Hogwarts: Azkaban Reserves

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Is the protagonist aboriginal? The protagonist knows nothing and has a mysterious confidence. Looks weird

There is actually nothing wrong with this book. The biggest problem is that it is too boring and has no attractive plot.

This is the first time I have seen this type of existence. As Voldemort's brother and relatives supporting him, I have really seen enough of the plot of defeating Voldemort's BOSS...

The latest chapter changes Grindelwald's declaration of wizard supremacy to pure-blood supremacy. This is intolerable. If the author is so careless, this book should not be followed.

The writing up to Chapter 71 was good, but it didn't resemble anything written by popular authors (going to school → working with Voldemort). It was just that the writing was a bit poor, and there were constant minor poisonings. What was the protagonist's previous life? It's confusing. The author's Tom is stingy and always obsessed with pure-blood family issues, just like a ***. Isn't it a good idea to start one yourself if you have the strength? After Chapter 71, I couldn't accept the change of wizard supremacy to pure blood supremacy. Regardless of the two-letter difference, one represents normal intelligence. The other represents wisdom*

I hope we won't make some common sense mistakes. For example, how could the concept of genes appear in the 1930s and 1940s? DNA was not discovered until the 1960s, and genes are even less likely.

According to the author of the movie "Saints Are Not Extreme Pure Blood Fans", is this a private setting or is it based on the HP official website? If it were set up privately, it would be very toxic and would have to dissuade a lot of people.

To be honest, I didn't feel very happy. After reading it, I really felt that the male protagonist should be Tom. Tom is better than the protagonist, and he also brags about Tom and makes the protagonist look like a clown. It's really boring. It's difficult to write a story with two male protagonists.

Protagonist: How many people did you kill with Avatar? Voldemort: A few hundred people Protagonist: Very good, what about yesterday? Voldemort:????

Saints have nothing to do with blood theory, right?

Quick update 🙂 One chapter a day is simply not enough

I've read Chapter 80 and I like it very much. The writing is excellent, the characters' IQs are online, and the protagonist's rational character is also reasonable. Good. Already on the bookshelf, I recommend adding it.

Being a brother to Voldemort is inseparable from one thing - the product of love potion does not understand love.

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Voldemort should be older than Professor McGonagall

Come on, write from Tom's era, either the first generation of the Dark Lord, or the student days, but it is inevitable to be slow in the student days, even you are too slow to warm up, there are too few ignition points in the front, and someone has to watch the free period. There are more people who can pay in the back, and the subject matter is very good in so many time periods starting in 1991. , It is very attractive to have a new time period to write. I feel that your way of writing a book is more narrative. It is not as fast-paced and high-energy as an online novel. If you can't continue writing later, it is better to start over and re-conceive it. If you really rewrite it, remind me, I like to read fanfics in this time period.

It's too difficult to live in other people's homes. Originally, Tom Riddle would go back to the orphanage every year during the holidays. Now that he has a brother with similar abilities, he goes to live in other people's homes. It makes him dig his toes into the ground.

The plot of Harrington is a bit long-winded and feels smellier and longer than the Goblet of Fire