Mysterious Recovery: Solving the Dachang City Incident at the Beginning

This introduction is 6B. As a fan of Mysterious Resurrection, Mysterious Resurrection is a desperate struggle to survive. The overall atmosphere is relaxed and funny. Are you kidding me?

The writing is really interesting, I humbly accept it in the comments, but I won't change it. If I don't know how to write, I'll take a good look at how the fans write it. Except for the characters and the location of the events are the same as in the original work, there is nothing else like the mysterious resurrection. Brother, don't think that your writing is not bad. It's a mysterious fan novel and there's nothing interesting about it. The whole suspense is nothing special. Otherwise, I'd still want to find it in the list.

If you have a golden finger, there is no need to join the headquarters. There is a lot of bullshit and you have no strength. If you are not careful, people will be gone! The protagonist's character is too weak! A lot of poison

What rubbish? The start is very toxic, but it's still the kind of licking the dog story that first messes with the pig and then shows off and slaps you in the face. I'm really convinced.

In Poisonous novels, if the emotional scenes are not good, why don't you write them? Poisonous novels are all about female supporting characters. They are written like pig food.

It's very well written. Don't write it again in the future. I basically don't understand the original work. How about I introduce you to a factory where you can make screws? The wages are good.

A critical attack at the beginning. This Sun Xing girl is really mentally retarded. She is like an idiot. She has no brains to pester the protagonist. She is disgusting. The poison resistance directly breaks the defense. If you don't know how to write a female character, don't write it. OK?

? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? Brother is so poisonous, I really can't bear it anymore. I just saw that I was about to enter the ghost realm of starving ghosts. I read that some people have been saying that it is very poisonous in the first few chapters. The author commented below and accepted it humbly. But why does it become more and more poisonous the more I write about it? Unnecessary emotional lines. The protagonist seems to be tough on the surface when meeting people, but turns out to be a coward. When meeting ghosts, he obviously can't do it, but he insists on pretending. After pretending, he was beaten into a dog's head. In the end, the protagonist's aura came and he successfully reversed the situation. It was too poisonous. As an author, you can try writing urban or romantic novels, or fanfics about mysterious resurgences, but this is not suitable for you.

The third golden chapter directly persuades others to quit. It can be seen that the author puts his heart into trying to persuade others to quit.

Shen Nong was so poisoned that after reading two chapters patiently, his anus and intestines were severed and he could no longer bear it.

The poisonous hair can kill the starving ghost. Even if the pig's foot knows that it will not recover, does the entire headquarters know? He keeps provoking people, killing them, grinding and moaning until he is dying, and he still has to make up for his mistakes before he is done! What the hell, it never grows? He also kept saying that he has a little guy mentality, which is so damn bad, he died from poison after watching it!

I was scared when I saw the introduction. Mysterious Resurrection. You actually said you would add a lot of funny things into it.

It's so well written, there aren't many books that make me throw up before finishing the third chapter.

I knew what this novel was as soon as I saw the second chapter. It was the first time I saw a horror novel that forced a supporting female character into the beginning. If you don't know how to write, why don't you read more of those fanfics? Read more and try to imitate it. What the hell are you writing?

The first time I saw the introduction, I was speechless and mysteriously revived. Your introduction actually said something funny.

Chapter 2: Persuading women to quit. Just ask what organization the National Special Operations Force is when you come up. My brother will tell his sister, right?

It's poisoning me to death. If you can't write a scary atmosphere, you might as well write a cool article. I've read a few of them and I don't even know what kind of bird it is. It's not as good as a composition written by a primary school student.

There are only two wry smiles on the first page. I personally suggest changing them. After all, the wry smiles are now a bit like poison.

After reading a few chapters, it was determined to be highly toxic.

From beginning to end, it feels like a novel written ten years ago. The character of the protagonist is really hard to describe. Even if it is placed in an urban novel, the character will not survive three episodes. Every rhythm point in these chapters is passive and smelly. If I write it like this, I suggest that the eunuch be honest. So far, it is true that there is not even a single point of enjoyment.

The plot is so slow that a starving ghost wrote dozens of chapters, and many of the plots actually serve no purpose. The routines are very cliche. The protagonist is also a bragging and cruel talker, but when it comes to ghosts, he writes a lot of cowards. Mainly, don't you think your description is strange? On the one hand, I'm afraid of death, on the other hand, I'm impulsive, and on the other hand, I'm joking to ease the tension of others. If there are plug-ins, I won't use them. I have to make myself bruised and bruised. I'm afraid that the plug-ins will be more excessive in the future. But if you don't improve yourself now, you will die if you really encounter it in the future. It's so contradictory that I don't know how to describe it. Everyone has their favorites, and you are not my type. It's really poisonous for people with brains.

How do you put it? I know the plot and have died. If I don't study it for a few years, it's like waiting for death. I don't even understand my own abilities at the beginning. The characters are just typical passers-by. I wouldn't be able to survive a few chapters in other fandoms.

At the beginning, all five poisons are available. How to write the poison points?

The protagonist of the apocalyptic novel is a Virgin who sacrifices herself to save an unknown stranger.

In the first thirteen chapters, there are too many poisonous points. The female supporting character in the front is brainless and speechless, and the protagonist still cooperates with the interaction. In the early stage, he knew clearly that the starving ghost and the wishing ghost in the unsolvable level dungeon were plotted all the way, but he still continued to be a holy mother with a playful smile. The writing is good, the plot has nothing to do with the evil world of the five turbidities, romance, the Holy Mother

The main plot will appear after the Hungry Ghost incident. This book definitely not only follows the main line of the original work to advance the plot. The introduction and cover of this book spoil a lot of the plot. The protagonist's abilities will be diversified, and the "gold finger" of the plate is just an introduction or carrier.

I feel that this golden finger is not good. Is it the protagonist controlling the golden finger or the golden finger controlling the protagonist? Just like some system novels that constantly launch missions and kill the protagonist if they cannot complete them. It seems easy to dissuade.

I've read the first few chapters so far. What kind of beautiful woman is added to this makes me sick. Let's take a look and see if the woman behind the scenes is the heroine. Or if there are still a lot of plots about her, I will give up.

After reading Chapter 38, there are some toxic points, but not many. If you look at the comment section, most of them are negative comments. Personally, I think that in this world, there are always people with different personalities. Some people are dedicated to the country, some people just want to survive, and some people even think about being small people. So I understand the protagonist's behavior. Not everyone is a macho man like Yang Jian.

Chapter 3 of persuading you to quit is because you can't help it