Warhammer: Gold's Dream

No one can stand writing such a stream of consciousness. To be honest, you should just write it more normally. The first person is pretty good. Such a jumping story line? He also changes the angle of view frequently, who can continue to watch this?

This time I will be a divine farmer. Calmly speaking, this is a fairly niche literature, and it probably does not suit the taste of most people. His creativity is imaginative, and he is a unique pioneer in terms of writing style. It's really not good at speaking human words.

Good news: This book has a particularly strong hammer flavor Bad news: The riddles are too strong Good news: The author is working hard to write a good book Bad news: Readers are also very tired from reading

The author is trying to make people who just want to have a more refined work meal (a better-quality fast-food novel) sit in a not-so-fine restaurant and spend two hours eating a special French meal that does not suit Chinese tastes (the book is not bad, but I don't have the patience to read it. The first person and jumping story lines make the already complicated and heavy 40k more obscure). . This is roughly what I thought after reading a few pictures.

Mankind's first and last ultimate god-killing weapon. Time is not enough to bury everything. The fragments of the Star God's ancient saints have set new goals for the golden people. The weapons created to fight the ancient threats have been named gods. Just like the name "Yajin", its thunder is enough to scorch the sky, shatter the planet, and kill the gods.

"The first time I went to the Terra Palace, I didn't feel much, because I had already met the Imperial Guard Aquila Shield that belongs to me." Photo source network, intrusion and deletion

(Take Altaïr away with a sack) (Q version mod is loading) (Pour it out) Dang Dang Dang Dang! What will happen if you use corn to charm a lady holding a rosette? I'm very grateful to her for drafting this version of The Confused Corn Cat for me~

The glorious wise man patrols the luxurious palace; The name of the old is engraved on the fine gold inner garment; Oh, for the emperor, the eternal guard of honor; Oh, for the emperor, the eternal sunshine; For the sake of righteousness, we seal the broken borders with our bodies; For the sake of loyalty, we even give up the supreme glory; In the past, in the blazing sun Before the sun, I raised my head and looked forward; Now, I look up and stare under the cold torch; I will not forget the past and the future, I will not forget; I will not forget, I will not forget the vicissitudes of life; Chaos cannot take away our will, even the death of gold; Corruption cannot shake our duty, even if existence dies; Hey! Wanfu Tuan, hey! Thousands of people! !

I heard that if you want a tree to grow, you must stabilize its roots; if you want a spring to flow far, you must dredge its source; if you want to be renewed, you must accumulate manuscripts. The source is not deep but you want the water to flow far. The root system is not strong but you want the trees to grow. I don't have many code words and haven't saved the manuscript, but I want to get updates. Although I have a low status and limited knowledge, I know that this is impossible, let alone a smart and wise person like you! The author is in an important position as an author. To be respected among book friends, he must respect the emperor's majesty and always maintain the peaceful and beautiful ending. If you don't think about dangers in a comfortable environment, avoid luxury and practice frugality, you will not be able to maintain richness in your manuscripts, and you will not be able to overcome your desires by writing. This is also like digging out the roots of trees to make them flourish, and blocking the source of springs to make them flow farther. (Qidian) All the authors have accepted the important mission entrusted by Dian Niang. None of them is not deeply worried about the code word and has achieved remarkable results in management. However, after the success, the author's moral character began to decline. There are indeed many authors who do a good job at the beginning, but probably not many can stick to the end. Is it because it is easier to start a new book than to finish it? In the past, I had enough strength to open a new book, but now I don't have enough strength to insist on coding. Why is this? Usually when you are in the midst of deep worries, you will be able to treat the manuscript with all your sincerity. Once you have succeeded, you can indulge in your own coding to coo at others. With all sincerity, even if one is in the north and the other is in the south, they can form a family, and cooing over others will make the readers strangers. Even if strict prohibitions are used to supervise (readers), and open boxes are used to scare (readers), (readers) just want to avoid punishment and do not appreciate the kindness of the author. They are respectful on the surface but unconvinced in their hearts. (Readers) The resentment against the author is not big or small, it is only the readers who are terrible; (they are like water) that can carry ships and overturn them, which should be deeply cautious. How can one be careless when a speeding carriage is driven by rotten ropes? As an author, if you are really able to think of self-restraint with contentment when you see something that arouses your liking; when you are about to open a new book, you should think of stopping in moderation to calm readers; when you think of the high number of words, you should think of humility and self-discipline; if you are afraid of pride and complacency, you should think of being able to be like Jianghai (being in the downstream of) many rivers; if you like hunting, you should think of it. When thinking about keeping one side of the net, when worrying about slackening of will, thinking about starting and ending cautiously (when doing things), when worrying about being blinded (by thinking), thinking about humbly accepting the opinions of readers, when considering poisonous points (which may appear in the book), thinking about turning one's own integrity (talent) into a treasure, when adding updates, thinking about not improperly rewarding people because of temporary happiness, and when using leave requests, thinking about not abusing leave slips because of temporary laziness. Comprehensively do these ten things that should be thought deeply about, promote these nine virtues, select talented people and appoint them, select good opinions and listen to them. Then the wise person can fully devote his strategy, the brave person can fully use his strength, the kind person can spread his favor, and the honest person can devote his loyalty. Readers rush to come and serve. Authors and readers have no major troubles. They can enjoy the joy of reading and live as long as a close school beauty. The author can manage the novel just by playing the keyboard and hanging his clothes. Needless to say, readers all over the world have been educated. Why do you have to spend so much time and effort (by yourself) managing updates for readers, using your own sensitive and bright ears and eyes, and detracting from the principle that you can govern the world by letting nature take its course?

The interaction between corn and cans is so fun and refreshing

A riddle, a miscellaneous note, I can't explain the reason, and I can't finish the truth. However, all living beings are keeping secrets. Reveal the miracle of the book on the parchment, Discover, What is hidden is the sneering Tzeentch. The imprisoned past has lost its murderous intent. Release the old days and redo yourself. I don't know the origin of the past, which is not a problem. I am willing to bear the joy of today. Walk along the long river of time and never give up. I would like to make a promise for this life and never leave. Thinking, clearing the world. Think, burn yourself. Even if there is no chance of life in this trip. No one came to offer sacrifices.

Such a fragmented story reminds me of short stories of hundreds of thousands of words. This is the starting point. What you are writing is a novel, and it is a niche Warhammer article. If you insist on writing like this, obscurity will be the only ending. Even if someone from a peer recommends your article and doesn't understand why Yi Huisheng recommends it, can't he see that the style of this book is very different from his and other mainstream online articles?

My explanation was reviewed for two days and failed, so I finally tried the picture version

Riddles are not meant to be incomprehensible to readers. Even if there are reasons for the world view, if a novel cannot make readers understand what is going on, it will fail. It shouldn't be called a novel, but an essay, a bad epic, or something else.

Helios and Altaïr (In the corner where no one cares, Altaïr's helmet fell on Isaac's head again (:-D)

It's so painful, so painful. My brain is warning me. Author, don't you consider the readers' feelings when you write like this? The redundant words and confusing narrative have made me feel the beauty of subspace.

It feels like the author is working very hard on writing, but the look and feel is quite confusing. As you read, you can easily fall into the cycle of "who am I, where am I, what am I doing", let alone being involved, which makes me feel tired.

Congratulations to the little kitten for starting the article today🎉 The painting is Altaïr. Due to limited skills and time, I only spent the upper body armor (the face really can't be drawn (it's almost two dimensions) (Don't scold, don't scold (Altaïr should not be as "kind" as I drew, but I can only draw this expression💦) The sheep below is me, the brand is today, the first day of the article is July 1st There is a reference to the official picture

"The Forgotten Founder. The embodiment of Terra's wrath. The outcast who never betrayed. The carrier of the damned in the world. The Herald. The echo of unity and civil war. The price of progress. The half-brother of the Custodes. The Undertaker of the Old Night. The Old Man. The Copper Can. The Thunderhawk. Watch and Judgment. The protector of Terra's past, present, and future, and also the demolition office." {"Topic Id":"866648962093613056","TopicName":"Warhammer 40K"}{"TopicId":"1189653869824311 296","TopicName":"Thunder Warrior"}{"TopicId":"829644938555555840","TopicName":"Warhammer"}

I watched it first, the edited version and then the original version. Suddenly I felt that the original version was quite interesting.

" Constantine reacted immediately, even faster than immediately. He swung his spear perfectly and tried to pierce the traitor's chest. It was a fatal blow, a display of the ultimate speed and reflexes of the Custodes, a blow that no Space Marine could match or withstand. The spear stopped. In front of Abaddon's breastplate, the sudden stop hit Constantine like a firecracker. Although the force of pushing the spear was huge, Abaddon's left hand held the tip of the spear and stopped its advancement. A few drops of bright red blood oozed out from where he held the blade of the spear. 'The Marauder,' he whispered. The truth was so egregious that Constantine flinched. It was the only thing Abaddon would have expected him to do, especially one so powerful. Before Abaddon realized what he had done, he released the spear and struck Abaddon in the face with his fist..." - "End and Death 3" Chapter 9, Section 11 Earlier in the same chapter: "There is not enough space for a regular It was more like a jab. But it was Constantin Waldo. The knuckles of his golden armor hit Seka's mask on the left cheek. The Gastrins tightened their grip on him and pushed the knife into Waldo's body with his right hand. Erdo punched again, and then punched continuously. The third punch, the mask of Seka was broken. The fifth punch caused the mask and metal fragments to fly. The seventh punch forced Gastelin. The captain had to let go of the choke and desperately tried to block Constantine's punch, but this only gave Constantine more room to move, allowing the eighth punch to become a real swing, which completely deformed Seka's mask and knocked down Gastlin's leader..." {"Topic. Id":"866648962093613056","TopicName":"Warhammer 40K"}{"TopicId":"1174470838788554752","TopicName":"Custodes"}

This is also the first time I know that the work has limited monthly voting.

The first commander of the Imperial Guards, Constantine Valdo (P1), and Trajan Valoris (P2), the most powerful of all the Imperial Guards in the history. Photo source external website, author Ariel Sosa, Intrusion and deletion {"TopicId":"866648962093613056","TopicName":"Warhammer 40K"}{"TopicId":"829 644938555555840","TopicName":"Warhammer"}{"TopicId":"1174470838788554752","Topic Name":"Forces"}{"TopicId":"1236277452939853824","TopicName":"Warhammer Golden Dream"}

After reading seven chapters, one moment the protagonist is a time traveler, another moment the protagonist doesn't know where he came from, and another moment the protagonist is a Forbidden Army from ten thousand years ago 😰. The key is that some of the people next to him still know the protagonist, but the people checking the protagonist at the beginning don't seem to know the protagonist. Why is it so confusing?

There is no more for Hakimi, Asiga is the unlucky man.

I'm a little tired from watching it, so what's going on with the protagonist?

Why did it take 23 years to 26 years to write more than 200 chapters?

Kimi Kimi Kimi squawk

Can I add some essence? 😌

Why isn't it updated again? Woooooooooo