Marvel: I’m Gwen Spider-Woman’s Mentor

Highlight 1: The character development is excellent. Like Spider-Man, Gwen Stacy is a saint, but definitely not stupid. Most American comic books portray Spider-Man as a young, foolish, and saintly character, proving they've never read the Spider-Man comics. Highlight 2: This is definitely not a mindless story.

Is the protagonist always just an ordinary person? No offense intended, but in the Marvel universe, an ordinary person can't rely on brains. Deathstroke, the protagonist of American comics, is already very strong, and his mentor is no slouch either. You, an ordinary protagonist... To put it bluntly, if you're unlucky enough to be caught in the crossfire of a villain, you might be dead...

The protagonist has some brains, but not much... After all that scheming and power struggles, the bottom line in this American comic book world is that not pursuing strength is the greatest folly. But after reading over thirty pages so far, I've found that the protagonist has absolutely no interest in that aspect…

I just finished reading chapter 5, and I just have to get this off my chest. Why is it that the main character gets to criticize Gwen? If Gwen is criticized by the protagonist for doing good deeds with her superpowers, then should the protagonist be executed for working at Stark Industries and developing military weapons?

The author's initial character design for the protagonist was that he was calm, collected, intelligent, resourceful, and skilled. The scene where Gwen receives her first healing treatment is brilliant in the first half, but turns into a light comedy in the second half, with a stiff atmosphere and a disjointed character development.

The author clearly put in effort to write the intellectual and political battles, and indeed created a well-developed, non-template character in Gwen. But here's the problem: this is the Marvel universe (American comics? Catwoman isn't Marvel, is she?). Until the subscription period, the protagonist remains an ordinary person without supernatural powers; almost all her methods are political.

The main problem is the slow update schedule. The fact that the protagonist doesn't have superpowers is a minor issue; if the narrative pacing is good, it's fine. The character development is good; it's not a mindless story. At least the female lead, Gwen, isn't like the brainless, characterless, and purely decorative characters found in other Spider-Man books.

The emotions are written with great delicacy; it's one of the few examples of writing that effectively creates characters that I've been looking for. But underestimating the protagonist's strength is a major flaw! They keep trying to emphasize how smart the protagonist is, but then they also emphasize how ordinary he is—it's neither here nor there.

I'd like to remind the author that Gwen is a nickname; her full name is Gwendolyn, which can be translated as Gwendolyn Maxine "Gwen" Stacy.

This is unacceptable! This "saintly" attitude is too much. They want to kill you, but you don't; you save them instead. In a Spider-Man sitcom, this wouldn't be a problem. But this is American comics, a multi-hero universe with various evil anti-heroes.