Mystery Revival: From the Start, Resolving the Dachang City Incident

This is terribly written. I humbly accept the criticism in the comments, but I'm not going to change it. If you can't write well, then take a good look at how fanfiction is written. Aside from the characters, events, and locations being the same as the original, it has absolutely no sense of the mystery resurrection. Dude, don't think you're doing a good job.

With such a cheat-like advantage, there's no need to join headquarters—it's all a mess, and you're powerless; you could easily get killed! The protagonist's personality is too weak! Lots of flaws.

What garbage! It starts off incredibly toxic, and it's one of those simp stories where the protagonist first gets slapped by a pig and then acts all high and mighty before getting slapped in the face. Seriously!

Poisonous novels, if the romance isn't well-written, why not just leave it at all? Poisonous novels are full of female supporting characters, they're just sloppy writing.

It's well written, but don't write anymore. You basically don't know anything about the original work. Or I can introduce you to a factory where you can work as a screwdriver. The salary and benefits are excellent.

The opening is a critical hit; this female character is so poorly written, like an idiot, mindlessly clinging to the protagonist, it's disgusting. Her poison resistance is instantly broken. If you can't write female characters, don't write them, okay?

Wow, this is too toxic! I can't take it anymore. I've practically entered the realm of starving ghosts. I saw people saying the first few chapters were toxic, and the author humbly accepted their comments. But why is it getting even more toxic?

The first three chapters were so compelling they were off-putting; it's clear the author put a lot of effort into discouraging readers.

This is incredibly well-written; there aren't many books that made me want to throw up before I even finished three chapters.

The poisoning was enough to solve the problem of starving ghosts, even if the protagonist knew he wouldn't recover, did the entire headquarters know? He kept provoking people, and when he finally killed the provocateur, he dragged his feet, was incredibly sluggish, and only considered it done after making amends! What kind of idiot is this? He never grows up? He keeps saying he has the mentality of a nobody, seriously, I almost died from the poisoning after watching!