I Have a Confession System

It doesn't feel very logical

The author writes it very carefully, and you can also read the novel. I would like to remind you that this is an original harem novel. The male protagonist first gains favor with the female protagonists one by one, and then the female protagonists fight back to gain favor with the male protagonist. During this period, the harems gain favor with each other, and finally it ends happily. I call it marathon-running light novels. The protagonist cannot win the trophy until the last moment. The male protagonist must hold back at the last moment. Holding the cup in advance will lead to the scumbag line and the novel will collapse. So let alone the male protagonist being incompetent, it is all for the final hidden prize. Being impatient will ruin the big plan.

The protagonist only confesses his love to one beautiful girl for 99 days, so the plot is much smaller. If I get this system, wouldn't it be better if I confess my love to 5 beautiful girls every day? Hey hey hey hey

Wow, look at there are at least 150 people working on it backstage, I'm going to make a scene! I'm really going to make a fuss! I'm making trouble now! (˃ ⌑ ˂ഃ )

It seems that all limited-duty and free products have one characteristic. The front is okay, but the further you go to the back, the more unsatisfactory they become. I read the first chapter carefully, but the next chapter just skipped by in a few seconds. Well

Long live the single heroine! Pure love is invincible!

There is something wrong with the values ​​set by the author. Master What is a Master? The masters are like the Eight Great Masters of the Tang and Song Dynasties. Qi Baishi. How many masters are there in total? No more than 50. What are the other collections? Isn't the Supreme First? There is also the last hall, which is obviously an invasion! It may be my fault, but can the author tell me what you mean by setting each level? Every time the level pops up, it affects the perception.

I feel that Nanami's plot is a failure. All the sadistic and unhappy plots are all hers. Before she came out, the plot was light and cheerful. Moreover, I personally don't like the identity of an underground idol. I have to serve every day, and I have to go to the door to "pull flowers". Although Nanami doesn't have it, she still feels like a bullhead. I can only say that the character design is not good, but there is nothing I can do if I don't write about one more person. It would be too simple to only write about the younger sister and the eldest lady, but there are too many plots in Nanami! ! !

Alas, the following content is a bit difficult to explain in one sentence. Dobashi is very inexplicable, and the stepmother and father's debts are also weird. The protagonist's personality feels very strange, like a robot, but also very weak.

The two men had too many supporting roles, and it felt like they were taking over the show, which made me a little tired.

No, can a Chinese who traveled back in time really call a Japanese biological father whom he has never met before? Forget it once or twice, but the result is that the writing of a dead Japanese father often appears, and I can't understand it.

This author is a bit unfinished

I have a few interesting questions that I would like to ask. 1. Does the teacher often sell meat during performances? Is the biggest prize in the lottery irrespective of people? Is he willing to do anything for his dreams? 2. Will the stepmother accept it? Has she ever had close contact with the pig's trotters' father? If it was to remarry his father out of gratitude, then do that kind of thing again. I felt quite uncomfortable. Please tell me if you see the boss at the back, otherwise I won't dare to read any more

Do you want to take a look at what you wrote? For the sake of the protagonist of the plot, can we not use our brains? You can't understand the words "until the target dies," right?

I just want to complain about one thing. After installing a system for the protagonist, why are the protagonist's actions still unsatisfactory?

It's so boring. Although I have relationships with so many beautiful girls, I do nothing and have no desire to continue reading.

How should I put it? I thought it was funny at first, but after my best friend cheated, I didn't feel that way anymore.

The author made the protagonist and the people around him very likable. It can be said that there is nothing poisonous about this book, which makes people feel relaxed and happy to read, but it is a bit lacking in stamina. It feels like there is only one thread between the eldest lady and the protagonist, so it feels a bit stomach-ache to delay in order to be able to match the background. The subsequent plot is not as exciting as the previous one. It is not a refreshing experience. I can only hope that the author will work harder.

There is a slight problem with the character of the teacher. Looking at all the light novels, which one has a falling out with the family and pursues dreams is not about maxing out the talent points. Why don't you inherit the family business even though you know you're not the one? It would be nice to cut off the idol status at the sasaeng fan and become a teacher without having to go offline. The messy plot behind it is a bit superfluous. To be honest, the teacher line is a bit of a pity, the front line is pretty good, the writing is more talented, and it could be more enjoyable.

I feel that the writing of Dobashi and Nanami is too thin. Dobashi is confused and Nanami is half-hearted. Dobashi can definitely expand into a copy. Now the relationship is progressing too fast and it feels like a pendant. Nanami writes with a heavy hand. Moreover, this book is too typical of a female protagonist and a male protagonist. Kawagoe's seat. The biggest highlight of this book is that it ends too early. The process is also a highlight, but it also feels rushed. I feel that it could be written more carefully and slower (the eldest lady is too easy to win). I can write more about the teacher and Tuyue's mentality first. Treat it as two copies, and the eldest lady should be won as the final boss. I feel like this book doesn't have many words at the end but more than 200 words will make readers tired, and the introduction of a new female character will dissuade most of them.

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The early part was well written. The part from just wanting to get the task reward to being ambiguous with the two people I confessed to was very good and very comfortable to watch. But it got very strange in the later stage. There were too many strange events interspersed, one after another, all of them were trying to solve the incident, and the sweet love was completely gone. I have slowly accepted the retirement of the system, and I am just waiting to see the story of Hazuki Dohashi, Nagi Kawagoe, Ling Yin, and Yuko gradually forming a harmonious family with the protagonist. But, he doesn't do that. He chooses multiple events and fills up the plot to make the heroine misunderstand the hero. The key is that he doesn't fill in the holes and writes a plausible plot to make you guess whether the hero has resolved this misunderstanding. I guess you are a nana. The most disgusting thing is that later on, for the plot of Nanami Ruka, a female character of Haruna Okura was added, creating a long suspense, but in the end it was useless. Not to mention whether this female character is necessary, but if this plot is required, it can be directly pointed out when Okura Haruna and the protagonist are talking in the cafe, and then realizes that Nanami Nana returns to Tokyo, and the plot switches to Nanami Nana. Oh, by the way, I tried to add a new heroine in the future, but there was no follow-up. I turned directly to Ling Yin, and Yuzi's plot was over.

Re-open it. I will follow your next book.

I read the comment section... Forget it and say goodbye.

I have started reading. The author's writing is very good. It is definitely worth reading and subscribing! Recommend a book that is decisive in killing, sharp and joyful. "Old Man in Time Travel Picks Up Rags and Survives by Making Bad Movies" is hilarious...

It was fine before it was put on the shelves, but after it was put on the shelves, the level of writing dropped drastically.

Is the author positive? Why is there no update? You should pay attention to your health during the flu season. Recuperation is the most important thing if you are really sick.

I read the comment section and it crashed after it was put on the shelves. But before it was put on the shelves, I felt very comfortable reading it. Give me 2 monthly passes to cheer you up.

It taught me to read the book circle before subscribing. After it was released, the character of the protagonist changed around like a wild monster. Before it was released, the personality of the character seemed to be broken and difficult to maintain.

Wuhu, finished and looking forward to the author's new work