Cultivation: Become an Extraterrestrial Demon at the Beginning

In the early stages of foundation building, reach the peak of Golden Elixir. . This book can only be read as a martial arts novel

The writing is flat and straightforward, and the battles are awkwardly written. As a young master of the demonic path, he goes to help the right path. The plot is cliche. I only read five chapters and couldn't stand it anymore.

I worked very hard to promote it and spent a lot of money. Unfortunately, I had no strength and could only be abandoned by readers.

Because the previous host failed to complete the system task, the penalty for failure was the entry of an extraterrestrial demon into the body. What, I became an extraterrestrial demon? ! Let's look at why the host failed to complete the task: today is the host's birthday, let's treat the host to a birthday cake to celebrate! ... So on his birthday, the original host died... Book title: "Cultivating Immortality, Beginning to Become an Extraterrestrial Demon" Status of the work: being serialized Keywords of the work: time travel, system flow, imagination Work Product introduction: The system that originally belonged to Li Qing was bound to another person with the same name in another world, Li Qing, but the mission was still a mission in this world, so a certain unlucky guy who was mistakenly bound to the system was wiped out because he did not complete the system mission, and the protagonist happened to time-travel to the original owner. The system correction was completed and upgraded to the alternate world version. From then on, the protagonist Li Qing started an invincible road... Recommendation: The system setting of this book is relatively novel. The protagonist did not have the golden finger only after traveling through time. Moreover, before the time traveling, the original owner had already bound the golden finger. The idea is exquisite and fascinating. At the same time, the protagonist's identity at the beginning is the young master of the Demon Cult, and he is suspected by the cult leader. The plot has ups and downs and is very exciting. Recommendation index: ★★★★☆ {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New book trial reading"}

This combat power system is quite broken. The author wanted to take advantage of the popularity, but failed to do so.

The writing quality is so bad, I just skipped reading...

[Reason for Recommendation]: The novel is mainly based on the theme of traveling through the system. The overall language style of the novel is humorous, making it very relaxing and comfortable to read. One of the highlights of the novel is the setting of the protagonist Goldfinger. Unlike most other novels where the protagonist travels through time and obtains the Goldfinger, this novel goes against the conventional rules and is set as the original owner has the Goldfinger. It is exquisitely conceived and unique. Another highlight of the novel is the climactic plot and the setting of the protagonist's funny and humorous extraterritorial demon villain. It is refreshing but not brainless, funny and humorous but not unreasonable. The author has grasped the right balance between the two. Overall, this is a good quality time-travel system novel, worth collecting and reading. Setting keywords: [System flow, time travel, fantasy] [Introduction]: Li Qing traveled through time and became the young master of the Demon Cult. He was suspected by the Demon Cult leader at the beginning and asked me to kill the saint to overcome the love crisis. What should I do, wait online, it's very urgent... [Author]: Fu Qingyan [Number of words in the work]: 57,000 (serializing) [Rating]: ★★★★☆ [Recommended group]: ①Like the time travel system Readers of popular novels ② Readers who like novel novels with novel settings {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New book trial reading"}

It took me half a day to finish reading it. I am now looking forward to the local version of the system. Generally speaking, there will be machine guns, star destroyer cannons and the like (ಡωಡ)hiahiahia. To be honest, I felt that I was wasting my time for half a day. I didn't see anything that seemed like it. I could accept it in the first part, but not after the part when I went to the palace. One part said that the writing was like shit. The system is a tool used by the author to control the protagonist to promote the plot. It does not explain how many resources the original owner has saved for the protagonist, but the second part explains how many resources the tools purchased by the protagonist consume. Of course, this is all decided by the author. We are not the protagonist, so how do we know what resources the protagonist can use? Many scenes made this way feel very intelligent.

Okay, it suits my taste, keep updating it, no eunuchs required. I have a suggestion. Because of the materials left by the original owner, this book seems to be semi-invincible. Therefore, this book focuses on the story, that is, the writing is very important to this book. The creativity is passable, and I am looking forward to it...

The writing is a bit hasty and too straightforward.

What about the main plot? It's such a mess, I have no idea what I'm writing.