Restarting 2003

After reading it for a long time, I finally finished all the current chapters. Yes, I finished it. Different from normal Internet articles, this book does not comply with some rules of Internet articles in many aspects. For example, the protagonist's shackles are heavier than they should be, an 8-year-old primary school student, an 8-year-old primary school student, etc. Many readers who are used to seeing winner-take-all, where the main character only wins big, won't win, naturally can't accept it for a while. The curve of the plot is also wavy, not a diagonal upwards. (Brainless cool articles are straight up) Even though there are so many unusual places, the control of the core competitiveness content of Shuangdian is very precise. This state of being able to write online articles but not being able to write is what I call half of it. The ratio of emotions that can bring the best impression when writing online novels is 7 positive and 3 negative. This book created 40% of negative emotions through plots such as the shackles of the protagonist and business competition methods that are too realistic and logical but very counterintuitive. On the other hand, starting at the age of 8 also has its own advantages, such as the contrast between business and underage bosses, children who pretend to be harmless but make clean moves, and quite lovable childhood friends - as they grow older, readers will not be so tolerant of them. Even with these positive emotions as an adjustment, the reading of this book is still relatively heavy. If someone savors it carefully like me, the helpless indifference of seeing through the rules of the game will make people feel uncomfortable. The last time I read a book, I felt this way. This is also the first time I have seen the protagonist's thoughts and actions, which are consistent with his age before rebirth, no joke. I don't know what the author thinks of the performance of this book, and what the purpose of writing the book is, but I personally am very dissatisfied with this performance. No matter how many problems or problems there are, the bottom line has not been touched at all. Many depressive methods are enough and cannot change the fact that this is an excellent novel. In the end, it can only be attributed to the fact that even if a lot of explanations are given so that non-related people can understand the ins and outs, the article is still obscure and difficult to understand and uses many unclear writing methods. Let me give you some suggestions first, family members. First of all, the professional explanations that should be provided should not be reduced. Although the current level is a bit delayed, it is generally just right. Don't test the reader's cultural level anymore. I believe the author slightly raises the corner of his mouth when he is withholding and tacitly understanding. But try not to test the tacit understanding between the author and the reader so much. Just do it occasionally, ignore those who don't understand, and leave notes for those who understand. That's enough. Then about the female protagonists, the author used many preset conditions to shape the emotional line of the book. For example, Qingmei is Qingmei's original Qingmei, and the daughter of a business partner is a green plum that fell from the sky to cover up her shortcomings in this aspect. This is not to blame him, well, it's like someone who has had emotional experience. I want to be vaccinated in advance. If someone sprays emotional lines in the future, don't worry about it, let alone get into trouble. It won't work if you just brush it off or don't write it at all. I'll put it here. Internet articles must have emotional lines, just like the West cannot live without Jerusalem. Isn't the author using preset conditions just to smooth out the technique of exercising his emotional line? Just keep working hard. Here comes the key point, the battle between single female protagonists and multiple female protagonists in online novels. If you want to write a single female protagonist, then there should be no female characters who interact closely with the male protagonist in your book. Otherwise, don't blame the readers for misunderstanding and feeling aggrieved after being scolded. This is right. According to the author's operation of matching the original green plum and bringing the green plum from the sky to his side to start cultivating the relationship, he should take the route of multiple female protagonists. I can only say that it is great. There is a single female protagonist with a net worth of tens of billions. What kind of woman is suitable for it? The problem with online books now is that the male protagonists are very good in various aspects, but the female protagonists are mostly average. I don't know if anyone understands what I mean. The male protagonists are all SSS, but the female protagonist is at best an A. There are not many good books in this area. My evaluation of the love line is that it must be there. Only when all the beautiful girls chase me can I have the motivation to make money, and I have the motivation to make money. What I said is very clear. It did not test the tacit understanding between us like the author. This sentence makes no sense anymore. No explanation. Last point, if most of the male protagonists in online novels are SSS, then I can only subjectively give the author's male protagonist SSS Why, because the protagonist is so consistent with his age before time travel, he is a real old man, and I am just a young man in his 20s. The protagonist looks at everything calmly and terrifyingly. It stands to reason that the little green plums will find it scary, and the readers will also find it scary. But maybe the author thinks this behavior is normal, but I still have to say, it is really scary and disturbing. The two little green plums are very helpless at times, but what is the male protagonist doing? He is watching the fallen child stand up from an elder's perspective. Even though they are about to drop their little pearls, facing the pressure of adults and the world, they look back at the male protagonist, looking forward to a touch and comfort. Oh, but the male protagonist is indifferent and does not say a word. Go and grow up. It is understandable that I, Yaobao, want to learn to do business. I, Xu Bao, am really pitiful. The male protagonist stands behind them and is a firm supporter, but he is the only one who does not stand beside them. Brother! I know you may only regard them as juniors at this time, but as a reader, I just want to comfort them at this time. What do you say? Affected by hormones in the body, I hope the male protagonist can grow up to be gentler and more humane, and become a husband, father and teacher to the little childhood sweethearts. The above is my expectation for this book. I hope that the author will see that there are groups of people to support me. This book is a rare food for an old Internet writer like me. Even if you don't listen to the suggestions I give, it is definitely worth referring to. See you later

It's okay that the protagonist is a child, but I can't accept that the heroine is also a little loli. It's hard to imagine that the protagonist with an adult mentality doesn't like the beautiful big sister, but instead falls in love with Qingmei, a kid who doesn't understand anything.

It's really poisonous. At first, I thought I was going to get some funds to do something, but at the age of eight, I partnered with others to start a company. It's funny if you are in high school, but you can do something stupid at the age of eight.

The protagonist is still too big, already a primary school student, so why not start making money while still in the womb, so that you can write for a few more years.

There are too many poisonous points. The main reason is that there is no reversal. You can arrange it casually and find someone who understands your general situation and will not be like this. Forget starting a business when you are 8 years old. You should just start a company. Even if it is a small studio, staff, space, and all kinds of messy things, I have actually seen small workshop-style companies. , I feel that just after the start of work, there is no boss around to contact you remotely by phone and computer. You'll be damned if they don't work together. At least you have to have a direct contact with the company, and the person who contacts you must keep an eye on it. Starting a business basically depends on the boss. The boss must at least be poor in technical management and lose everything.

It's plagiarized. Even if you don't care about this issue, you still have to write about such disgusting, imbecile parents and relatives. It makes me want to vomit.

It's so well written that I have to change the heroine. It's so disgusting. You forcefully change the heroine at the age of eleven or twelve. What can you do? ? ? Remove it from the bookshelf. If you haven't read it, don't read it. It's too toxic.

The male protagonist is a primary school student, and with this character alone, he blocks 90% of the people.

It starts with a section of Internet science and then inserts the daily plot. Usually the heroine speaks a word or asks a question to the hero, and then the hero starts to make various associations, and then starts to popularize science again. After writing a few hundred words, the hero seems to suddenly remember that he has not answered the question, and deliberately takes the time to deal with the heroine, and then starts to popularize science again. Just like this, a chapter passed...

The boss of the company has never shown up from the beginning of the company to its development and growth. He has always been on the phone and is just looking at it for fun and obscenity. In reality, the boss never shows up and gives it a try. He really thinks that all the employees of the company are saints.