Douluo: Blind Douluo

The dialogue is stilted and can easily lead to drama. It is recommended to learn more from other novels. There are also many unnecessary plots, which are deliberately added to highlight the protagonist, which is too obvious. As a reader, I will skip some of the chapters after you according to the title, and I expect that you will be confused.

Can't the author use this thunder knife? Why does it have to be Tang Dao style?

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There is a lot of room for improvement in writing and plot control

What kind of person is Qian Xunji? To be honest, I have read a lot of Douluo books and fanfics. I always feel that everyone thinks of Qian Xunji's character as sinister, unscrupulous, and a scumbag. I also think Qianxunji deserves to be killed and is a scumbag, but I think Qianxunji's character shouldn't be like this. First of all, as the leader of a large force, no one can order him around, and he is highly talented. He must be arrogant and dignified. And as a leader, he must also have skills, he is ruthless, but not insidious; the proof is that the people around him are basically titled Douluo, and it is enough to use his power to suppress others, which can also highlight Qian Xunji's possessiveness. The martial spirit is a god-level martial spirit seraph, which can also influence people. Then it's Bibi Dong's business. First of all, because of Yu Xiaogang, Bibi Dong has to withdraw from Wuhun Hall. What's the concept? Moreover, Qian Xunji also tried to stop her. In the end, I personally feel that part of the reason was that she became a Chamber Douluo out of anger. Then Bibi Dong was imprisoned for a month, and then came out to wait for the birth of a child. After that, there was no mention of Qian Xunji continuing to possess Bibi Dong. I personally feel that Qian Xunji is possessive of Bibi Dong, not love, and partly uses her as a fertility machine. So, Qian Xunji is a conceited, arrogant, cruel and possessive person. Take this book as an example: Qianxunji will think that a blind man is not worthy of Bibi Dong, who he wants to use as a fertility machine, and will directly reject and transfer the protagonist. He is not likely to enter a secret room from the beginning, and will even stop using Bibi Dong because she has lost her virginity, and wants to kill the protagonist.

I think this book is a poisonous book. It was okay in the early stage, but in the middle stage, the protagonist is even more Tang San than Tang San. He has double standards, is a white-eyed wolf, is ungrateful, forced A Yin to be exposed, etc., And even let Yu Xiaogang teach his own child for several years. You are also awesome.

Bibi Dong

Author, I advise you not to make this book so short

What is it written? No matter what martial soul the protagonist absorbs, it is an Asura skill, and his sister's is a modified version of the devil. It is better to write a self-created soul skill than this. It always arranges various coincidences for the protagonist. Everything can be encountered. If you want to find a soul beast, you will come by yourself. If you find a treasure, someone will come. If you find a good thing in a bad guy randomly, if you find danger without the protagonist, the whole group will be destroyed., Sense of timeline. It feels ridiculously confusing. Tang Xiao is about 15 years older than Tang Hao but is actually the same age. Ning Fengzhi started dating Ning Rongrong's mother. Bibi Dong was only 13 years old. There is also a disgusting plot about Tang Hao not getting to know Xiao Wu's mother A Rou before A Yin. Do you still want to sacrifice? The upgrade is also ridiculously fast. Even the upgrade process is omitted. After a few chapters, you will upgrade to a few levels. I can't bear it anymore.

I got the jelly grass, but the protagonist didn't get the title until he was in his forties. He had several women, but his relationship was not going well at all. The author always likes to mess around with things. For example, Bo Saixi was pregnant, and the protagonist didn't know it. After more than ten years of leaving, A Yin was pregnant and faced Qian Xun's emergency. Then the plot was similar to Tang Hao's, A Rou also died, and Bibi Dong's plot was also terrible. In short, the author just didn't want to make readers happy, all kinds of disgusting people.

Wuhundian: "We are here, and they will build schools and hospitals for you, and give you subsidies. This is not because of their conscience, nor because they have become good people, but because we are here."

The protagonist's martial soul is innately full of soul power, so he can reach Douluo no matter what. If the Wuhun Palace knows about it, it won't be short of that little money. Building a sentient head soul bone to solve the problem of congenital blindness is a sure-fire business. And the protagonist doesn't want to reveal that he can sense the outside world. Just talk about martial arts and innate talents. What's wrong with directly entering the martial arts hall and relying on the big tree?

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DNF Asura

9-Year-old soul master Bibi Dong? It's not like Qian Renxue was born 20 years old and dared to accompany and kill the evil soul master at the age of 9? It's not like Tang San was reborn. The logic of this book is not good. Is it because I haven't read the original work? As a saint of Wuhun Palace, at this time, Wuhun Palace would not be equipped with a titled bodyguard? Now it's Qian Renji's speech

Bibi Dong couldn't have been so wise when she was young, or else could she let Yu Xiaogang be fooled into lameness?

A protagonist who has received the inheritance of the blind man. It takes so much effort to defeat the scum of the powerful King Kong Bear in the Colosseum with a difference of five levels. You said that it is a bit difficult to fight 25 against 35. Zhao Wuji is just garbage in "Douluo Dalu". It is not a problem to beat him with seven or eight levels less than Bi Dong. How did it end up here? The protagonist of your article is so low. The inheritance of the blind man is in vain. The world and the world are based on the eyes of the mind. The protagonist of your article is really blind.

After reading Chapter 26, I was already poisoned and died.

Knowing that Ah Yin is a 100,000-year-old soul beast, and still taking Ah Yin around every day, is the author going to let Ah Yin sacrifice to the protagonist? ? ? ?

First of all, there is no poison barrier now, because the poison barrier was put by Poison Douluo, and now the Poison Barrage is not level 89, so the author wrote the poison barrier here and I laughed. The Jade Phosphorus Flower is the companion creature of the Jade Phosphorus Snake, so where does the poison barrier come from?

Author, have you forgotten the Blue Silver Emperor? The Blue Silver Emperor didn't even appear at the end? ?

Is it necessary to write so much about "eating"? Either one is going to eat, or that is going to eat, either one is going to have breakfast, one is going to have lunch, or one is going to have dinner. Half of the chapter is about going to eat.

If you have the Shura God, don't insist on being the author of Thunder God. Are you okay?

Compared with the protagonist, Tang San is a true gentleman

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