Swallowed Star: Awakened the Heaven Rewards Hard Work System from the Start

Having read these fifty-odd chapters, aside from the one about killing Atkin, everything else is toxic.

What a beautiful piece of writing! The author is truly a genius for turning the classic novel "Swallowing the Stars" into a melodramatic urban fantasy story full of slapstick and backstabbing.

Someone who hasn't even read the original work is writing fanfiction? Reversing time is a power bestowed upon the Lord of the Universe by the primordial universe. Even if someone could kill a true god, they wouldn't have the power to reverse time unless they reached the Lord of the Universe's strength. Do you think watching a few anime and a few fanfics is enough to write this?

I just clicked in, and the introduction and the three screenshots in the reader community are all negative reviews. I'm here to test the waters.

I started reading about your novel system based on its description, hoping it wouldn't cause suffering to the protagonist. But wow, the beginning was filled with mockery, then a relentless pursuit, my sister was forced into marriage, and after becoming invincible, the rewards I received from Hong were stolen. My sister was kidnapped and then blown up. I already know the plot: Earth was bought by Norlan Mountain, resulting in numerous deaths. It's a truly toxic journey.

I can only say this is the worst novel about swallowing the starry sky I've ever read. It's utterly toxic. He has a system, yet he can't even protect his own sister, who gets killed, and then he's subjected to a trial, all while acting like a sycophant. The more I read, the angrier I get.

The Venerable One can reverse time and resurrect people, holy crap, that's ruthless!

This outdated writing style, this tired old formula—I want to ask the author, what was your motivation for writing this book? You're only a first-level author, how dare you write a novel that tortures the protagonist? I'm truly speechless.

The cosmic sage reverses time and resurrects the protagonist's family! This poison is too potent to withstand.

You've surpassed even the God of War. And you're still living such a miserable life??? You're a fake God of War, aren't you? Reading your book is a waste of time. Just abandon it already, don't write anything next time.