Cultivating Immortality for Eternal Life: Farming in the System Space

I feel that the author is still too young and has insufficient experience. This kind of white text is suitable for readers who are 20 years old or younger. Many of them are old readers. The simple concept cannot be read and there is no sense of substitution. I recommend the author to refer to Infinite Flow to see how the master builds the world view and character image. The shortcomings of your novel are that it is too bland, the good guys are too good, the villain is not dark enough, or it is too special to only conflict.

That colorful real person's head is broken? Because the junior asked to fight to the death with Bai Lao The normal ancestor saw that choice Just slap Liu Yiyuan to death with one palm, right? It is so stupid for a family member to ignore the family and go out to cause trouble Don't talk about the flow of resources to cultivate immortality.

The ten-day soul-chasing spell... I don't know what you think. It's not enough to just hide in space. You have to rely on foundation building to hide from the golden elixir spell, and you have to be hunted down once.

There is nothing wrong with the plot of the novel. I feel that the author has written little, or is too young and has not experienced much social beating. Many plots give me the feeling that there is no precaution against immortal cultivators. Rich couples in the world of immortality will fight to the death if they have even the slightest connection to the law. Even just suspicion is enough reason to kill you 🤫🤫

It looks okay. Even the pills in this world of cultivation are too cheap. For example, for the Foundation Establishment Pill, the pill recipe and ingredients cost less than 1,000 spirit stones. This is still 10 copies after adding other pill recipes and ingredients. Every time I see how easy it is to refine some precious elixirs in other novels, it makes me laugh. After reading too many novels about cultivating immortals, I always assume that these pills are expensive 🤤

The writing is okay, there are no poisonous points, but there is one complaint, which may be annoying depending on the person, and that is the unexpected lethality of this farming golden finger. However, the protagonist did not develop the golden finger in the killing direction. It is known that except for spiritual plants and the protagonist's life, entering the system's farming space will be wiped out. There are no restrictions on the protagonist's entry and exit. He can bring other lives into the space. Obviously, the king's rule is to allow the protagonist to farm with peace of mind and have a safe house. But I actually posted a complaint, so I will start with the evil usage, 1. Different Space Secret Room Instant Kill Let the protagonist sneak up on the target and then throw it directly into the farming space to be wiped out by the system. After all, the loot will remain after the wipe. The corpse is used as fertilizer. If it is not handled well and will expose oneself, all the gadgets will be stored in the space, making the enemy look confused and GG. I guess they can't even react to self-destruction, at least in the middle and low-end stages. I'm not afraid of most of the tracking and revenge secrets. After all, one is obliterated by the system, the second protagonist is in reality, and the enemy is in the farming space. If you can still find the protagonist, it means a plot killing. Of course, you are not afraid of group fights. After all, getting close is an instant kill, and you still lead people to disappear. As long as you are not crushed, I estimate that the life and death battle will be over after the protagonist kills with his automatic hands, and there is no need for the protagonist to use his automatic hands to kill. It's a brainstorm. Just send the fat sheep into the space to be used as fertilizer; besides, just pick a random motive-free crime in the wild, and the early snowball progress will definitely be very fast The main character's skill build is based on stealth, speed, shield breaking, defense, and durability. The purpose is to approach the target secretly and let the system kill him, and then get the loot without damage I will give my own build a base game 1 0 points, 7 points in the middle game, and 4 points in the high-end game. A god who snowballed and accumulated original resources in the early stage. After the plunder in the early stage, in theory, he is no longer short of money and basic materials, herbs, pills, etc., But is short of treasures. Therefore, although he is still a god who kills people and steals goods, the treasures are generally in the hands of people with some power or background. I estimate that he will offend many people in the long run. After all, how can the plot advance without offending people? , The problem in the later stage is how to sneak attack. After all, there are not many people in the high-end game. Whether the system can quickly wipe it out is a matter, let alone the high-end game. The intelligence is probably leaked. They are guarding the protagonist. You have to be careful not to be killed instantly. In the high-end game, the enemy's methods are starting to be difficult to guard against. Do you have any interesting evil ways to use?

All systematic papers that can speak are defenses.

It's really quite mediocre, with no highlights. But nothing too poisonous. It's just that some of the conflicts are too deliberate. The overall feeling is good.

It should be fair and steady. You should write clearly, such as the alchemy process and the cultivation process. Farming in the main space is a selling point, but apart from spiritual rice and other grass, I can't see anything else... Another point is that there is alchemy in alchemy, so farming is not necessary? Are rice and wheat the same growing method? I can only say that the author has a story in his mind and his writing is fluent, but the logic is not very rigorous... The above is purely a personal opinion and may not be adopted... Don't criticize

Doesn't the protagonist learn any skills except farming and alchemy? Gou Dao also needs to learn skills.