Mythology Revived: I Can Enter the Primordial Wasteland at the End of the World

I just read the comments, and I want to ask if the following routine is not suitable for martial arts - Goldfinger 1 - The foundation has changed - One by one, stick to martial arts - One family sells iron to support - - - The changes in the school are eye-catching - The villain appears in the early stage - Fight wits and courage with the villain - Fight the younger ones to the older ones - One by one, the tricks before the exam or during the exam are extraordinary, attracting the attention of colleges and universities, and the college entrance examination is over - Go to the college road one by one Encountered a villain/monster attack on the road, and fought back magnificently--arrived at the high school 😒

There is a problem with the setting logic. It seems that the author wants to write the reality into the world after the prehistoric times and relate it to history. But in this way, history will be stretched out, and the prehistoric world can be calculated in units of hundreds of millions of years. In modern history, the Three Sovereigns and Five Emperors were only a few thousand years old. Red Maodong's new book for reference? Do you also want to get a Immortal? The prehistoric world is not a planet, and it is not as big as that planet. On a cosmic scale, the earth is nothing. Why do we want to cause trouble on the earth? Does the star sun have a golden crow? Does every star have it? The setting at the beginning was pretty good, with a different prehistoric theme.

This book is a steady and steady type (currently updated to 50 chapters) I can read it, the plot is very stable, there are no ups and downs so far, no pitfalls (the plot is poisonous) and no climax (personal opinion) Stable, um... Stable... Gone... This kind of stability... Is quite rare in these novels nowadays... But this is a novel, and your writing is really stable... Looking at the current situation, the poisonous points have been avoided. For example, no one cares about buying coffins, and no one reports suspected drug use... Wait The climax has also been avoided (personal opinion): The description of the first time the "salesman" came on stage and defeated the protagonist with a power higher than the protagonist's realm was very stable. The feeling after being killed by a spider for the first time, the first time he was tested at the family's family... (Personal opinion) Writing this, I really went through this novel in my mind... You said it was poisonous, no You said there was a climax... I don't think it was either_ This book is really stable

This book would have been much better without the character of An Liang. From the author's description, it is obvious that he wanted to create a deep-minded and scheming character. However, he was inexplicably caught by the Sun Cult at the beginning, and there was no explanation later. Although it was obviously his father who was doing something wrong, at least he should explain it. Then in the joint examination, it was clear that he could defeat the game if he broke through, so he had to stab the protagonist in the back and sacrifice his teammates. It's really disgusting to turn off the operation and then add a green tea character (the author may want to show unscrupulousness? I can't see it at all, I can only feel the green tea and the intelligence). Later, because my mother was manipulated, it was completely inconsistent with the original basic character. She behaved like a white lotus type character. As of this writing, this character is basically useless. If you can change it, delete her as soon as possible. Don't wash it later.

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As for this book, the setting of Goldfinger is very interesting, and the plot content of Goldfinger can also be said to be above the standard. Then, let's talk about it, the author is very persistent in writing battle scenes, especially various competitions and the like. The writing is, well, a bit middle-of-the-road. At the same time, I like to delve into the details of various second-level subjects and then combine them to create explosions. To be honest, it is quite embarrassing to see those explosions. There are not many book reviews, poor chapter reviews, and almost no paragraph reviews. What does this mean? It means that the scenes you carefully arranged do not resonate with readers at all. Write more about the content on Goldfinger and the content in the real world that is not a battle or a mini-map competition, and less about carefully arranging battles, suppressing first and then rising, and intrigues. These contents are too exaggerated to write. The battle should be straightforward. Once you get to that content, even the character of the protagonist begins to blur.

I don't quite understand why you wrote it like this The main character? He is the main character besieging others? ? ? Why do you need a plug-in? Why do you need a golden finger? Have you figured out how to outline the theme of your book? Where did you copy it from?

The point is that you are always using gold to sell silver. The risk is high and the return is low. It is difficult to understand. Well, the alloy knives developed by the country are not as good as the same knives you have. If this is really a technology that can be achieved, it is at least a tens of billions-level technology. If you sell it for 12,000, what should you do if people covet your technology and you can't use it? How do you explain that you always sell this kind of stuff that is worthless but the technology is worth it? It's just cheating to say that you can survive to this point.