After Being Reborn, He Was Conquered

The writing style is very delicate, and the daily writing is also very interesting. It doesn't feel messy. There should be an outline, and the subject matter is also rare. I hope to torture 😭 but don't use a knife 😭 Ai Xin is in great form at the moment. I hope there will be more interactions with other female protagonists. Finally, the author must pay attention to his health. If he is not dead, he will update soon 😌

To be honest, the most attractive thing here is how to undo the harm caused by the heroine in the previous life to the male protagonist. Especially Chen Wanyao has the greatest and most important impact on the male protagonist. However, many authors in similar novels have reconciled the male and female protagonists inexplicably, which made me a little speechless.

The biggest attraction of this type is that the person you licked in the previous life is now licking you. To torture her, you have to torture her severely, but it is no longer fun to make up with her for no reason. It is very depressing to not be able to express this tone.

Readers told the author one thing. This kind of novel is about the charm of maturity, not about love. To be honest, it would look good if the mature protagonist still does what he should do in his previous life and helps where he should. However, if he just enjoys his youth, it is best to write a character who is similar to a passerby heroine, and then give up getting close to other heroines. Then, the other female protagonists discovered that after removing the colored glasses (the dog-licking protagonist), it turned out that the male protagonist had done so much. From the beginning, the system was dominated by the system, and now he was dominated by people. This has two exciting points (love story + regret story), which is enough for you to write 200 chapters. If you want to write a long story, you have to add travel (that is, changing the map + chasing your husband and crematorium). To be honest, the author is probably a newbie, and I have seen a lot of imitations of old works. You can't do this. The value of your counter-routine lies in innovation.

Will I still be a licking dog after rebirth? ? ? Others played with you casually in your previous life, but will they still manipulate you casually in this life? When you act coquettishly, your favorability level soars. In your previous life, you lived for decades in vain. Anyone can lead you by the nose. How can you be reincarnated?

Whether there is Shen Nong or not, I read about 20 or so pictures and found that they are different from the ones in the comment area. The protagonist does not seem to be reborn, and he is too kind to them. Plus, he is talking about survival. Personally, I think... What about the subsequent plot?

I can only say 6. The male protagonist and the female protagonist are all reborn. Several female protagonists played with the male protagonist's feelings in the previous life. In the new life, the female protagonists are tied to the death system. Only by conquering the male protagonist can the death system be eliminated. On the contrary, the male protagonist has zero affection for the host. The host dies. The male protagonist is frustrated with the female protagonists because his emotions were played on in the previous life. It's only chapter 50, and I don't know whether the heroine will try to get rid of the hero again, or whether the heroine will change the hero and turn him into a crematorium for chasing her husband.

Suggestions for the author: First of all, the author is a newcomer. The most important thing for a newcomer is the accumulation of writing. Only a large number of popular works can grow. However, I still very much hope that the author can write this first book well. The new book must be interesting to retain readers. I would like to give some suggestions: Pig's feet should have its own career line, which is the main line of Pig's feet, and then intersperse the heroine's strategy into the main line of Pig's feet (must not mess it up, the primary and secondary are clear), and then give the heroine several branching nodes to change her attitude toward Pig's feet. After all, the audience of this book is male fans➕singles, and the ending should not be too poisonous, such as hurting the male protagonist's feelings for a second time (the author has to control the change of the female protagonist at this point, because it is a new book, so I suggest that the length of the book should not be too long, and quality should replace quantity, so these nodes can be written early. If it takes too long, readers will abandon the book, after all, the new author). Then guide the strategy from the system to the strategy by yourself, and then come to the most exciting point in the book, the crematorium for chasing husbands, which is the most important! ! ! One thing needs to be written well, you can refer to other big guys 😁

After reading this, I just feel that there is an indescribable estrangement between the character and performance of the male protagonist. He is a very rare weak chicken and soft egg type. In almost all incidents, he is skillfully at a disadvantage, or skillfully turns his advantage into a disadvantage. In the "rebirth of the male protagonist", except for a few places where a little more information is provided for the male protagonist, in other places the male protagonist's behavior and mentality are no different from ordinary boys of eighteen or nineteen. He always "doesn't raise any suspicion" about some abnormal situations. Compared with the several female protagonists who were reborn together, they have lived for more than ten years in vain.

Personally, I think it's a bit too much to just die if you can't win the game. It would be better to change it so that each heroine has regrets to make up for, or the time and space she travels back to is about to die, and if you can't win the game, you'll be kicked back.

I still hope the male protagonist can be tougher

Don't remember the previous plot at all, MD has been living together for a year without even kissing? The ultimate dog licker? The ultimate green turtle who takes care of other people's wives. I feel sick and vomited, what the hell?

Isn't this writing very good? Why did you cut it?

Halfway through, I realized something was wrong. As soon as I read the ending, I knew it was a mess.

Ah, something is not good, something is not good, it is coming out,

Brothers don't want eunuchs, there are still people watching!

There must be something wrong with this author. His childhood sweethearts are like that. How can you still lick Emma?