Start Cultivating Immortality from a Fisherman

It's a free watch, and it's poisoned. It can be very interesting in the early stage, but it's useless to do things once you get to Aquamarine Star. The protagonist can become an immortal by fishing, pretending to be gods and ghosts on Aquamarine Star all day long, pretending to be extraordinary powers. Don't do it all the time, you will get tired of it. Then, the fusion of the evil god restraint system and the cultivation of immortals is very inconsistent, and the protagonist has great restraint means, right? The protagonist has thunder and lightning spells that are very restrained by other immortal cultivators. When I saw that there were more than 700 comments, it shouldn't be exempt from the upper limit, and it turned out that one account had framed hundreds of pictures. . .

After reading a little bit, I would like to express my opinion. The needs of the two worlds are completely unequal. One is the world of cultivating immortals, and the other is the modern world. In the modern world, it is really cool to have extraordinary manifestations of saints and only one's own method. However, the role that the modern world can provide to the world of cultivating immortals is extremely limited. It is not as exciting as the two worlds of Lilliput in the author's previous book. Compared with the world of cultivating immortals, modern technology is really far behind.

It's not as good-looking as My Little People, and it's not enough fun. It's a pity that such a novel with such a good idea has to be dismissed.

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About a hundred chapters in, I said that this book did not need so many vests on the earth, which was a big failure. This kind of routine was very novel when the author wrote it in the first book, and it was also suitable for the setting of the book. Now this routine is not suitable for the setting of this book. Secondly, many people have used it, and the author himself has not made a breakthrough. So now the author has given up after writing it. Now when it comes to the earth, it is just a simple sentence that extraordinary forces have brought it, and there is no distinction between this family and that family. The results of this book are not good. Roughly speaking, first of all, the author's writing style is relatively relaxed. After the plot, the story ends without development. Secondly, this kind of flow between the two worlds is often the earth. The extraordinary power is in the hands of mortals. They will almost certainly collide and transform the world more or less according to their own will and their own methods. But now the author has almost cut off the earth branch, which really doesn't make much sense.

The biggest problem in the modern world is that the author arranges for the protagonist to be the mastermind behind the scenes and fabricates myths everywhere like in the previous book. The problem is that in my opinion, the protagonist does not need to do this at all. The protagonist is actually doing meaningless things. Why don't you just say that you are a monk and say nothing else, or say that you have special powers or something like that? Now the protagonist has made up so many shells, but once you make up, you have to make up more to perfect. I think it will only become more and more tiring. What's the point? Just asking for trouble.

The big guys in the world of cultivating immortals have formulated a "Wandering Stone Plan". This plan is based on a secret space, with the best earth veins as the array, the best spiritual veins as the energy source, and the nuclear fusion golden elixir as the driving force. All the top masters work together to turn the secret space into a stone that cannot be digested by the evil god. Finally, the evil god excretes it as indigestible residue, thereby achieving the purpose of escaping from the world and wandering the universe.

， I have always felt something was wrong before. Has the author thought about which direction to take the writing? If your focus is on the plot of the world of immortality, then your writing method is too weird. If you want to write about behind-the-scenes, your behind-the-scenes elements are the things you control, people, and organizations that interact with each other and rely on these to reflect the content. There are too few of these elements. If you want to take into account the content of the Immortal Cultivation World, the progress of the Immortal Cultivation World should be slowed down and not pushed forward, and then the earth part should be more interactive and the protagonist's role should be less. Do you still remember the original Taoist Priest, what was his surname? You have compiled so many places now, Xiba, Neon, Nepal, and the East. You have to let them interact with each other. What I feel now is that I have been making up stories, and after finishing the writing, there are very few output elements. It is very tiring to read. After finishing the story, I went to the Immortal Cultivation World, and the progress of the Cultivation Immortal World was still being pushed forward. They were all stuck and couldn't take a breath, and they were already vomiting blood.

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Spear-bearing monk

The novel can be said to be anticlimactic. The beginning is amazing, but from the end it becomes a mess. It is far less beautiful than the original "My Lilliput". To show off to the people on earth, only the beginning is good. The cultivation in the world of immortality is like a simple novel that can be upgraded as long as the resources are padded... The content in Goldfinger is too unnatural and far inferior to the self-reliance and logical harmony in "My Lilliput"... Those buildings and partners , in fact, it can be the setting of the protagonist, rather than blindly relying on the setting of the Diaoyutong system. The protagonist only likes fishing🎣 because of the appearance of the system, and is not a real traditional person who likes fishing🎣, and does not know the meaning of the existence of the Diaoyutong system... That's it, let's abandon the book like this I hope the author's next novel will be good.

I just don't understand? Wouldn't it be nice to stay in the world of immortality? There are plug-ins and auras. If you have to go back to Earth, what is there on Earth? , Nothing! Then what's the use of going back? What else can you do besides go back and show off?

The more complex and rubbish it is, just write two or three faction vests. You have to open vests everywhere. Once you have the strength, it is useful to open so many vests. Once you open the vests, you will ignore them. The apprentices will always be garbage. You will not be like the previous book. By the end of the book, the disciples have just started to practice. If you don't write it, just write the rubbish point of opening vests everywhere. Can't two or three factions? Does it have to be open globally? Can't we just take it all 🐶? Where did you learn balance? It looks disgusting.

The writing of this book is meticulous, and I think I am the only one who can do it. As a result, Blue Star uses vests to do things everywhere, all relying on the aura of intelligence reduction, especially the real cultivator and fake cultivator. It gives me too strong a sense of the Lilliputian country. The author can't get out. In addition, Goldfinger is too strong. The protagonist does a lot of incomprehensible operations without the slightest crisis. This book is a book to read. You have to be a low-class food and grass to survive. It's a pity to throw away tasteless food

After going high and low, I became more and more dissatisfied. The main character, Golden Finger, could travel both on the earth and the world of immortality. Originally, I thought he was the only one who could live on earth and live forever in the world of immortality. As a result, there are less and less plots on Earth, and there are also a few useless college apprentices on Earth who have no influence on the plot. They send pills, exercises, and magic weapons. I strongly suspect that the author wrote himself into it for obscenity The World of Immortality Things were going well before, but suddenly he turned into an evil god and came to save the world. However, the entire world of immortality was swallowed up by the evil god. Being infected by the evil spirit means becoming a demon. It's not like he died. What do you want to save? Save the common people? But the protagonist's ability is only to protect a small sect and city.

I watched it a day later and it still ranked 91st. Not many people watched it now. Author, you have to think carefully about why this is the case

Blue Star has indeed been downplayed. Even after the protagonist began to transcend, even the relationship between his parents began to fade away. Now every time he goes back, he just looks at it from afar and then leaves to do his own things. He just arranges a seemingly happy life for his parents. . The protagonist begins to turn into the kind of person who is a tool for cultivating immortality that I hate the most. . . 🤫 Secondly, they wanted to lead Blue Star Technology to develop spaceships, but found that the fairy boats in the world of immortality were more cost-effective, so they simply downplayed them. . . He wanted to lead Blue Star to cultivate immortality, but found that the human race that he plundered from the immortal world after he became stronger was more suitable for cultivation, so he continued to downplay the Blue Star people. . . 👍👍 Blue Star people are only qualified to practice modified garbage techniques. Only one in a billion Blue Star people are qualified to practice, but people from other worlds are stuffed into the secret realm with rich spiritual energy. There are even fewer Blue Star people in the secret realm than a large workshop in the world of cultivating immortals. There are many people in the city, and from the Yunshan City to the Biyuan Realm to the Five Elements Realm, can anyone count how many cities the protagonist has swallowed up 🙄 As a Blue Star person, we don't want to recruit people on Blue Star to cultivate direct descendants but to cultivate people from other worlds. After all, we are not worthy, right? To be honest, Blue Star is just a safe house for you in the early days. Please let us go now. Come fishing if you have nothing to do. After you finish fishing, please go back to your world of cultivation. 😤

There is something wrong with the protagonist's three views in the middle and later stages. For example, if you, an immortal cultivator, want the blood of a mortal, buying you with money feels too low-end. If you insist on poisoning a large group of mortals, then send a magic stick to treat them! . . . It doesn't matter if you've gone through this method in a few strokes, you still need to write it in a long way. . . . I've seen too many scenes like this. It will be annoying.

I simply made up a deceptive background story for the protagonist There are various caves in the deep space of the earth. Deep in the cave space is the world of evil spirits. The attacks of evil demons on the caves will change tidally At the peak period, each faction will retreat to the space, and the sects that cannot hold on will be destroyed by the cave. Destroyed, so they are fully defensive, and the opening and closing of the cave will cause space fluctuations to attract more evil spirits, so there will be no monks on the earth The factions that survived the trough period will use their faith to purify the corpses of evil spirits as materials for expanding or building new caves, so there will be more monks on the earth

Seeing that there are now more than 200 chapters, the pig's trotter is still in the middle stage of foundation building. It is too overwhelming. The world of immortality has entered the belly of the great god. The battles in it are all about golden elixirs and god transformations. The pig's trotter is just a little shrimp picking up scraps. It is too boring. . . Don't talk about the pig's trotters being incompetent. The author presses the pig's trotters. The fish caught by the pig's trotters all have fish with incredible understanding that can help the pig's trotters to build a small base and comprehend level 5 (equivalent to a god) formations through some formations. If you really don't press the pig's trotters, can't you produce a fish that increases the speed of cultivation? ? Stop now and see if you can continue to subscribe later. . .

The plot is too bland, and it doesn't have the same feeling as when I read Lilliput. In general, it's because the plot of cultivating immortals is too cliché, that is, the system in the Xianxia District allows bandits to cultivate immortals, and there are too few stories about showing saints in front of people in the real world As a result, it doesn't feel satisfying to watch it for a long time. What you are best at should be the Lilliputian type of showing saints in front of people, one person can do it alone, and operate behind the scenes, right? You were a representative of this genre back then The author of "Alchemy Creature Notes" next door is also very good at writing. Although he later wrote Ke Qiyuan badly, he also came up with new ideas and that's why it was successful But Xiaobai, the cultivation of immortality you wrote this time is really not distinctive, but it dilutes the refreshing feeling of the real world.

If you want to watch the protagonist fish and develop safely, you can go. The fishing system is just a gimmick. You may not catch a fish once in more than ten chapters.

This kind of person who is alone on earth, if you don't pretend to be cool and show your sage in front of others, then why do you write a story about traveling between two worlds? The entire Mouse Taoist's dank vest is too out of character. It's so low-spirited that it penetrates the core of the earth. An immortal cultivator, not to mention riding the wind and wielding a sword, is as ethereal as an immortal. In reality, the entire demon cultivator's vest has no meaning and no point of enjoyment. No wonder the performance is not as good as that of Lilliput, and the market is unclear.

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To be honest, it may be because Zhe Tian and King Chen Bi raised the threshold for me too high. The level of this Immortal Realm is too low. According to this setting, whether Yuanying can carry a nuclear bomb is a problem. It is just difficult to hit. However, the level of the Immortal Realm is too high and it is basically useless in the modern world. It is mostly used to collect faith.

Before the foundation is established, the best article is cool. After the foundation is established, the tomato article After the foundation is established, I have become an expert in intermediaries If I learn from the bear, wolf and dog, I can bring Mercury people with spiritual roots to work. No Korean Paopao can run like you. What I wanted to see was the upgrading of spiritual practice, but it is a pity that the written result is the cause.

How about trying the style of the previous strongest pope?

Let's take a two-month break before starting a new book. I think sometimes there can be path dependence. It would be good to tinker with it and write a Lilliputian 2.0 Just write a story about the protagonist and the descendants of the Queen of the Abyss.

What about the new book😭😭😭

I couldn't get through the first few chapters of this book, but I really enjoyed reading Lilliput. Maybe it's been so long since the beginning of this book that I forgot how to write it.