Starting from the Arrival of Mountains and Seas

As proof, this book will continue to be updated until it reaches one million words, and I will add another one. If this book continues to be completed, the next new book will also start with one.

As long as the fox keeps updating, there is nothing to say about the writing style, but I have read too many of these Eastern fantasy books, and I really miss the previous cyberpunk and Western-style steam apocalypse books.

I don't know if you have watched The Devil's Cage of the Decadent Dragon

The protagonist who doesn't need to do anything is always full of dangers and not smooth enough. Like the first dungeon where he caught the thief at the beginning, he was clean, handsome and classy. Moreover, the protagonist is like this for top new accounts who need brains, strength and strength. I don't know how other practitioners survive.

The more eunuchs you are, the more your new books will be kept (fear of being eunuchs again), and your grades will get worse. The worse your grades are, the more likely you are to be eunuchs, a vicious cycle, how to break this, brothers. 😰

You are a eunuch again, Mr. Fox

But I still want to ask if the heroine is in a relationship or a comrade. I don't really like people in relationships. In the author's last book, the hero and the heroine got together immediately and the process was very small. I didn't see that the hero had any feelings for the heroine before they got together.

In fact, I was wondering why every time the author publishes a book, I can see and save it. I started reading your books from Tide. I didn't like cyberpunk originally, but I liked all of your books, including the one about Demons. It made me always fattened by your books. The last book was finally finished, and it finally started to gain some credibility. I hope you write better and better, but I will not follow the book or subscribe until you finish it.

As long as you don't agree with me, I will order at least 60% of this book, because I still like your writing about fantasy or cyberpunk. I still need to look at whether this book is suitable for my taste. I believe that the author will not believe it if I order it all.

You're a eunuch and you still dare to write with this number? ? ?

The writing is okay, but it's a bit lacking, please give it a try, author.

The first copy is still very flavorful and okay.

The protagonist's strength is a bit weak compared to the events he encounters, and he is constantly being dragged along on tasks, which is not very satisfying.

I hope the author will think carefully about the fighting scenes. I personally think this is the author's weakness.

Please leave a suggestion or question. (Stacking armor is not to teach the author how to write or guide his writing direction, but in my opinion it is indeed a problem, a minor flaw that is one level higher than picking out typos.) In fact, this problem exists in this book, and it becomes more obvious the further back the protagonist goes. There is no clear and obvious comparison between the strength of the protagonist and the strength of the dungeon boss, in terms of data or level. As a result, the entire dungeon was rendered very powerful in the early, middle and late stages. The protagonist was inexplicably solved by bursting out, which made the climax difficult to get to after watching the game. Since the boss could be solved by bursting out, the previous battle of wits and so on seemed very embarrassing. Of course, the protagonists of martial arts or close combat all have this problem, but there are ways to solve it. For example, Zhanmei Su, who has a strong data flow, the gap between me and the boss can be intuitively displayed with data. What are the reasons why I am better than him, what are the reasons why he is better than me, and finally why I can counter-kill him. Or Cuckoo Bird, you can never go beyond him when talking about the martial arts style in recent years. When reading, it's like meeting a god and killing a god, meeting a Buddha and killing a Buddha, but you will know how he kills enemies across levels. Even when faced with a high-ranking player, Explosive Seed relies on regular skills such as the Seven Elements of Guns and Swords to make a comeback. Readers know where the fun is. A little explanation of the data is that before downloading the dungeon, the strength of the protagonist who has made sufficient preparations is 50, and the strength of the boss is 100. (This is not for the protagonist, but for the author's design of the dungeon, if the final outcome is that the boss is conquered.) In the dungeon, the protagonist obtains the boss's information through analysis, wits, cooperation, etc., And has a +10 grasp of how to conquer the boss, and obtains special attack weapons against the boss, +10, and competition and cooperation with other indigenous participants, +20, and so on. In the end, the miscellaneous things add up to 100 or 110, and then go to fight the final boss. Even if the final boss has a second form, at this time, the protagonist relies on some epiphany between life and death, some living towards death, and moves forward indomitably, whatever skills are triggered, they will not say you are awkward, at most, you will be called a cliché to break through before the battle. (Prevent being bullied here, and then stack armor. The above is just the most common form of dungeons, there are also cannibalism, the mastermind behind the scenes, etc. The protagonist can also learn from Han Paopao and take a step back, or even learn from Da Ai Tianzun) But what does this article make me feel? It is the most primitive martial arts style, the kind that Dragon Snake had at that time. Dragon Snake at least had a stage-type achievement such as holding pills to distinguish it. Based on the analysis of the first copy of this book, in terms of description, except for the height of the monk, the monk is no more powerful than the moth slave who carries the axe, but his combat power is inferior to that of the moth slave. All the cannons in the army are shot by the monk. (If you stack the armor again, Moth Slave will not be able to survive a few crossbows and cannons. If the broken monk smashes a cannonball, Moth Slave will definitely not be able to do it. Moreover, the protagonist himself is not strong enough to enter the dungeon, and his hard power is not as good as these two. It is understandable that he will try his best to fight the mini-boss and the surface boss, and the army's crossbows, cannons, etc. Also provide assists. But you alone The Moth Slave and the Broken Ring Monk were weighed together on a scale, and then the Broken Ring Monk and the Moth were weighed on the scale. Finally, the Moth Slave and the Moth were weighed on the scale, and a surprise appeared. They were almost the same 🙂) The whole dungeon of the big boss Moth was awesome and coaxing. In the end, the Broken Ring Monk also added a dying buff with the call of life. The Tiger Maneater also added a buff to the protagonist, and then the moth was dried to death in a few hits. Even if you add a patch or something to say that cannibalism or evil spirit has a special attack on moths, it will be destroyed by the explosion. What is clearer here is that the mini-boss of the dungeon is the axe-carrying moth slave, the surface boss is the broken monk, and the final big boss is the moth. The strength gap between the three of them, at least on paper and in description, is what I can see. If the broken monk is used as a measure, it feels fragmented and unreal. It can even be said that the ax-carrying moth slave and the moth are about the same strength. (Of course not 🤭) Of course, this book is still better than the previous one in all aspects. For example, the author may have noticed the above problem intentionally or unintentionally. After downloading the first copy, there was a simple comparison between the protagonist after training and the original one, and after being infused with evil spirit. But this is not enough. The protagonist has his own contrast of strengths and weaknesses. What about the protagonist and others? This is not to preach that the author should say every time he enters a dungeon, the number of minions is five, the number of mini-bosses is ten, and the number of big bosses is twenty. But what level of strength is the protagonist? What level of strength is his opponent? Is it appropriate for them to fight like this? In purely commercial terms, if the protagonist is strong, the boss is stronger than him, what is the protagonist's strength, what are the boss's weaknesses, and where is the protagonist's comeback point, all of these must be clearly reflected. Speaking of a thousand, saying ten thousand, I think first of all, we need to give readers a starting point to judge the strength of the protagonist. In Infinite Flow, this starting point can be a hard level such as walking up and down, or it can be a soft trick to roughly distinguish the strength of entering the dungeon several times. Then there are other walking and copy mob bosses. After weighing the overall strength of each copy, people must know at a glance that this is a minion, and the protagonist will be hacked to death with a few swords. This is an elite monster of the same level, but don't be afraid. The protagonist's skills and weapons are all top-notch. If you don't fight well, you will kill him. Ah, this is a mini-boss, a lord monster of the same level. After a hard battle, the protagonist defeated him with his superior strength. Finally, we come to the final boss. Although he is an ordinary monster, he is one or half a level higher than the protagonist (half-step peak, pseudo-third level, former fourth level, etc. 🤓). He is not afraid. The protagonist is a complete hexagonal warrior, invincible at the same level. He uses his own strengths to attack the enemy's weaknesses. If it doesn't work, he will explode again. If he can resist it completely, he will be done. (Moreover, stacking armor. The above is only an ideal situation. There are many ways to develop the protagonist's strength. For example, what Zhanmei Su often does is that the final boss of the dungeon is really explosive and can't be beaten. Then get the benefits and leave and it's over) (In the end, stacking armor, the above only represents my personal opinion. If you are willing to do it, don't be afraid to do it. Since you do it, you are not afraid to do it, but please be reasonable)

So why not open two books at the same time? One update every two days is fine. The eunuch is a bad character. Besides, the difficulty of this second world has soared. It is not too much to reward the protagonist with an exclusive world at the end (I hope it is a world with a higher limit). The uniqueness of the life soul is not shown very much, and the role it plays is not outstanding. The proficiency has not increased, and the active skills have not been improved.

Keeping it like this is not the answer, it is better to start a mass-funded project 😅

2077 Is so beautiful, it's no longer updated, alas :-(

As for the author, if you're not good at reading, just go to the most popular novels one by one and interact with them. How can you become popular without publicity? Don't give up.

I'm convinced, but I'm saying you're a loser. The author wrote 10 million words, and I'm told you're serious. You haven't finished a single book. The content is pretty good but you have no results. I'm really convinced. I'll give you a 666.

Has the author ever considered that the poor performance of the work is a matter of publicity rather than the writing style and plot setting? The writing skills are really rare in the starting point. Although the setting of this world is copied from other film and television works, it is a rare masterpiece compared with similar novels among infinite flow novels. Instead of opening a new book and disappointing old readers who like you again, why not go directly to the comment area of ​​Cuckoo Bird and post a self-recommendation post? It is not difficult to double the reading volume and popularity. Everyone has been suffering from a book shortage for too long. I found it from the comment area of ​​other works. I have always been puzzled as to why such a work was lukewarm at the beginning.

The fighting is a little worse, compared to Tianguan Zhi and Zhiyi Zongheng

I am happy to see the eunuch, so my investment was in vain 😤

To be honest, if you want to update, just cut this book, stop writing, and start it again. Although it is only the second copy, for the protagonist, who has practiced martial arts in real life and has a very high overall strength among ordinary people, this is the second copy. Just raise the difficulty level so high, how many chapters have you written? This is only the second dungeon.

A bit confusing, there is no specific power system

Hell is okay. But it's not over yet.

Ordinary people will die soon after entering.

Don't give up, there will be an update. This book will definitely be fine. If you update it four times a day, you will definitely be on the list.

When I saw it today, I found that the setting of Penglai Island is very similar to Hell Music.