Awakening of Heroic Spirits: the Beginning of Pangu

After reading Chapter 85, I just feel like it's getting more and more rubbish. Killing a monster in several chapters in a row cost me a lot of coins, which is a bit disgusting.

Everything is difficult at the beginning, please give me more encouragement⛽️

The subject matter is okay, and the pace can be slowed down. Pay attention to characterization. The characters are thin and their relationships are a bit confusing. Hope it gets better and better.

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I just smiled, this book is not from Tomato😄

I finished listening to it at 3 o'clock in the morning yesterday. Why hasn't it been updated yet?

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The writing was too rough and too hasty. Why did you know it was Pangu just by looking at his battles? Why did she know the characteristics of Pangu's battles? In the early stage, I felt that the world view could be simply written down. If it was too big, it would collapse. Later, it would be impossible to pick it up. Then the writing became worse and worse. Well, in the early stage, you should refine the heroes and battles first, and don't make the world view too broad.

It can't be said to be a brainless novel. The threshold for brainless novels is not even reached👎

A great attempt by AI to write a book, leveraging the power of the studio to create the glory of the subscription list! Success! It worked! 100,000 Collections, 5,000 orders, and 10,000 orders through channels! This is a small step for AI, but a giant step for artificial intelligence. What? Are you talking about underworld soldiers and naval forces? So what, the AI ​​author writes it, the AI ​​reader reads it, it's reasonable and a perfect match, is there any problem?

Really 6, this chapter is said to be filled with a large number of novice accounts that have been registered for less than 30 days. Each account has 3-4 comments all about this book, and Chapter 23 is on the shelves. Is this a new way to make money? The whole story is told in plain English at the level of primary school students, without any characterization.

One chapter counts as 10,000 words, and 9,000 words depends on the characters talking nonsense to each other.

I haven't even figured out how it became so popular 😥 because there are so many people with poor taste.

I was deceived twice by Douyin. One was about eating hot pot when the world becomes cold, which is considered rubbish. The second was about this heroic spirit. The early setting is really good. You can accept it as a cool article. You can't even achieve this? Rubbish among rubbish, no setting at all, no worldview, no logic, just open your mouth and write, the more you read, the more question marks you get, the better you get, the less you understand, a waste of the setting of Pangu Heroic Spirit

Just by looking at the title of this book, you can tell that the setting of Pangu is the top one. Its essence is that it is supreme and powerful. How to write the story, the personality of the creator god, omnipotent and omniscient. No matter how to write, YY can't find any setting that can be written.

A book written by AI? What rubbish

This is the day and night, the eight major forces, Li Gu must die, check for yourself how many words of this nonsense have been watered down

Where can I file a complaint? It's too watery, I want to report it

Last words Ding Zhen: Identified as a studio assembly line product

I couldn't stand it after reading a few chapters. Can this level be recommended on the homepage?

Pangu created the world and transformed all things. According to this setting, the plate volume of an ordinary person and the plate volume of an old sow should be the same. Let's boldly assume that if an old sow awakens the Pangu bloodline, will it do better than pig's feet? After all, an old sow has four pig feet. 🐷

This introduction doesn't even look right A clear breath of stupidity comes out

This is the traffic bought from Douyin. . . . . Just this thing can still have a collection of 50,000. It was really painful to read through chapters one and twenty. 😅

Zhenhun Street plus Douluo Continent! Water figures water has become rubbish.

The subject matter is very good, but it was ruined by the author. Someone please rewrite this subject matter.

A 3-minute battle feels as long as 3 hours. This book is not about adding water to the story, but inserting a small amount of story into the water. All the characters fight like idiots without thinking, and a lot of nonsense is used to make up the word count.