
Immortality of All Heavens: Blind Date with Xia He Under One Person
诸天长生:一人之下相亲夏禾
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- Ongoing
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- 95k Words
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- Male
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- Myriad Worlds
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- 3y ago
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- Qidian
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The protagonist who has lived for five thousand years has a junior high school student mentality and is really bullshit
Xia He
If you don't like it, you can just scold me. There's no need to slide away!
Blind date at this age? Old fossil eating ice cream?
Ask those who have watched it, is the protagonist the same type as Yi Xiaochuan?
The useless protagonist has lived for five thousand years and cannot even defeat the Heavenly Master.
Personal opinion: In the context of time travel + immortality, there are too many places that can easily become poisonous points. Strength, power, wealth, character, and wisdom must reflect the heritage and magnanimity of the immortal (the negative model Yi Xiaochuan). Having a heroine, if you don't handle it well in daily life, it is extremely poisonous. There are many beauties in history. Wherever Xia He stands out, she must show it.
Although I'm talking about newbies, if you set up the immortal, it must be an immortal and invincible horizontal tweet. I still don't know the direction of my development. Alas.
The biggest taboo when writing fan fiction is to compare the writing skills of other original works. Because it is difficult. You can borrow flowers to offer to the Buddha, but you can't add extravagant details or chisel the wall to steal the light. . . The second design can come in secret, and will never fight openly. If it is not well written, it can also allow readers to vent their anger through the character's mouth. Apologizing is the most useless thing.
Say it clearly! I don't like single female protagonists!
If you can't defeat the Heavenly Master in more than five thousand years, just die, don't live anymore, you are useless.
One person, in the snow, the sword comes, takes off... Come on, Wuhu
His writing style is average, but he is good at belittling others and promoting himself.
When writing rules, the format is not enough, and the writing skills are not good enough. Also contains private goods. Private goods refer to personal views and cognition. You can describe it, but you can't bring it in. After all, everyone is different. But you can express your own three views by choosing your own path. That's character realism. Instead of carrying private goods. Now that the threshold for novels is getting lower and lower, I think I can write a novel. It's not that I'm very good, it's that there's nothing left to watch. . . It is also autumn. Some people write about their moods, some people write about their feelings, and some people write about the scenery. . . Some people also use metaphors to describe people and things. . . Actually, I really want to ask, how did you graduate from elementary school? Have you never written a composition in primary school? Were they all copied? . . I remember that year, the teacher asked the students to keep a diary. I need to check when I come back from vacation. Everyone says to write casually, but the teacher won't read it carefully. . . Our vacation lasted for 60 days that year, but I wrote about 120 days of autumn, and it rained today. I feel very happy. . . It rained for 120 days, why didn't you drown? The whole grade was quiet, only my scalp was numb! . . What are you thinking about? Fortunately I don't have dandruff! Under the sun, looking at the teacher's white pants, they are pink. You go back first. Stop the embarrassment. As I was about to walk out, I turned around and said, I didn't see your red underwear. No, your white pants look great. Pap-pap-pap is the sound of my escape footsteps. I guess I said the wrong thing. Our teacher's name is Xia Qiu! . . . . Written casually, what do you think?