Douluo's Light Sword Douluo

It's such an embarrassing situation, what else can I use besides talking? Each character can only speak fragments of sentences. . . .

I think it's very poisonous. The protagonist's sword is so blunt that it can't break the defense of anyone at the same level. One even stabbed someone else, only bleeding from the corner of his mouth, no wounds at all? Isn't this too fake?

The picture is the protagonist's lightsaber

I don't know how to put it, I think it's very poisonous. It's all just for the sake of showing off. It started so well, but the Spirit Hall ended up being left alone. I can't write anything apart from the original work. I don't want to read it. I suggest you don't read it either. It's really poisonous.

Come on, write the sword master in my heart, don't have too many secondary settings and other plots, stick to the main line

Although it's a bit awkward, but, well, the idea is quite good. At least it's not poisonous. The author is also making progress

The author should consider improving his writing style, now it looks like a running account. The sense of immersion is not strong.

Let me give you a preview, this is the cover design of the next book, what do you think 😃

It's so poisonous. In the early stage, Tang Hao came to see the protagonist. Later, the protagonist was worried about Tang San. What a dog. And this plot...

Sword Soul

Why does it feel like writing a diary?

You don't know why your writing skills are so bad, but in terms of ordinary works, your writing is okay, but you have forgotten that although fan fiction is easy to write, the fatal problem is that it is too plot-heavy. If there is no plot, your writing is nothing. My opinion is that you should write It is clear from this Douluo Dalu novel that the limitations of writing martial arts are too great, and absorbing high-end soul rings is too fake. You should pay close attention to the writing and color of the novels you read, just like an artifact, it will only be an artifact, and you must devour other artifacts if you want to advance. For example, the highest realm of Tao is nothingness, which means that everything exists and everything exists. If he didn't get the martial spirit, his limitations would be unlimited.

To be honest, there is nothing wrong with you writing Dabai novels, let alone the fanfics you write, right? But you are writing about a novice, can you feel more comfortable? You're unhappy. There's nothing in this writing that makes people see the strategy. You didn't write any strategy, so what did you write? You say there is innovation, but there is no innovation at all. What you can see here, I can see everything next door. If you write like this, you can only enjoy yourself in the end, and then cut it off.

When Zhao Wuji was bullied by Tang Hao, he used a fifth-ring soul skill to test whether a student was still a second-level student, but he still couldn't hold back his strength. . . .

Is this Aurora Sword the Gua Sha martial spirit? It can pick up Xiao Wu and strike continuously without chopping the person into several pieces. Xiao Wu stopped and acted as if nothing was wrong.

Bad review, I don't know what the author thinks of the plot.

I didn't pay attention to the introduction and thought it was this kind of lightsaber

I waited for the update, but I didn't expect that it was extremely poisonous. It was already poisonous... Something happened to burn paper.

The author has to say that you are really short and weak.

When I first read the trash novel, I didn't understand that the author had changed the original work too much.

Will the author poison himself after writing the latest chapter? 🤭😁

If you don't understand the plot, you can just write it down. If you become a god and continue wandering in another world, it would be better than now. It doesn't matter if you set the force value again.

It's so awesome. Tang San, the Soul King who is two years younger than Tang San, is still around level 30.

The first few chapters were okay, but Chapter 4 almost didn't send me away. A man with an innate soul power and a top-notch sword martial soul was allowed to go to school in Notting. He was so big-hearted that he wasn't afraid of being assassinated or snatched away by others.

It made me confused. There were all kinds of magical changes, most of the logic was irrational, and I was confused.

It poisoned me to death. Why would I write if I don't have the writing skills? The dialogue in this plot is so awkward that I can't stand it 😰

The strongest support was so vicious in the later stage. Hu Liena became the biggest winner, Qian Renxue became a licker. Hu Liena not only stole Bibi Dong's maternal love, but also gave her husband's love to her. Bibi Dong followed the protagonist and only felt guilty towards Hu Liena and did not show any expression to Qian Renxue. Qian Renxue forgave Bibi after knowing Bibi Dong's past. Dong kowtows to her, and Bibi Dong accepts it. Qian Renxue was hurt in childhood, and Bibi Dong didn't apologize. In everyone's heart, Qian Renxue has the highest status. In Bibi Dong's heart, Hu Liena is the protagonist, and in the protagonist's heart, Hu Liena, Bibi Dong, and Qian Renxue are ranked last. I feel that Qian Renxue can't compromise in the end.

What rubbish, Qian Renxue is really not worth it

It's so unfair to Qian Renxue. We should arrange an apology to Qian Renxue. Qian Renxue is really innocent, but in the end, Qian Renxue forgives Bibi Dong. How could such a big knot go away without an explanation? Hu Liena, the white-eyed wolf, became the biggest winner. In the hearts of Bibi Dong, the protagonist has the highest status, and Qian Renxue has the lowest status in everyone's heart.

I really can't stand being a full-time support person in the middle and late stages.