Swallowing the Starry Sky: Awakening of the Heavenly Rewards System at the Beginning

After reading these fifty chapters, except for killing Atkin, the rest are all poison.

What a literary talent! To be able to write the classic "Swallowing the Starry Sky" into an urban pretentious and slap-in-the-face novel, the author is truly a genius.

I am writing a fanfic without reading the original work. Reversing time and space is an ability given to the Lord of the Universe by the original universe. As long as the Lord of the Universe is not strong enough, even if he can kill the true God, he will not be able to reverse time and space. Do you think you can write about it after watching some anime and a few fanfics?

I just clicked in. The three book friend circles in the introduction all have negative reviews. Let me give it a try.

I came in because of the novel system you introduced, which does not abuse the master. As a result, the good guy was ridiculed at first, then hunted down, his sister was forced to get married, and after becoming invincible, Hong's reward was robbed, and his sister was kidnapped and then blown up. As we all know in the plot, the earth was bought by Nuo Lanshan and many people were killed. It was poisonous all the way.

All I can say is that this is the worst Devouring Starry Sky novel I have ever read. It's full of poison. It has its own system, and even my sister can't protect it. She was killed by others, and she's still being judged by others. She's like a fucking dog. The more I read, the more annoyed I get.

The Venerable can reverse time and space and resurrect people. Damn it, it's too poisonous.

You have surpassed the God of War. Are you still living so frustrated? ? ? He must be a fake god of war. Reading your book is a waste of time. . Just call it eunuch, don't write it next time

The Lord of the Universe reverses time and space and resurrects the protagonist's relatives! This poison is too strong to handle.

This ancient version of writing is an outdated routine. I would like to ask the author why you wrote the book? You are only a first-class author, how dare you write a novel about abusing a master? I'm really convinced.

I read Chapter 4 and was too lazy to read it. According to my understanding, the giant ax got slapped twice in front of the Earth Family.

Your book is disgusting to me. The more I read, the angrier I get. Originally, everyone came to read the book for entertainment. After reading your book, now I just want to find something to smash and vent. It's so fucked up.

Damn it, your grandma made my blood pressure skyrocket. Reading a novel made me mad. It's too poisonous. It's too poisonous. It's a good setting. It's extremely poisonous. I've read the worst, worst, worst novels. Damn it. Reality is not easy. Reading novels is just for fun. As a result, you are all kinds of poisonous.

The extremely poisonous writing method of Wuyu hundreds of years ago is still used in writing now, the author is as licking as a dog,

I removed it from my bookshelf after reading the first chapter of The Poison

I believe my brothers, it's really poisonous and it didn't last past three chapters 🙂🙂🙂

Too poisonous! Problems that arise in the first few pictures: 1. In the original book, it is written that only Extreme Martial Arts and Thunder Martial Arts on earth provide free registration and basic learning at the age of 16. Other martial arts must wait until you become a martial artist or go to college before you can learn them in person at a certified online school and cannot be taught externally. 2. You cannot leave the base city if you are not a martial artist (the original book also mentions this). 3. Then there is the geographical location. There cannot be deserts from Tianjing, Henan, Hebei, to Northeast China. Did your geography teacher teach you geography? As soon as the author sees you, you are writing novels about useless heroes and villains, or you are really a newbie writer just picking up the bad money! Devouring the Starry Sky fandom, can't you cover it up? You can take the bonus if you want, but can you please read the original work first and respect it!

Author, I'm really curious as to why you wrote this? Or what is your writing idea? Can you give me an overview? I'm really curious!

What he says is that he is not abusing the protagonist, but what he writes is very real. It is just short of selling the main character's wife to a brothel to abuse the protagonist.

Almost poisoned me to death, Shennong has passed away💀

In the first chapter of the game, I started poisoning like crazy and tortured the boss like crazy. I was really impressed.

I don't even know how I was able to read hundreds of pages of this book as an immortal peasant. Looking back now, I can't bear it anymore and I'm trying to persuade you to quit.

The author probably hasn't read Swallowed Starry Sky carefully, and the way he writes it gives people the impression that he just writes the content himself as he "sets out a development path".

The setting in the first chapter was okay, but the writing in the subsequent articles was a bit terrible.

The author writes very well! Welcome everyone to click on the homepage to view my work ~ Rebirth as a Wolf, the Alien Beast genre, supplementing the world view of the Devouring Starry Sky.

Most of the fans of "Starting Point Devouring" have read it, but this is the only one that I can't finish the second chapter.

Full-time master driver, Pokémon world, prehistoric world, spiritual cage world. Super Seminary World