League: Who Asked Him to Be the Coach!

What's the use of this system? I feel like it's a big hang-up after using it. No need to use it. The protagonist is a complete waste. If you often watch lpl games, I don't think it's difficult to be a coach before going back to S9. Grasp the answers to the version, practice a few routines, and collect talented young players in advance

Um, this is strange. Is the protagonist a local? Are you planning to write a local plus system? The description of the protagonist is that he formed a team with his seniors and won a small championship, and then it was gone.

The idea of ​​this book comes from the basketball article "Coach, I Don't Want to Retire Yet". The template is basically copied from the great master Linhe Xianyuweng.

If you set up a system and messed up about 10 chapters, the book is basically finished.

When it comes to e-sports articles, I prefer to use the system to improve myself, rather than directly cheating. The author wants to be lazy or simply doesn't understand →_→

The setting problem is really too big, especially the system's influence on reality is really outrageous. It's better to start by taking the blame. Tampering with reality is really disgusting.

The system is too complicated. You write things for readers to see, not for your own pleasure. One team member completed dozens of projects, and his head was dizzy.

This book is written like a game world controlled by the system, and the sense of reality and immersion plummets Originally, you said that the system strengthens your various abilities as a coach, which is fine, but it turns out that your system directly forcibly controls reality. At a glance, it is judged as: Pounce!

I've been talking nonsense, I've been talking nonsense, I've read Chapter 4 and I'm still talking nonsense in my heart. Is there more than 3 lines of dialogue in Chapter 3? If you don't know how to write a novel, don't write it. It's really disgusting.

Is this a novel? Although writing Snake Squad makes people want to read it, I always feel that the plot is not going forward and there is a lot of nonsense.

It's either water or water. After reading the first 10 chapters, it's all water. Thank you, I'm not drowning anymore.

There are too few interesting points and too few exciting points, so it is difficult to retain readers. Without a basic base, it is easy to become eunuchs. Then the character conflicts are very ordinary and there is no sense of enjoyment. It is recommended to write some plots with a strong sense of conflict, add a little off-field conflict, or a slap in the face story about running to another competition area to be a coach. The system settings are not as interesting as the other two books, "Manager" and "I Don't"

It clicks together. Open your mouth from ear to ear. Blue mouth and white tongue. White arms slightly blemished.

All water

After reading Chapter 12, I'm still throwing around system settings. The pace is so slow.

The system of this book. . . It feels very similar to the book "Coach, I Don't Want to Retire", both of which manipulate reality, skills, data, and simulation.

Update quickly

Can B with this posture be a professional? He can't

It's all rubbish, it's so rubbish.