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Xiaoguai has become something good, and some people are writing novels about him.
Take what happened in reality and retell it in a novel, and it becomes your novel? What does today's two chapters have to do with yourself? Obviously a title can convey the plot that everyone knows, but it still doesn't focus on the story of the pig's feet.
I hope that in the future we will not have incorrect views
I hope that the three views are correct, such as assisting the disgusting shooter, not like a digger anchor, and also the Yin and Yang strange shooter.
Damn water
I almost finished 300, but I'm still in the league. I haven't been to a single World Championship, and I haven't even finished the league.
What I think is unreasonable about the league article is that one can live broadcast every day and be eloquent and prosperous, but he still has to endure hardships in the profession. These two cannot coexist in the first place. If you are a professional player, you should rarely broadcast and not be very good at live broadcasting. Otherwise, you should always broadcast and never play professionally.
There is a lot of nonsense, and there is a suspicion of cleaning stains, so I say goodbye.
Not to mention, Tu Yile is still interesting.
The pace is too slow. A B5 game requires seven or eight chapters, which makes me tired.
I have written so much about the Old Man Cup before it starts. If you write about the game content in such detail, then if you write a lot of details in the early stage, you must create an achievement to improve the level. Without positive feedback, I can't stand it. I saved 10 chapters and read them as if I hadn't read them. I played two games and ran 5 kilometers. My skills haven't improved at all, but I'm still a lousy person.
The time is 2024, please pay attention
Good
Don't take black traffic, don't take all contestants' traffic. Only the part about loving Loli is uncertain in the book because I don't know him well. However, there were indeed contradictions in that period of reality. Players you like can interact more, and players you don't like should stay away and don't get black traffic. Write with positive energy and just work hard step by step. As for the comments saying "wash", it's just some players' black pieces, or others' white pieces. Most readers should still be ordinary viewers.
Author, you don't understand what you want to write
Either you write a genius boy at the beginning, and you write it from the beginning to being invincible, but then you write a loser who has difficulty in laning in the beginning. You rely on a team to play, and now you use golden fingers to madly strengthen the protagonist's strength. Don't you feel disconnected? The style of the protagonist before and after is too big. Who is here to see you?
Mixed school in the canyon... B, that Malphite is up?
It's so uncomfortable to chase. I haven't even finished 5 chapters. There are too few updates. The protagonist feels invisible all the time. I chase it every day and wait for the update. After reading it, I haven't read it and the content is boring.
The pace is too slow. The protagonist has a very good personality (but sometimes too... Humble? But there is no big problem.) I feel that the biggest problem is that the pace is too slow. Also, the operation of 78 and the reaction of 90 are not to say the best. At least it is the best match for the top laner of the second team. Because there is a very important point - players with big hearts. The protagonist can exert 100% of his abilities every time.
Surprisingly good
I have read a lot of lol novels. Most of the protagonists are geniuses, fighting their way through the novel. It is rare to see a book that spends a lot of space to write about the growth process in such detail. Although the pace is slow, I like it very much. Come on, it will be better if the problem of too many typos can be corrected.
As soon as you become a professional, you should quickly improve your protagonist's strength.
Outlook
It's pretty good, that is to say, the follow-up is a little narrower around the main plot, so the events should be written as somewhat connected as possible, without being too superficial. The whole story of running the marathon with Uzi can establish the character of the protagonist in the past two years. You have to go to the arena with such a character, but in fact, the essence of e-sports writing is also urban, just a bond. So a bonus point is what kind of bond the protagonist's character establishes with us readers. Once the character is established, the game has been clearly understood. Once the game has been understood, the protagonist can do what he wants to do in the e-sports environment to show the arc of the character. For now, we are competing for the sake of the event, and it is even on the opposite side of the main line; of course, if the whole marathon is not the main line, it is okay. That means I didn't understand what the author wrote at all. So please let the author think about it. I think there are many people like me, and if I continue to write in such a chaotic way, I won't be able to retain readers like me. The author also asks to respect himself
Forget about water, there are too few updates, only two chapters a day and a total of 2,000 words. How can you write four thousand words for such a stupid thing?
The so-called mixed race is the knowledge that you can get good grades by lying down. As long as your reputation is big enough, someone will write a novel about you.
Watching this WE game is more exciting than novels
Why do I feel like watching the game is more enjoyable than reading the novel?
Then it won't be another summer split to the S-Split to win the championship directly. It's not that I look down on the road from substitute to championship, but I don't know how to put it. I feel that the hard work in the core has gradually been devalued.
The beginning of the writing is messy, rambling here and there.
Dude, I came to see you write about lol, but at the beginning, you wrote about running and then about going to someone else's live broadcast room to reminisce about the past and miss your youth. The rhythm is messy.
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