The Doomsday Cruise

There are a lot of small flaws. The first plot was too delayed and took fifty chapters to write in two days. If you have an important plot, it doesn't matter. The key is that your almost flat plot is not suitable. Another encounter with an otaku is too long. There is no need to describe the mini-plot in such detail. Besides, it's only chapter fifty, bro, and now six women appear.

As soon as the virus started to spread, we already knew the route of transmission, the mode of infection, and that antibodies would decay with age. How awesome is that? Time traveler?

A lot of nonsense about the end of the world 🤫

After reading the latest chapter, I would like to share my personal opinions. The first is that the plot advances too slowly, with more than fifty chapters written in less than two days. The second is that the description of the fight is too detailed, and it lasts for more than ten chapters. I don't know how other people feel. Anyway, I just jumped away because it was a little annoying. The key battles can be described in detail, but there is no need to write them all. Is it easy for visual fatigue?

The author is so powerful that a child has a lightning ball. You can't use it when it's the protagonist's turn. Really poisonous, bye bye

This book cover feels like a work from 20 years ago

I suddenly discovered a few days ago that fire axes are not edged, and fire buckets are just made of iron sheets. So, even a kitchen knife is better than a fire axe. If it's not a construction site in a big city, you can't find a sharpened axe.

It's a good book. The plot is reasonable and the characters' IQs are online. The cruise ship environment is novel.

Chapter 13 was full of nonsense, and I didn't write about this or introduce that at one time. I was not in the mood to read it. There was too much nonsense and pig's feet.

I have read dozens of chapters and I don't have the patience to continue reading. Farewell