I Build a Coffin in the Human World and Invite the Immortals to Die

It's okay before the 30th chapter, but then it turns into a white text, and it's just a show-off. It's extremely boring and uninteresting. (My reward of 100 points is for the first 30 chapters. (Especially the story of the Queen of Qingyun Sect) The style is still the same after that. I won't read it again. I hope some authors will remember a sentence (you write books for readers, not yourself)

Brother, if you don't use this, you can basically just copy and paste my book title? Same goes for Introduction and Goldfinger, is that too much?

Just like the Horse-mounted Fire Mist Warrior, it comes with its own seal, which is simply outrageous.

It's too big, I wonder if the author can handle it

What the hell is the plot of Qingyun Sect about? I kept skipping to watch it, but I felt like I couldn't understand it, I couldn't understand it at all. It's exactly what the hot reviewer said, just the first 30 chapters. You can take a look at the back and it's always in the water, and it's so annoying even when you're fucking jumping.

If you choose to be a demon, don't try to become a righteous person later. The world view is huge. You need to write two to three million words. Otherwise, this subject matter will be in vain.

You're pretending to be cool, and you haven't finished pretending for more than ten chapters. Is this moving closer to the Dog Thief? The Second Generation of God, right?

The Qingyun Sect's story about accepting a disciple and pretending to be a slap in the face made me want to vomit. I suggest the author speed up this story too much.

Is this book going to be updated every day? ? Still chasing a hammer.

I put it on the bookshelf first. Now is not the time to read it. There are too few articles.

Forget it, eunuch, it's early. What's all this stuff? The people watching are confused.

How can I put it this way? The plug-ins are very well written, but the training system is lame. It is incomparable to the Taoist Master Fang Xian who I have studied recently. Not to mention anything else, the flying speed is only about the same as that of an airplane? Other people's homes are like a flash of light, traveling thousands of miles in an instant. You need wings to fly. It's really too much. It is recommended that the author update the practice system. Don't write like that. Write more magical powers and spells, and don't dance with swords and sticks all day long, just like a martial artist. Such a big plug-in is for nothing

Come on, come on, I like to watch the big ones

After Chapter 8, are there two Chapter 9? Still haven't written the chapter title? Be serious, it's easy for people to think that you want to run away and become a father-in-law.