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It's not good. There are so many two-dimensional worlds and the plug-ins are so good. Just stare at this Hokage and play Tsunade? Goddess of Heaven, Winged Bud Goddess, Violet, there are so many women in the world, there are always beautiful ones, all of them are obedient, and can help the protagonist, but it's really not possible, go to Bilan, etc. You can build it yourself, you are the second dimension gate, the second dimension is so big, open your eyes, what's the use of staring at this Hokage

So far, it's okay. YY Shuangwen is okay, mainly as long as it has basic logic and can be justified. If it's just a self-orgasm that's mindless and illogical, it feels like a disaster. Keep it in mind

The latest chapter as of Chapter 81 Existing the following ingredients Shuangwen; The theory of the Naruto world from the author's perspective; The author will explain the things in the original work based on the principles from his own perspective

To be honest, there is no need to focus on Naruto in the comprehensive manga. It has been written badly in the early stage, and in some anime with extraordinary powers, Naruto is a good floor tile, and the upper limit is too low. Might as well write something else, such as the Japanese manga Devil High School, Dragon Ball, Holy Grail, Saint Seiya, Hakoba and his ilk, Chinese manga One Person, Demon Fox Matchmaker, Qin Shi Mingyue, Painting Rivers and Lakes, Corpse Brother... Etc. These anime are classic enough, the world view is big enough, the time span is long enough, the power system is high enough, bring water... Bah, it is enough to write the plot. Even if you only write twenty or thirty chapters for one anime, you can write thousands of chapters!

What is this novel about? I can't understand what the protagonist wants to do. There is no purpose at all. What is the meaning of writing the apocalypse of the academy? Why do you want to be Tsunade's teacher? I feel that the plot is confusing. The author wrote whatever he thought of. I felt very uncomfortable reading it.

The writing is a bit bland. I got 10,000 individual items in just ten chapters of attributes, but I went to be Tsunade's apprentice. His strength and mentality are not in line with the series.

There are a lot of unreasonable cheats in the second dimension. I don't understand why they are wasted in Naruto. Eternal life, magic source, force value, etc., Naruto has them all but they are not the best choice. Also, there are really a lot of people who write Naruto books, and the male protagonists also have some double standards, are wise, and their character is not well established. I can only say that it is watchable but not particularly beautiful. I hope I can write better in the future, after all, this kind of subject matter is quite rare these days.

Chapter 283 Why is it stated that Ikaruga married someone else and got someone else pregnant twice? ? Isn't she the woman that the protagonist earned, strengthened, and took her through time travel to join the protagonist's Sword Princess Pirates (Grand Harem)? Why send a girl? If you can't get a close and intimate female partner, then you can give it to someone else, right? So poisonous!

What's there to write about in Sea of ​​Death The God of Death is based on bloodline theory, and the protagonist relies on the power of bloodline to survive every day. Naruto is about blood. Without good blood, he will be mediocre all his life and will never be able to be among the strong. Although the protagonist has good blood, he is deeply cursed by fate. Pirates are also based on blood. Although the Devil Fruit can change one's destiny, without a good blood, he is still a mediocre fish.

You are an Infinite stream that travels at will. Those who cannot defeat pirates can travel to other stronger worlds to learn and strengthen. You marry women, make marriages, and suppress various forces in pirates. What's the use of it? Improving your strength after working for a long time might not be as good as eating a few meals at a gourmet restaurant.

The idea is novel, but I came to see the adventures of the protagonist, not to see the protagonist build a business empire. If you have such strong superpowers, why do you do business? Where is your brain?

Throughout the whole article, you are analyzing the original work. Have I never watched Naruto? There are a few people who read the fanfic who have never read the original work. The more I look at it, the more annoying it becomes.

I finally understand why so many comments are talking about the plot of Naruto. Indeed, a novel that is almost considered invincible. After gaining strength, he can even challenge Konoha due to hard work. However, because of some petty profit, he studied immortal power and Tsunade exchanged a few small ninjutsu, and tricked Shizuka just to let Tsunade provide him with the so-called resources for Shizuka to ascend... Brother, you have created your own immortal method to practice. Wouldn't a ninja family steal so many skills? You are not weak either! In the previous world, "these weapons are all awesome", in the next world, I didn't use them at all... Oh, I used a full sword to cut some of the Ten-Tails' flesh.

The character of the main character doesn't stand up, it's disgusting

I hate that Tsunade is too old. I know that the author's xp doesn't match mine. It's like there's a thorn in the back and I can't stand it. It's either that I can't stand it or that it's uncomfortable.

The protagonist's cheats are very strong and there are many ways to gain power. And there is a panel at the beginning, why does it jump to Naruto later? The reasons given are also very stiff. Alas, it is better to wear some classic old shows, such as Lelouch: Heaven Sent... There are too many people writing about Naruto. No matter how much you write, you won't be able to write anything outstanding, and you will become tired of aesthetics.

The subject matter is very good, but the shortcomings are too weak. It's a stallion. Don't talk about harem novels, it's a stallion. Women's sexual desire is 2.5 Times that of men. You have one person for one hour a day, and you don't sleep the rest of the time? Not eating? How does the plot advance? There are so many in the book that I can't even place them in order...

Hey, there are too few unlimited streams now, especially comprehensive comics. Looking at this catalog also shows my favorite world, but every time tnd comes in, I feel dissuaded by this S13 introduction 😒. . . It's second to none, it's embarrassing, and it's hard to listen to. . . It feels like I have come in a dozen times. Every time I see this book, I want to come in and read it, but every time I am dissuaded by the introduction. Alas.

Simple movies to gain abilities, animated movies Movies: My Superman Girlfriend, contacting meteorites and becoming Superman. Animated movie: The super villain, reporter Titan, was accidentally injected into his nostril by the Superman gene (in the form of a golden light) made by McMahon, and became Superman. Urban Superman (Urban Superman) has no defined weaknesses. Movie: Never Ending, NZT-48. Movie: Super Body, CPH4 Lucy, Lucy is the biggest thigh.

I don't know what Naruto is writing about. The author is crazy about himself. Nan Ben

Che Zhuluan talks a lot, which is too watery. The protagonist is also very useless. Judging from the way he hints at the prohibition imposed by gods on his own woman, the protagonist really has no confidence in himself at all. I still don't know how to make progress at all. In the early stage, you can just accumulate strength first, and when you have the strength, you can create a small world that you can carry with you, and then you can recruit girls. The current practice of recruiting girls, wanting the heroine to have one, but not wanting the heroine to show up, gives people a feeling of being both important and established.

Emmmm, his grandma's, more, why not more?

I read more than 70 chapters, but I forgot the previous ones. I have to watch it again.

This introduction🤤

Why does the author write old stories and rarely write new ones?

Is this book good to summarize in one sentence? Without any time travel restrictions, I stayed with Naruto for 30 chapters (I also said before that I already have a physique a thousand times that of an ordinary person, and then I was laughing and joking with Naruto there)

When will the pirates be able to get there? It feels like this is so long.

Come on, it looks great, please update as soon as possible

There are so many dimensional worlds, why do we have a genetic system? The eight magical skills under one person are good, and Chinese comics have good things.