Douluo: I Am Master Yu Xiaogang

This book is very thoughtful and not as mindlessly written as other books. I don't know if it will be bad later, but the first part is really good. If you write carefully, I think you will get better and better as you write later.

I feel that Master is more suitable to be an evil soul master. That slogan in particular is particularly suitable. The Lord established the Holy Spirit Sect first in Douluo Yili, and then personally sent the whole family of the Blue Electric Tyrannosaurus to the West as the final material for the evolution of the martial soul.

When will a disgusting QJ criminal like Qian Xunji be cleansed? It's already good that he didn't get cleaned up by his father. Will his father avenge him when he dies? This kind of thing that tarnishes the reputation of the sect and Wuhun Hall is worthy of being whitewashed? Fart. Generally speaking, QJ criminals have a bad reputation and bad character no matter where they go, and their end is not very good.

. . . To be honest, current time-travel novels are all about writing about time-travelers that are too awesome, especially the diaosi who was nothing before the time-travel. As soon as he time-traveled, he studied upgrading techniques and made various new inventions. The diaosi who had time-traveled before was actually still a diaosi.

Let's change our name. This name is a bit offensive.

There aren't many good ones written by masters recently.

To be honest, when I read fan fiction in which the main character is a master and he takes in Erlong, I just feel sick, just like how Bibi Dong is an adoptive mother but her filial piety deteriorates.

What should I say? If you want to highlight the protagonist's fame and intelligence, can you stop treating the supporting characters as fools? The protagonist's father is also a titled Douluo after all. Why do you ask the protagonist about everything? Is it impossible to handle these things without the protagonist?

In fact, I personally feel that many theories seem logical, but in fact they are not feasible. Similar to the fact that innate soul power can be cultivated, Tang San is the only one in the entire Douluo Continent. I personally prefer his suggestion. The martial soul has not awakened, the soul power is inactive, and the soul power is active. Will the martial soul awaken on its own? After all, you have been thinking about martial soul training for so long, so how can you miss the development of martial soul awakening? In the original article, when the martial soul awakens, a formation is used, and then the light point enters the body, and the martial spirit awakens. Is this light point similar to the function of activating the soul power? As for self-created soul skills, I personally think that soul rings are more similar to some kind of blood factor. Without this factor, soul skills are just tangible. In other words, using the flow of meridian soul power to create self-created soul skills is actually more similar to the martial arts in Tang Sanyuan's world, rather than the superpowers in the fantasy world. And even if you can create soul skills, does your martial soul have this foundation? Forget about meridians and other martial arts. If you can do it, you can do it. People without talent can work hard and spend many years. But in the West, these superpowers are similar to magic potion pathways. If you don't take potions, no matter how talented you are, can you transcend the pathways to release the next level of abilities? You created a soul skill, but there is no soul ring similar to the magic potion method. How do you release the martial soul? The author has a big misunderstanding about Douluo Continent, which is that everyone in Douluo Continent is actually different, because their martial souls are different, their soul rings are different, and everyone is a unique individual, so even if you can create soul skills, it does not apply to them, because if you have a martial soul, you may not be considered a human being, but a soul beast of a different bloodline. And there is no doubt that the release of soul skills needs to be through the soul ring as a medium, so why do you think you can imitate other people's soul skills, and how do you imitate their soul rings and martial spirits? And the most important point is that Douluo Continent has gods, and there are many gods. The upper limit of his power is actually not low, because it involves rules and other abilities, so with so many gods, you really think that Douluo Dalu's ability system is so easy to change and improve. The progress made in subsequent Dou Er and Dou San was actually the creation of another way, which is a soul guide with similar technology. Dou Er and Dou San actually have no shortage of scientists, so why can't they improve the martial soul system?

A rotten man. Everyone has a deep-rooted impression of him. . . .

Angel God Yu Xiaogang? Am I dreaming?

Well! So you are thinking about asking for grass jelly to change your qualifications. Damn, are you insulting my IQ? Nearly unlimited computing power, what are you using it for? Use a submachine gun as a fire stick?

The writing is too mature, there are too many considerations, and it's very awkward to read. I hope I don't fall into the previous way of writing about geniuses and researchers. I really can't stand it.

It's too early to pass through the small anus, why don't you take the money?

There is a theory that can explain why you reach a certain state before how old you are before you can do Contra or something later: 1. Everyone's life cycle is roughly divided into infancy, growth, youth, adulthood, middle age, old age, etc. The cycle is not equal to age. For example, a person who can live to be 100 years old must be an adult at the age of 25, but a person who can live to be 1,000 years old may only be an infant at the age of 25 in the life cycle The speed of improvement in each stage is different. In the first stage of foundation building, in the second stage of growth, the improvement of cultivation is the fastest and easy to advance. It slows down after adulthood and basically solidifies or even regresses slightly in old age 2. After the breakthrough of cultivation, the life span increases. The increase in the overall life time is equivalent to extending the time of each life cycle. If there is a breakthrough in the growth period and the essence of life is enhanced, then the time in the growth period will also increase, and rapid breakthroughs can continue 3 The life cycle is basically irreversible. For example, if the original life span is 100 years, the first 6 years are infancy, 7-15 years old is the total growth period, and then the 10-year-old breaks through the remaining 5 years in the growth period, and the total life span becomes 500 years, then the life stage is still in the growth period, not the early childhood period, and the remaining 5*5 years in the growth period are 25 years instead of 9*5-4 41 years. This is a growth cycle that is basically irreversible Therefore, the faster your breakthrough is when you are young, the faster your life will transform, and the higher your achievements will be in the future. Unless you have a great opportunity, it is basically difficult to be a late bloomer.

Asking for a leave and then nothing more?

There are very few books about Yu Xiaogang that total no more than 5. Except that Yu Xiaogang has always been a waste, he is a standard protagonist template in other aspects.

The writing master said nothing else. Liu Erlong, how do you solve it? If she accepts her, a lot of people will probably use her as a close relative. If she doesn't, the original work will be with the master, which is equivalent to an official match. If she is paired with other people, she will have a tendency to be green again.

If this book is still a book that forces the protagonist to join the Spirit Hall, then I can only give up. After all, there are too many plots and it is too disgusting. Moreover, a Titled Douluo can spy on a child without being discovered by another Titled Douluo, and it is not discovered. In this case, almost all disciples of the sect cannot escape the killing of the Spirit Hall. Moreover, the plot of Yuluo Mian is too weird. I suspect that his father's death was leaked by him, with such an IQ. This is the first time I've seen Low-level, and the protagonist also knows how this thing developed, but I still believe that it is ridiculously weird. I know that he is a hidden danger, but almost everything is not hidden from him. This is to insist on the plot and let the protagonist join Wuhun Hall. It seems that if the protagonist does not join Wuhun Hall, he can't write a book at all. Anyway, in the end, I hope this book is different and can write some new ideas, instead of the rest being the same, different paths lead to the same goal.

It's well written, but it's just too watery. Things that can be explained clearly in one sentence are endlessly explained. . . What a pity. .