingxu Palace? In modern times, there are fingerprints and DNA that really rejuvenate people, and even ID cards can't be obtained. What's more, a sect that has been passed down for a long time may directly lock the soul.

There are several books on The Eunuch, will this one be far behind?

The stuff written in the last two chapters has no other purpose than to disgust people and directly kill most of them.

Don't wait, you can't wait for the update

Can the protagonist's heart also become an immortal?

For this book, I commend the author for his courage in updating trends. But it turns out that writing about Eastern martial arts and martial arts is not as good as writing about Western fantasy. The new book is still bad, so you might as well write it back to the wizard, correct the bad parts, and continue writing if your combat power is lost. Most people look at the creativity and foreshadowing. After rounding up the front, you think of the story as opening a new chapter, writing the secret realm, the new world, and the foreshadowing team. Xuexue Wenchaogong, don't let your mentality explode inexplicably. Opening new books for no reason will only continue to consume the patience of new and old readers. I can't support you, and I'm scared when I meet an eunuch, so it's important to have a complete book, especially a proper completion. This is because you haven't become a god yet and have a little fame. You will probably be listed as one of the fifth eunuchs, along with the 'demon monk' 😏

The protagonist has been raising cattle for hundreds of years, and after transforming into a human form, he received the thoughtful education from the protagonist's Taoist companion, and turned out to be a ***.

Screen readers and conscientious authors before putting them on the shelves!

The author's father-in-law has released a new book, so what, is the wizard not right? Keep it and don't change it, cut it off quickly and become your real father-in-law as soon as possible 😳

Author, why don't you go back and write the wizard series? After all, that one is a little more familiar. Both of these two fantasy books were written by you. 😰

It's grandma's, thanks to me I ordered all of it

Are you a eunuch? Very pretty

The setting of your book is really good and the writing is also good. It's just that the trash talk is too much. But if you go and see the Fairy Tower where Bai Yunsheng lives, the waste flow inside is just right. In addition, this article essentially does not break away from the fantasy wizard style of beating monsters and upgrading. Obviously you have stepped out of your own system and found your own bright spot - immortality. If we do not continue to maintain this bright spot, we will continue to expand this system. After finally having a gifted magical power, it is actually related to killing, so why not just choose the killing clouds from before? I really don't agree with the written features, and I'm back to the routine of killing monsters and upgrading. Go back to the general fantasy routine of earning resources to improve your force, and improving your force to better earn resources. No highlights. This is also the third point I want to make. It is clear that we can write about the magical powers of Ganxuan Creation and the Flower Blooming Moment that truly have the characteristics of immortals. They are no longer limited to killing monsters and upgrading. It can even be written as an interesting supernatural power that makes you immortal by eating a bite of meat. Or creating life, etc. This is not much more interesting than fighting monsters. In the final analysis, I still haven't gotten out of the wizard's trap. But one thing is really good, I can see the humanity and the hero. I hope I can reconsider it. Also, there is another question. Very big problem. You seem to be planning to write a novel using a template. I will repeat it once for about thirty chapters, and again for more than thirty pictures. The whole article is a routine of apprenticeship, changing maps, continuing apprenticeship, and changing maps.

The truth

? ? ? ? A eunuch? ? ? ?

One thing to say, this book is really well written. I really felt the excitement of Xianxia. It feels like I first read a fairy tale more than ten years ago.

Speechless, I'm a eunuch again. I've read four books and I'm still a eunuch.