Has the Game I Made Fallen to the Altar Again?

The author replaced MiHoYo's three giants with the protagonists, and then wrote about Lao Mi's entrepreneurship. Isn't this better than your plot? There is growth, passion, reversal, conflict, climax and slap in the face. The key is that it is very logical. No need to think about the plot anymore

How should I put it, I want to see the content of the game and the players' feelings, but you are teaching me how to make the game and the problems I will encounter during the production 😂

Anyway, I can't accept that a car game can be made into a four-wheel-drive vehicle with such terrible operations, and it can also charge into a tornado with a whirlwind. If you really operate like this, the driver's brain will be mixed with you, and even an airplane pilot will die like this.

Everyone knew that you were going to get slapped in the face next, but I insisted on delaying it, jumping horizontally repeatedly. I was slapped in the face, but it was not satisfying enough, so I continued to jump horizontally... I skipped a few chapters and went straight to the fun part, and found that the plot was also coherent 😅

The plot of this game has no sense of immersion, and there are too many daily routines.

Does the title of this book insult your IQ? Or does it mean you don't understand the meaning of Chinese?

The writing is quite good. It does not directly copy games from well-known manufacturers but integrates successful game settings and ideas. Not bad, come on

Although I am tired of watching slaps in the face, I even hope that there are less slaps in the face in the novel, but the protagonist should not be kept behind the scenes. When will everyone know the ugliness of the original company?

I feel that the author's pace is too slow. I skipped dozens of chapters and there was no feeling of interruption.

This teammate is so boring to write about. Maybe this is the workplace.

The plot is too lame. The protagonist makes an announcement casually and tells the plot, and has to let passers-by A, B, B, D and D take turns to tell the story. Just bragging is not enough, and the villain in the back also tries to show the protagonist's awesomeness in various ways. There is really no need to write it like this. The daily plot can be fixed from the protagonist's perspective. Don't always change the perspective of a passerby to help the protagonist pretend to be b.

Very good, I read it all in one sitting😁 Personally, I think Liangcao+ is not too toxic. If you want to maintain this level in the future, you can go to Xiancao Some comments: There are many ways to write novels such as games, and there are many original ones by the author. Some comments say that it is space, but the author's approach is very good, and the side profile is The writing is well detailed and well-paced Compared with some similar ones, they are either too watery or too dry. In fact, player feedback is also a refreshing point. This aspect is very good Vote + reward, I hope the author will continue to work hard😃 (Speaking of which, are there double monthly votes this month? If not, vote for you immediately)

Meng Xin is here to perform a circle for you to kneel down and beg for help!

The latest Fire Tree and Silver Flower chapter was well written, and it reminded me of the feeling I had when I was playing Azure. Come on

You write too fast. The first game was very well written, but the second one progressed too fast and the rhythm was messed up.

Are netizens fools? Do you believe this nonsense? Even the rhythm of the naval army is not that big. In the end, it's the company. People in the parallel world seem to be quite stupid.

The pacing of this book is very problematic. What reader wants to read such a plot with ink?

The game is well written, but after all this time I'm still working for someone else, so I slipped away.

Anyway, it's still okay, but the plot is a bit blurry. You can write more about the players' reactions and reduce the proportion of game production. After all, the fun of this kind of novel lies in the players' reactions (in my opinion). This can also be put on the shelves. You have to grasp the fun.

Suddenly I discovered that an episode was updated a few days ago. Are you going to update it again?