Traveling to Valoran, I Ate the Sparkling Fruit

Fun person? He's just a fool. He was caught inexplicably in the first chapter. It's outrageous that he almost lost his life by guessing. He didn't use it when he had the Overlord character later on. He was hammered twice by Bobby before he was willing to use it. . .

Is it invincible from the start? The Shining Fruit isn't that awesome, isn't it? Even with the addition of Haki, One Piece's system cannot reach the top of Valoran, at best it can only reach the peak of a mortal.

Awesome, pig's feet can be restrained by the Forbidden Magic Stone even if they have the Shining Fruit. You said you can tolerate being restrained by water. The stone restraint of forbidden magic is to weaken the pig's feet in disguise.

Can Devil Fruit be sealed by the Forbidden Stone? No way, the effect of the Forbidden Demon Stone is to absorb magic power, doesn't the Devil Fruit rely on physical strength to activate? The Sea Tower Stone also makes people with abilities powerless, and Luffy was still dragged out for a long time even if he was placed in the sea.

The fruit of One Piece is a physical attack, at least the natural energy attack must be a physical attack or activated by physical strength. It has something to do with the forbidden magic stone. Why don't you say that the Forbidden Demon Stone can also restrain physical strength? Where there is a Forbidden Demon Stone, everyone will have no strength.

This is a Chinese-speaking Japanese time travel story...

What is written in the beginning to persuade people to quit?

Good guy, there are so many, 47 vertical screens, but there are only three fans. I dare not read this book.

Well, you idiot, that's a devil fruit, not magic.

What does the author say? Let's see if you can mention your achievements next month. I'm a bit afraid that you will delete your account.

I gave the vote. Overall, there are no big problems. The writing is very good in the usual two-dimensional Lezi style. What the author lacks now is just time. Being recommended and recommended proves that your book still has some potential.