Mystery: Lord of the Abyss

I would like to give the author a piece of advice. It's too late to stop now. It's taboo for the male and female protagonists in fan fiction to be all original. Even if the female characters in other works travel through time, it's much better than making up a fictional heroine for the protagonist. That's all. . I hope the author won't make a fool of himself. In recent chapters, it's really too much to fully portray this original female character. . Maybe in your mind, the author, this female character is your ultimate ideal type. . But it is extremely toxic to readers. Of course, if you are writing for your own pleasure and don't care about grades, then it doesn't matter how much space you give to this original heroine. .

Tell a joke, the devil is a good guy

As a fan novel, the first chapter shows the original protagonist self-destructing the time traveler. Then the code was correct and Teemo was recognized, but Aatrox was not recognized. Finally, look at the character card and introduction, the nanny story + the original heroine in the fanfic, plus your writing style of this dialogue in the previous chapters. . I can only say that you are really courageous. I hope that the author can make great progress in his writing and plot arrangement after reading this book.

The protagonist's mythical creature form can be referenced from the Crimson King, which is also my source of inspiration.

I would like to give a suggestion to the author. I suggest that the author open a fan forum to avoid reading a chapter. In this barber shop, you are not even an ordinary member, but you still like to shout in the comment area. Don't be too excited. It's not that my buddy looks down on you, it's that you are too anti-Kun 😁

Why doesn't anyone write about absolute evil? I want to read it. Author, why don't you change the order and become a demon? Demon is not suitable for you.

The original heroine has no clue, it would be better to have no heroine

Recently, everyone has been commenting on the image problem of Hillia. Here, the author would like to share his thoughts. When the author was writing this character, he happened to match this skin in a game, so he decided to use the Purgatory Witch as a reference for the character of Hillia. Thank you all for your support and discussion. (The cat puts its head in its hands)

The protagonist is very strange. He said that he followed Bai Zao for the survival of mankind and his own problems, but Zai Tinghe caused more serious casualties and made himself as disabled as a cripple. The protagonist must be a true god of the Abyss Path, not a warrior disguise!

What the hell, I came here to see Aatrox talk nonsense, and you have nothing to do with it.

I hope you don't become a eunuch like the Mysterious Djinn's Road to Freedom.

Protagonist

Thank you everyone for supporting me as a cute new author (Mao Maotou Bixin❤️❤️❤️)

I've read Chapter 6. The author's writing style is relatively average. This is probably his first time writing a novel? Also, Xiaoke's personality is quite different from that of the original work in at least the first six chapters. Well... He turned right when going out.

Xing Xing, one of the two idiots in the original novel, is no longer stupid. The contrast is a bit big.

Don't you want a eunuch? Are you going to write it now or not?

So you want to enter the palace? If you do, I will be satisfied. After watching most of it, I live in Bengbu.

(I haven't read it yet, but I'm going to get crazy about this subject first.) Please call me: The caster of stars in the universe The guardian of the river of time The traveler who wanders the star world

Are there too many flashbacks? 008'S narrative is often several chapters behind, and other unrelated characters have three separate chapters to narrate the plot?

Hello, I'm Aatrox, the Ender of Worlds...

... There are too many fan traps...

In addition to the book like Aurora Club, are there any other fans who take the abyss or the path of being bound? Please ask.