Doomsday Cruise

The subject matter is very good. The author said it would be connected to the above, so I went back and watched the first part. There is a big bug. The names of Jingshan and Lu Shuai are repeated so much that it doesn't matter, but in the second part that develops according to the timeline, the timeline is messed up. The first part is from 2022-2023, and the second part is very closely connected, but the time is adjusted to 2010.

There are a lot of small flaws. The first plot was too delayed and took fifty chapters to write in two days. If you have an important plot, it doesn't matter. The key is that your almost flat plot is not suitable. Another encounter with an otaku is too long. There is no need to describe the mini-plot in such detail. Besides, it's only chapter fifty, bro, and now six women appear.

As soon as the virus started to spread, we already knew the route of transmission, the mode of infection, and that antibodies would decay with age. How awesome is that? Time traveler?

A lot of nonsense about the end of the world 🤫

After reading the latest chapter, I would like to share my personal opinions. The first is that the plot advances too slowly, with more than fifty chapters written in less than two days. The second is that the description of the fight is too detailed, and it lasts for more than ten chapters. I don't know how other people feel. Anyway, I just jumped away because it was a little annoying. The key battles can be described in detail, but there is no need to write them all. Is it easy for visual fatigue?

The author is so powerful that a child has a lightning ball. You can't use it when it's the protagonist's turn. Really poisonous, bye bye

It's a good book. The plot is reasonable and the characters' IQs are online. The cruise ship environment is novel.

This book cover feels like a work from 20 years ago

I suddenly discovered a few days ago that fire axes are not edged, and fire buckets are just made of iron sheets. So, even a kitchen knife is better than a fire axe. If it's not a construction site in a big city, you can't find a sharpened axe.

Concentrate on the poisonous points in the introduction, it will last a long time.

Yao Yao

Gao Yuanyuan

Chapter 13 was full of nonsense, and I didn't write about this or introduce that at one time. I was not in the mood to read it. There was too much nonsense and pig's feet.

I have read dozens of chapters and I don't have the patience to continue reading. Farewell

After reading Chapter 15 and reading Huo Da, I struggled to write down everything in detail, but in the end it felt like there was no focus.

The writing is too detailed and a bit cumbersome. I suggest that the fighting part be simplified based on the current situation. It will be much better.

Gu Chengxiang

It's been a long time since I've read an article that's still interesting without driving. The description of the fight is also very detailed. Come on, author, I'll keep reading.

[Recommendation]: This is a world in which only people with type O blood can survive. The existence of the protagonist Lu Shuai breaks this rule and triggers a series of eye-catching events and mysteries in this world full of crises and unpredictable events. Follow Lu Shuai's footsteps and work hard to survive. [Brief Description of the Work]: The protagonist Lu Shuai woke up from his sleep, but unexpectedly fell into a doomsday crisis. He was horrified to find that his beloved girlfriend had turned into a terrifying zombie. The scene in front of me was even more horrifying. The entire cruise ship seemed to have become a kingdom ruled by zombies. His first priority is to survive. {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New book trial reading"} [Work information] ： Book title: Doomsday Cruise Author: Chong Bao Onion Type: Science Fiction - Doomsday Crisis Tags: Doomsday, Evolution, Super Power, Passionate Blood, Decisive Killing Word Count: 100,000 words, serialized Medium evaluation: seedlings, grain [Recommendation Index]: ★★★★☆ [Recommendation Group]: People who like apocalyptic novels, people who like passionate novels [Highlights]: 1. Compared with the increasingly weakened or even harmless works on the market, the beginning is a strong drug, and when you wake up, it is the doomsday, with zombies right in front of you, directly leading readers to witness the cruel apocalypse. 2. The system is a very traditional apocalyptic system, which uses crystal nuclei from zombies to enhance abilities. Compared with the traditional system, the current strength and future potential of zombies are determined based on human blood types. This makes the future layout much larger. For example, will zombies that escape the setting be stronger? 3. For readers who like multiple female protagonists, this is an absolute bonus. A beautiful girl is saved in the first few chapters, and there is a female star in dozens of chapters. According to the routine of doomsday novels, that is, the domineering president must be embraced, the special female soldier king protects him, and the world is full of girls. [Disadvantages]: Personally, although the beginning of the chapter is about the end of the world, which is very violent and exciting, it gives people a feeling that the progress is too fast, as if everything is like the wind, and the apocalypse occurs when you wake up, the female companion turns into a zombie, the beautiful girl is calling for help, and you are chopping zombies in a daze, and saving people in a daze, there is no To join in the observation of the surrounding environment, it is best not to start with the female companion, but to get up and breathe fresh air. When you arrive on the boat corridor, you will find a strange tourist. After you find something wrong with him, you turn around to find the female companion and give you some buffering time. You think you have escaped and relaxed, but after locking the door, you find that your female companion has also mutated. And it rushed towards him, with thrills and excitement like a roller coaster.

These 8 days depend on the chapter names. They are basically rebirths. If it doesn't work, forget about it. The dozen dollars I spent will be wasted.

Brother, I can't even search for your new book at the starting point. I have to search for your author's name.

I can't stop typing, typing, typing, author, you might as well write fantasy, it's better to write the old one and it's reasonable.

Bored, I want to see the river of blood!

It looks good. Please check for updates and put it on the shelves as soon as possible. Full subscription support.

The writing is pretty good, and the updates are okay, but it's still not good enough. I like the author's voice style.

The book is good. Let's change the name! Not only can't I find it, but the name is too old-fashioned... A popular book title twenty years ago

7 Female supporting characters, 2 female protagonists and 6 female protagonists. How many chapters are there now?

Forehead. A little speechless. I can't stand it, I don't know why. I don't know if it's not exciting or if it's just too plain and ordinary. The plot is a little bit clumsy. You can actually dissect things when you make a movie. I can't understand these inexplicable plots. Then why don't you make a Superman? People in the native world have a poor sense of immersion. Following the rules and working hard in the end is too simple. I didn't see anything cool. Maybe your so-called powerful golden finger is in the later stage. Anyway, I had no chance to meet him. I can only hold on until I turn over the beef jerky to fill my stomach.

It is very difficult to find a post-apocalyptic novel with an online IQ. This book looks pretty good at this stage.

Please update it quickly. Only a few dozen chapters are enough for anyone to read. Write quickly. Even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this.