The Wheel of Reincarnation: Living in Infinite Dimensions at Once

Here's a suggestion— Now that the tone of the novel has been determined, try not to switch styles too drastically. If the world of fantasy novels such as "Yang Shen", "Zhe Tian" and "Fanren Xiu Xian Zhuan" is involved, then the subsequent descriptions should also follow this pattern.

This book won't last long; it'll either be abandoned or have a terrible ending. Because it's too well-written. There's been a lot of enlightenment, but enlightenment isn't something that happens all the time. Once enlightenment is finished, what's left? Padding? That wouldn't be the style of this book. Several books I followed were abandoned because they were so well-written. As a result, they couldn't continue writing them. Sigh 😔 I hope I'm wrong.

How should I put it? It's strange, it always feels fake and empty.

Cognition and practice should go hand in hand. Having read up to chapter 50, I feel the protagonist is consistently lacking in both (no offense intended). It's not that it's bad, just that I'd appreciate more action. Also, author, please stop repeating the computationally intensive theoretical parts; it feels like padding the word count.

Delete it, stop waiting. Even if the author updates it, so what? With this attitude, he'll be nothing but a father figure when he comes back. We're here to read the book, not to see the author's attitude. Update it or not, it's up to him. Those who are waiting, stop waiting and just give up!

There's too much personal bias involved; it's all just interpretation and explanation. You're writing a novel, you know the basic elements of a novel, right?

It's too disjointed. In "The Legend of Yang Shen," there are long passages exploring metaphysical philosophy of cultivation, and then in the blink of an eye, it jumps to a world like "A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality." Don't you think the stylistic differences are too great? If a world like "Covering the Sky" can at least have a touch of mystical style, then a pure resource-swarming, locust-like world like "A Mortal's Journey to Immortality" just doesn't fit in at all.

Personally, I felt it was pretentious and empty, completely meaningless, and entirely the author's wishful thinking.

Author, it's been seven days since your death and you still haven't come back to life!

True enlightenment is through reflection. It's not the kind of enlightenment where someone "looks at the hazy world before them, everything blurred by the rain, his breath growing weaker and weaker, as if he's about to dissolve into all things, and then he thinks, 'Ah! He's enlightened!'" That's utterly ridiculous.