The Final Dawn

The ideas and insights are good. Personal guessing is that this article tends to be a setting article. The description of the development of events did not attract me, and I did not have a strong sense of expectation. However, the setting of the revival of mythology and the ascension of gods in the new era is very good. Personally, I feel that it can be more detailed and divided into god systems of different mythological systems. Including the World Tree system that specializes in Nordic gods, the Olympus system that specializes in Greek gods, the Takamagahara system that specializes in Japanese gods, the Chinese mountain and sea system and the thirty-three-day system, as well as the Indian Pure Land system. Of course, you can also change the old god system of ancient gods and the new god system of self-created gods in the new era. After dividing the camps, there will be conflicts and there will be more expectations. And the author likes to play with jokes. If it is stitched, it can be changed and blended. It can be seen that the author tried hard to make the content of the article interesting. So learn to whet the reader's appetite and provide conflict and the needs of the protagonist. At present, the protagonist's current need is to treat his sister's leg. The author can remind readers from time to time.

There are also foreshadowings by the author, and it is not necessary to mention the pitfalls. The readers can make their own guesses. As the plot develops, the answers will naturally be given and the pitfalls will be filled. It can be seen that the author is immature because it is his first time writing a book, but he still wants to say, go for it.

Source of inspiration: It is not difficult to see that this novel has the shadow of many famous novels by writers, such as Teacher Jiangnan's Dragon Clan, such as Teacher Fengyue's Apocalypse Forecast, and some unpopular works. Whether it is my writing style or the description of the characters' bad situations, they are all references. It is also mixed with some Japanese comics, such as Lelouch of the Rebellion, etc. Finally, I would like to thank everyone who reads my novel. Even though everyone may be a robot, the handful of recommendation votes and collections every day are the motivation for me to continue writing. 2023.6.10

Let me give you a suggestion, don't explain too much, don't dig too long a hole. Just have a main line, don't have too many branch lines, it is easy to lose the subscription. Don't follow those parallel imports. After one chapter, you only have three sentences and the rest is explained. It's very annoying. When you start, most readers will figure it out on their own.