Hogwarts Wood Escape Wizard

The protagonist's friend was raped by a monster, but the protagonist didn't react at all? Dumbledore didn't respond either? First grader raped by monster? That's it? That's it?

Novels are not written for yourself, but for others.

After reading a few chapters, where does Mudun come from?

Wood escape is not about playing with seeds, and ninja fighting is not about standing up and using your wand to fight waves. The core things are not done right.

It's so embarrassing, it makes Hogwarts look like an urban soldier.

Like a disaster star. Something happened wherever you go

It felt okay at first. I don't know what happens next. Added Pirates of the Caribbean World to the mix. Then I added an axe, which felt a bit sudden. There are so many props in the magic world, why do you need this axe? It feels like its power is average, and it also has a lot of side effects, which makes it tasteless. I stopped watching when I saw this. The more I write, the more confusing it becomes, and I no longer have any interest.

The protagonist's poor academic talent is due to poor genes. If the protagonist's brain is strengthened by magic and has a photographic memory, he will be a real magic genius. It's obvious that the protagonist is not a blood wizard, but relies on the system to cast magic. The system must be screwed up, and the protagonist's soul has long been infected by the system. The master behind the system must have a conspiracy.

This introduction is nothing like Harry Potter. Except for Hermione, have everyone else been time-traveled by the Chinese? It's so scary, and I don't think Harry would be happy about being labeled as the savior for no reason. He would be relieved if someone shouldered this inexplicable responsibility for him!

There are too many second settings, too many magic changes, and the logic is very poor.

This author made me laugh when he said Harry Potter was of mixed race.

The concept is good, but I couldn't stand the writing after reading a few pages

It's too watery, suitable for watching while dancing, not suitable for listening

Why declare yourself a blood wizard? Isn't it okay to just make a fortune in silence? Don't know?

Subtle, lots of original content, but nothing spectacular

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After reading a few chapters, it seems that the performance is not Wood Release, more like a Druid with no affinity for animals and plants. In a place full of wooden doors, wooden walls, and wooden seats, he is even worse than a Druid when he throws seeds in battle.

Has the internal investment been passed or the closing time is short? How did you sign this contract? Man, I submitted it four times and got tens of thousands of words of scrap. I really can't stand it anymore.