Trembling Reincarnation

Since the author was limited by his lack of writing skills, he could only label the characters, but he was also afraid that readers would not like them, such as Sister Xuan (a disgusting character), so in the later chapters, he changed the clown Tianba, Sword Fairy, etc. To match the personalities of the protagonist group, which instead made the characters mediocre. Personally, I think the problem is that non-protagonist group members, such as clowns, can have their own unique personalities. Even if they conflict with the protagonist, it doesn't matter. They can be enemies or friends (it is recommended to look at the character structure of Thriller Paradise). However, the people in the protagonist group should complement the protagonist, rather than letting the protagonist accommodate her in order to highlight their personality. Moreover, the characteristic of gambling is inherently unpleasant. People may love gambling, but there is a high probability that they will not like to have a friend who loves gambling, and is someone who sacrifices part of his own interests to gamble How should I put it, the author seems to be swinging between the setting and the readers, but it feels completely different. I hope the author can stabilize his mentality in the following chapters and portray the characters better.

When I saw Chapter 9, as an infinite article about the game, I started with this dungeon and ended with this dungeon ending. This paragraph can only be said and written: The settings are thrown away but not outstanding: deep dive/time fast/game panel may not appear. Character: Claims to be the king of secret rooms but is so afraid of ghosts that he has almost no brains. There is no branch line. What stands out is that he is just an ordinary person playing games (like a supporting role) Plot: No twists, no explosive points, no highlights, no arrests (later I thought the reversal would be interesting, but it didn't) Priting power: The perspective of God (narration) from the third perspective suddenly changes back and forth, and the lack of writing power reflects the pig-footed character design. It's like Xiao Xianrou, who has a great reputation but lacks acting skills, uses narration to praise and promote the plot. Goldfinger: None yet (neither the plug-in nor the pig's feet have their own abilities) I can't say it's bad, nor can I say it's good. I can only say it's unsatisfactory and barely watchable. The three golden chapters are completely wasted. Come on, author! Keep writing to the end! Just think of it as a process of practicing writing and building character.

{"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New Book Trial Reading"} I started with a sister, but my sister wanted to kill me; I started with a lord, but the lord fed the ancient god with his body. Others either fly with swords and become immortals, or they become mecha gods of war with a man's romance. Why am I either A Piao or an Ancient God! But don't tell me, this skill is really powerful! Book title: "Thrilling Reincarnation" Author: Tianlongyin Time: June 9-present Number of words: 200,000 words Tag: Game/Wits/Summoning Flow [Work Introduction] The work tells the story of a high-level player who was invited to experience the game "Nanke". The protagonist's new level is different, it is a supernatural version [Ghost Doll Hanako]. After using his own wisdom and strong logical reasoning ability to survive, he and other partners experienced other darker style copies. [Reason for Recommendation] The author hopes to achieve the feeling of "he has a story that he tells slowly, and you sit down and listen slowly." He added some words from the storytelling to introduce the characters in the text. Although it is slightly fragmented, it allows readers to intuitively feel the characteristics of the characters and clearly understand the author's intention. ＜Opening Slogan＞ The opening sentence of each volume is exciting enough. It can not only cleverly point out the topic, closely focus on the title of the volume and the plot of the copy, but also be thought-provoking, allowing readers to understand the truth contained in the opening sentence. At the same time, the title of each volume is also the theme, which runs through the storyline as a clue. ＜Reversal Plot＞ The author is good at using reversal of the plot to increase the contradictions in the story. At the end of the Hanako Volume, Hanako said that it was you who became the wraith, and the ancient god behind the truth about the family in the Reincarnation Volume. A small reversal will be performed at the climax of each plot to make the storyline more intense and increase the tense atmosphere. [Recommendation] This is a game novel with unlimited flow. The game is also a fully immersive open category. It is a highlight that the characters can change the original plot through certain important clues. However, being able to grasp the direction of the script depends on the author's writing skills. The protagonist has subtle observation skills and strong logical thinking ability, which helps the protagonist gradually find clues in the copy to unlock the final truth. The description of the brotherhood between the protagonist and his friends is also very exciting, making people feel "I am afraid that my brothers will have a hard time, but I am also afraid that my brothers will drive Land Rover." Reading this book reminded me of "Ace Evolution" and "Thriller Paradise". I hope this book can reach such heights in the future. Friends who like unlimited streaming and dark-style stand-alone games should not miss it.

I feel like it's very delicately written. It's not the kind of fast-paced and refreshing article. It should be popular. Grab a seat.

People can do this, but books can't write like this The player's style of doing things is different from that of normal people, empathic but chaotic, and has too much affection for NPCs

I can't stand it any longer. The first two books have a good rhythm, but the third one is so long and smelly. I even started to play stand-alone for a while...

Newbie, new book, signed a contract on the first day it was released, so happy. 😜😜😜 However, as a newcomer, there is no small circle of writers to recommend each other, and there are no seniors to help promote it, so I can only accumulate data slowly by myself. Recommendations, collections, monthly tickets, and click-through rates are all extremely important, otherwise there will be no exposure at all. So, your free recommendation ticket is as precious as a treasure to me. In addition to asking everyone for votes, the second thing is that I can only bet on a pair of livers. Please update more content in the early stage. Finally, thank you to everyone who has clicked on this book. I am very happy to meet you! 😅😅😅

Licking the four vendors is disgusting, bid farewell

Hey, it's another sister at the beginning.

The copy before it was put on the shelf was not very good, it was messy, complicated, and slow.

Why can Hanako be summoned but not Tokang?

I don't understand what the introduction is, what is the golden finger?

I feel like it's going to be hot. Grab a seat first.

Pig Pig

It's so long-winded. The language could be more concise.

Wuhu

I hope the author can try his best to match the combat power of the dungeon to the world view, and not forcefully mention the combat power just to write about a certain world. If it doesn't match, he hopes to be able to magically change the world, such as Dimension Corroder