Mystery Revival: From the Start, Resolving the Dachang City Incident

The writing is really interesting, I humbly accept it in the comments, but I won't change it. If I don't know how to write, I'll take a good look at how the fans write it. Except for the characters and the location of the events are the same as in the original work, there is nothing else like the mysterious resurrection. Brother, don't think that your writing is not bad. It's a mysterious fan novel and there's nothing interesting about it. The whole suspense is nothing special. Otherwise, I'd still want to find it in the list.

If you have a golden finger, there is no need to join the headquarters. There is a lot of bullshit and you have no strength. If you are not careful, people will be gone! The protagonist's character is too weak! A lot of poison

What rubbish? The start is very toxic, but it's still the kind of licking the dog story that first messes with the pig and then shows off and slaps you in the face. I'm really convinced.

In Poisonous novels, if the emotional scenes are not good, why don't you write them? Poisonous novels are all about female supporting characters. They are written like pig food.

It's very well written. Don't write it again in the future. I basically don't understand the original work. How about I introduce you to a factory where you can make screws? The wages are good.

A critical attack at the beginning. This Sun Xing girl is really mentally retarded. She is like an idiot. She has no brains to pester the protagonist. She is disgusting. The poison resistance directly breaks the defense. If you don't know how to write a female character, don't write it. OK?

? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? Brother is so poisonous, I really can't bear it anymore. I just saw that I was about to enter the ghost realm of starving ghosts. I read that some people have been saying that it is very poisonous in the first few chapters. The author commented below and accepted it humbly. But why does it become more and more poisonous the more I write about it? Unnecessary emotional lines. The protagonist seems to be tough on the surface when meeting people, but turns out to be a coward. When meeting ghosts, he obviously can't do it, but he insists on pretending. After pretending, he was beaten into a dog's head. In the end, the protagonist's aura came and he successfully reversed the situation. It was too poisonous. As an author, you can try writing urban or romantic novels, or fanfics about mysterious resurgences, but this is not suitable for you.

The third golden chapter directly persuades others to quit. It can be seen that the author puts his heart into trying to persuade others to quit.

It's so well written, there aren't many books that make me throw up before finishing the third chapter.

The poisonous hair can kill the starving ghost. Even if the pig's foot knows that it will not recover, does the entire headquarters know? He keeps provoking people, killing them, grinding and moaning until he is dying, and he still has to make up for his mistakes before he is done! What the hell, it never grows? He also kept saying that he has a little guy mentality, which is so damn bad, he died from poison after watching it!