Cultivation of Immortality: Start from the Ocean

Yang Xiaoyao, when I saw this name, I had no desire to read on. Just like Long Aotian, I suggested changing the name.

The monthly ticket is not given to you because the monks of Zifu have a bunch of Qi-training monks. The island owner needs to exchange resources for a foundation-building array mage. In order to highlight the protagonist, the high-level monks are really intimidating and useless. A group of foundation-building monsters have to be in a tight formation, and the island owner Zifu's big monks have to sit in the center. To put it bluntly, in your book, the big monks feel like the difference between the eighth and ninth levels of Qi training. You must talk about the resource blockade and the island's initial construction. But look at what you wrote. The peak of qi training is the captain of the inspection team. Zi Mansion does not have a foundation to build a force. He leads a group of qi training monks to build it. Even if he is old and dead, the force can't help him.

Wenzhao Gong's Gou ranked first in troubled times, which shows that there is still a huge market for mortals. The settings of the book are very popular. Don't talk about relationships, keep a distance from women, stud horses, don't join a sect, stay away from high-level monks, and don't attract their attention.

Well written, the protagonist takes one step at a time; The road is long and the road is far away I hope the author can go further and not add weird women into the mix So far, the characters are well portrayed

The Story of a Mortal Cultivating Immortality requires 6 to 700,000 words to become popular. If everyone were a mortal like you, I don't know how many times the book would have been cut.

This book is okay, but can you clarify the details clearly? Can you clarify these titles such as Zifu Great Nong, Jindan Qi, Jindan Elder, Jindan Zhenren, Jindan Great Nong, Yuanying Zhenjun, Yuanying Mighty, Yuanying Zhenren, and Incarnation Zhenjun? The names I heard during my Qi training period were enough to make me dizzy. Will I encounter more names after I establish my foundation? 😅😅😅

(｡･∀･)ﾉﾞIt's a waste of emotion. The threshold for writing books now is too low, so there are too many people, and the competition is too fierce. To be honest, I can't accept it. It's still okay to read the book. It's a pity to cut it. If you want to write a hit, it depends on luck and strength. It would be better to finish all the books and gain a group of readers without relying on luck. At the same time, you can practice your writing skills and achieve faster success.

Isn't this the same thing as that black fish one?

Have you been writing plots and not updating? Chapter 41 is still about practicing Qi. When will the Golden Pill Yuan Ying become a god and so on be written?

Cutting the book casually, switching to a vest and continuing to open the book is just a lie to yourself. Editors actually know that. The best thing to do is to write it until 30-50 minutes after it is put on the shelves, finish it, start over from scratch for the second part, and sign the contract in minutes. Attitude is required. The kind of students who get good grades and cut off their studies right away have basically no way out.

Great book! Praise!

Okay, good, very interesting, come on

It's a good novel. The Golden Finger is not too big, and there is good room for development. For example, in the future, I will start a transvestite resource exchange business. The protagonist is brave and resourceful. I hope that I will not be too holy in the future. One general will succeed and all bones will be withered. I feel that in the fairy world, it is mainly a matter of competition. If you are not ruthless, you will not be able to stand.

The subject matter is good. I haven't read it yet. I'll comment after reading it.

If you want to be a role player, you can provide your name, personality, specialties and other information. I will choose one based on the situation, and I can't guarantee whether it's a good guy or a bad guy.

Tags: Xianxia, ​​time travel, mortal flow Recommendation: The world view of this book is mainly based on the map of the sea. The protagonist's IQ is basically online, and there are almost no brainless or bloody plots. It mainly describes the story of the protagonist's identity as a casual cultivator at the beginning of the game, and his rise step by step from the bottom. Goldfinger is relatively reasonable, not too cheating, and has great array talent. Although the plot is relatively bland, it's pretty good. But it is a bit unreasonable to write about the rogue cultivators. Although the rogue cultivators will be suppressed by the sect, even if the sect can defeat the rogue cultivators, they will suffer heavy losses later. I hope the author can improve it! Recommendation index: 4 stars Book title: Cultivation of Immortality: Starting from the Ocean Author: Morning Melon {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New Book Trial Reading"}

What should I say The details are not appropriate You summarize it briefly You have to write out the protagonist's cultivation process I read dozens of pictures You didn't write a word It's all plot Is this a writing problem?

The name of this pig's trotter is too funny🤐

The plot is good and the characterization is nuanced, but what I want to watch more is the treasure hunt in the ocean.

I feel that the most important thing for a new author is to write a book completely, from the beginning, to the development, and finally to the end, otherwise various problems will easily arise. At the same time, another point is not to have too many settings. Even if it is a new genre by an old author, if you introduce too many new settings, the results will easily be unsatisfactory.

I've read a few chapters in the beginning and it's okay. The basic narrative is smooth and the writing is okay. It's not wordy or ink-stained. I'll read more and then write.

Your Neptune plug-in seems to be of no use at all!

The author's writing is quite good, it's a pity that the eunuch is