Back to 1998

After reading it, I found it was not as good as the previous book. The beginning was really bad. It started with a second-generation beauty favoring her, slapping a second-generation man in the face, and going abroad to gamble with a second-generation beauty whom I had just met! 😥😥😥It's not as good as the young woman next door! It is better to start a business in this high-gdp city than to face enemies that are much higher than you at the beginning. Now it seems that the plot at the beginning is too arrogant and not as stable as the beginning of the previous book.

When will the young woman next door be taken down? rhythmHurry up

Why does your book feel like there are only women except for women? It's the same as the previous one, with a neighbor and a rich girl at the beginning, and the beginning is exactly the same...

Compared with rebirth yourself, what is the use of your rebirth setting? It's just a chapter to make you watery.

Let's put it this way, the protagonist has a girlfriend, even Kiyoto, and even traveled abroad alone with his girlfriend for a while, but the protagonist is still a virgin. Is the current environment so bad, or is it because the author himself doesn't like women and will change the Nantong version at any time later?

Don't talk about anything else, what the hell are so many introductions? Just take the World Cup. Even the odds of not betting are written and explained. Is it useful? There is also a lot of nonsense in other places, some chapters are all exposition, speechless, goodbye.

The author's introduction is a bit shaky, as the Asian financial crisis has come and gone, but to this point, he is just short of writing a book.

They say the first three chapters are the golden chapters. What are these three chapters about? The author has written novels, but why does it feel like he is a completely inexperienced novice?

Can the author change your catchphrase? 3 Out of 5 sentences (after)

The author is a middle-aged man in the system, and he was exhausted from winning the prize in the previous movie. The specific text is filled with meaningless descriptions, and some characters are written without mentioning a word for 100 chapters, as if half of them have disappeared.