Completing the Script of Life in Japan

After reading Chapter 59, I already feel like the book is finished.

I knew it would be like this! In fact, this book was very good at the beginning, but something went wrong from the end of the first copy. It felt like the author just let himself go, adding all kinds of elements randomly and writing randomly! 😐

Emmm... The writing is still okay, but it feels a little mixed up, and it's not pure enough with a mask. Of course, it depends on the subsequent development. It would be better if it could be supplemented. Follow-up development, I think as long as it's not a dungeon plus a girl... There will be no problem

Why does the girl in the first plot suddenly approach the protagonist and become ambiguous? Did I miss it? Can anyone point it out? It feels very abrupt.

These two chapters feel a bit watery, or are they foreshadowing. The Mochizuki sisters all have dungeon memories, so accept them all?

It's okay, but the protagonist seems to be pretending. He wears a mask. Uehara's father should be able to see this. After all, he has so much experience. I think this can be written about. Otherwise, how good is the protagonist's acting skills? The movie king is all laji in front of him

Can anyone who understands explain it? Feeling fascinated after reading these latest chapters? So suspenseful? This transition is too abrupt! I can't understand it! 😥

This work is similar to fantasy literature, not a traditional cool novel. Still very good. Everyone can taste it carefully.

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Very well written, good luck to the author

I've finished reading it. It's quite good, but it feels a bit like I'm just trying to make love. This book will definitely get poor grades. It's too literary.

Just... How should I put it... Very fascinating😰

Is the system so stretched 😒

Hojo writes well, then 886.

? ? ? Who are you, the author?

The writing is very good, but my suggestion is that the ending will be best after the next heroine strategy, otherwise it will easily end.