The Emei Arrow Immortal

Why did you go down the mountain to practice after just a few days on the mountain? You only taught for two days and you didn't learn any skills before you went down the mountain? The writing on the mountain is quite good. There is no need to be so anxious to speed up the progress. Can't you settle for a while and lay a good foundation before going down the mountain? I met my master three times in total.

If you put it here, it's just rubbish on the street.

Shouldn't the characters be three horizontal and three vertical? Two horizontal and three vertical is

Poisoned by the first few pictures, the protagonist looks like a mentally retarded idiot and slips away

The author borrowed the framework of "The Legend of Shushan Swordsman" to write his own original characters. I feel like I have never seen many names and deeds in "Shushan". But I personally like the story written by the author better. I hope the author can keep writing it. After all, when it comes to this type of novel, the people who write it tend to have bad endings, and the author is also a migrant worker who works overtime, which is a bit worrying.

I think it's pretty good. Why do people criticize it so much?

Personally speaking, the biggest poisonous point is not the abusive master, because it is actually not bad to say that it is an abusive master. It is just that the cultivation level is low and I feel a little offended when facing hostile forces. There is only one most poisonous point in this book, which is the protagonist's distrust of his fellow elders. It is really poisonous. Obviously you can explain it clearly to your master or uncle and then make a long-term plan, but the protagonist doesn't want to. I just want to be a prostitute. If I can't do it, I will end up promiscuously. If I get caught, I will wait for my brothers or elders to rescue me. I still have the same problem as Ben Xuan Ling, but this one is a little milder. Xuan Ling made me really angry because the master was so tolerant of the protagonist and even left a lot of life-saving back-up tricks on the protagonist, but the protagonist just wanted to be his traitor instead of turning into a double agent. Especially after the Zhao story, I have only one evaluation of the protagonist. Li Che! You are a real beast. (I only saw more than 200 Xuanling)

Just think of practicing your pen, sharpening the sharp edge of your sword.

It's child's play to go up and down the mountain after just a few days.

As an old bookworm, this book is really good. It doesn't matter if no one supports it now. Someone will see it later. Come on, author, this book is really good.