Quick Transmigration: The Lazy Fish Wins by Taking It Easy

The language is too wordy and repetitive, and my writing skills need to be improved urgently.

It's so long-winded. I keep saying it over and over again. The last book was like this. I thought this one should be better. Alas.

Author, after all, we readers have at least nine years of compulsory education, right? I still have a little bit of understanding! There's no need to break it apart, crush it into pieces, and talk about it over and over again! Cheluglu talks too much. . .

There are too many third-person perspectives, and there is not much sense of immersion. It feels like writing a running account.

I looked at the comment area and said long-windedly: I don't believe in evil Sure enough. . . People~ still have to listen to advice

I was in a book shortage period, so I bought it through a three-day free trial using my Reading Voucher. I tried my best to read 50 chapters, but I couldn't stand it anymore. I'm really sorry.

This book is so long-winded that I can repeat one sentence three or five times.

Sit on the sofa and the author continues. I hope this one will not be as bad as the last one, or it may be a little more concise.

My writing skills are too poor. Eight out of ten sentences are explanations. I can't describe the character's action trajectory. I'm a complete novice and rely on the author's later explanation. What is this? Reading comprehension for primary school students?

I have never seen such rubbish writing. One sentence can be repeated. The flooding is too serious. The plot doesn't make sense. Expression skills are too poor.