Swallowed Star: Divine Powers of Flesh and Blood

If you see the part about distributing one's essence blood, there's no point in reading further. It's another babysitting story. While it's acceptable for the protagonist, as an Earthling, to offer some assistance, writing it this way is incredibly stupid. In the world of Swallowed Star, cultivating a powerful individual in one place can drive the development of the entire race.

Let me talk about Lei Heng's background. People always say that the protagonist is Indian, that Lei Shen is of mixed Chinese and Indian descent, that his father is Chinese, and that Lei Shen grew up in China and was deeply influenced by Chinese culture. All of this is written in the original work.

The protagonist's personality, or rather the author's plot, creates a very unpleasant feeling. One minute he wants to avoid crossing the Heavenly Bridge, the next he wants to cross it to show off; one minute he wants to cultivate both time and space, the next he doesn't, constantly going back and forth and dragging his feet. He can't seem to get things going, and to make matters worse, the author is quite good at padding the story.

It's not that the author's writing is bad, it's just that I'm aesthetically fatigued. Almost every Devouring fanfic starts from Earth, it's so boring (>ω<). So boring.

This is the dumbest fanfiction about Pangu I've ever read. It's about Pangu's legacy, but the protagonist is so weak, and the story is incredibly padded. What kind of nonsense is this?

It's a pity such a good idea. The author's writing skills need improvement.

I remember in the Genius Battle, everyone was at the Stellar Stage 9. The protagonist's strong physical talent didn't seem to give him an advantage. But even with his body restricted, his power generation technique should still be very strong, yet this aspect wasn't highlighted at all.

Wow, that's really something! A golden finger is given out right from the start!

I'd like to know where Pangu's cultivation level would rank in *Swallowing the Stars*. I'd agree with classifying Pangu as a Void True God, the so-called strongest being in the universe—someone who could create a small universe from chaos after leaving the original universe. Or perhaps the level of the ruler of the Jin Kingdom.

With such a vast universe, wouldn't it be better to use your imagination and create your own opportunities? The more you insist on following the original text, the less you appreciate it.