Shelter in Cave

This is the first time I have seen an apocalyptic novel written with an official mentality. If it writes about the ugliness of human nature and the confrontation between power and power, it would be interesting. But what did the author write? Daily writing is not included. I just write about how my family has food, how I collude with the government, how I live a retired life, and sometimes I have to show my independence (tsundere). After reading it for a long time, I have no impression of what the protagonist has done. He is proficient in various rhetorical techniques and is highly productive in nonsense literature. I want to write about survival in the apocalypse, but I don't have the writing style to describe the sharp contradictions. I want to write about farming in the apocalypse, but I don't have the experience. I want to write about farming in the apocalypse, but I don't have the experience. I want to write about the humanistic spirit in the apocalypse. The mentality of the officials' children does not even have any spirit. When it comes to platform relations, we also accept it, but can we stop talking nonsense about literature?

I don't recommend reading it. Water is like a sea, but it's too boring. One sentence can be nonsense or a chapter. The writing style is that of a junior high school student. The content is not interesting. It is very clumsy. The whole process is toxic... What a waste of money. If you want to read it, just read the work of a level 5 author. After all, the level is not too bad or too toxic.

The reason for abandoning the book here may be different from others. For this book, I read it on a daily basis, so I have to stick with it longer. The key point that made me abandon the book is the introduction of the hundred arts of cultivating immortals in Chapter 278. It is a whole chapter of introduction. I really, forget about filling in the front, it is for daily reading. I don't care too much. You introduced the hundred arts of cultivating immortals in this whole chapter, but are we novices in the novels of cultivating immortals? Also, the statement about foundation building at the end of this chapter is really just a subway old man's mobile phone. You, a protagonist who can only do needlework at the sixth level of foundation building, question the exaggeration of the foundation building period in other immortal cultivation novels? Why don't you think about why people can fly on swords, but you can only use needles to compete with others? Sorry, no matter what you say, I can't stand it. Also, I am a little confused about the attitude of the protagonist towards his parents in many comments in the comment area. Although I am also a little unhappy, because the protagonist's attitude does seem hypocritical, but it is indeed easy to get entangled in whether to let his parents live in the cave, because the order in this book is not destroyed. Not only do the protagonist's parents not live at the bottom, they are also in the same league with the city. The most energetic retired elderly people in the district live in the core area, and the relationship cannot be said to be mutually exclusive, but they have reached the point where they will tell you if something happens, and they will even take you with them. This is an environment like this. In addition, the protagonist and Goldfinger both have high hips. Once the parents live in the cave, they will basically be isolated from the world. Wouldn't it be entangled if someone else changed? It's not a breakdown of order, there's nothing to say about that, and there's also the matter of the protagonist bringing women into the cave. Although it's too much to say this, from my perspective, the protagonist doesn't regard them as human beings at all, and it's impossible to let them out of the cave alive. Why would anyone compare them with the protagonist's parents?

I feel like this kind of writing. . . It always feels weird! Can't we find an organization? ! !

It was very poisonous, and he was with his parents before he was reborn. After being reborn, I have been thinking about being separated from my parents and sent to other shelters. The author's reality is that the family fantasy is not good, he writes like this.

The end of the virus... The end of the meteorite... The end of the glacier... The end of the flood... The end of the volcano... The end of animal and plant mutation... The end of the sun's abnormality... The end of monster invasion... The end of dimensional invasion...? ? ?

Originally, the minimum temperature for cold winter disasters was set at about minus 200 degrees. After corrections by book friends, the minimum temperature was revised to about minus 100 degrees. The temperatures in the published chapters were also adjusted accordingly.

Nonsense novels, a lot of slobber, self-censorship unforgettable, fear river crabs like a devil. The timeline is disordered, The plot develops smoothly but with twists and turns? Non-flashbacks are inserted into narrations, and there are many supplementary narrations for uneven narrations. (Like this) Or this... And then that, blah blah blah. Wrong words and typos are particularly common. Conjunctions are used in a confusing manner. The homophonic words are all secretive, but they dare to speak out about what they mean. Some people are not willing to say something on the spot, but they are upset but want to talk nonsense. Listening to books is okay, and the speed is 1.5 Times faster. Reading is like prison, mobile phone for the elderly in the subway. I wrote a long list, but it was accidentally deleted 😡 by Baidu input method's AI. I simplified and improved it again, and I feel good about myself. 😃👍 ——Feng Bao, October 3, 2024 at 20:10

The protagonist has a paradise, but his relatives will not let them in for fear of intrigue. Although he treats his parents well and has no shortage of food and clothing, he never confessed to his parents again, and even his parents rejected the protagonist's invitation. The protagonist feels lucky in his heart. But the protagonist bought 12 beauties and put them on his modified battleship. There was also intrigue among these 12 beauties. Although they were all harmonious in front of the protagonist, and for the sake of testing, the protagonist deliberately tested them and then let two of them go. . . . After two tests, after the other party expressed their sincerity, the protagonist confessed the cave to nine women and let them in. At this time, his parents still didn't know that he could cultivate immortality, but because he didn't confess, several years later, he still didn't let his parents cultivate immortality. . . I think the parents probably stay outside until they have grandchildren, then take care of them, and finally die of old age, while the protagonist just keeps looking for women, after all, everyone else will grow old. . . . Immortality and the people around you are doomed to fail if you don't live forever, and in the end you can only live a stallion life. . . . . I can't say it's very poisonous. . . . But the protagonist is quite weird. At least I think my parents are the closest people in the world. I hide it from my parents, but the beautiful women I buy can know about it. And later on, Dongtian will carry it with him, so what if he tells his parents? You can also let your parents come in from time to time and practice when you need to. . . . . I can't say that he is unfilial, but it looks weird anyway. If it continues like this, I feel like it's going to be unfinished.

What I admire most is that people spend money to support authors of this kind of books.

Hey guys, I am speechless by this novel. It has been updated to the point where 80% of it is complete nonsense and only 5% of it is official content. How do you continue to read it?

Whether you have written three books or you are still at level 1 already speaks volumes. The free chapter you wrote as an explanatory essay is also level 6. Is there any difference between cultivating immortality and not cultivating? Is there a difference between a refuge and a non-refuge? A cave that can't even be hidden is called a cave? What about setting it up yourself? Laughing to death. Shennong was poisoned to death. Can't see it.

6. It's so difficult that my parents don't want it anymore. If you say that you are the Great Love Immortal and you don't want your parents, I will think that Fang Yuan is really cruel and worthy of being an old devil. But the character you describe looks like Bai Yansong to me...

Chapter 331 became the Golden Elixir, and then Chapter 366 became the Foundation Establishment Perfection

If you haven't read it yet, don't read it. I wrote about parents screening readers at the beginning, and then added the reasons later! After subscribing, it still revolves around the reasons for parents, and then it is very watery! This author should not write about the apocalypse, but about the city! And the overall book is intellectually suppressed by the author! I subscribed halfway and couldn't stand it anymore, so I slipped away and saw you again!

I experienced a doomsday rebirth and came back with a plug-in. Before my rebirth, I lived a hard life. I was reborn with a plug-in in the cave. I had to poop outside the cave. Note that the cave has the ability to decompose all things and is afraid that excrement will enter the circulation. Parents and relatives are all burdens like pendants on the thighs. If you don't know what the situation is like in the shelter, even if you are fully prepared, you can live comfortably. You are hiding it for fear that everyone will know that you have a cheat. Others are also all kinds of brainless

You can tell what kind of urine this author is from just one picture

The first part is good, and it also talks about human nature. But after a few chapters, a rather disgusting plot appears, which is even more poisonous than the stallion harem. I don't know who the protagonist's thoughts and character are mirrored by.

The starting point is a wolfish look. It can be written about orphans, but the parents of the whole family are disgustingpeople

White-eyed wolf! Not to mention other relatives, parents should at least be with them. Reading people through books👏

I've read Chapter 271, and I can't stand it since the man-eating bugs appeared. When he confirmed that he died from man-eating insects and that the insects would harm non-warriors, he did not consider taking his parents away for protection, believing that the shelter could protect his family. My parents, who were enjoying a good life outside, stayed in the shelter to eat the rations. Although the protagonist has sent something to him, he can't eat it openly, and in order to keep his secret, the quantity at a time is limited.

I watched it for a long time and I don't know what the protagonist is doing... 😅 Let's write about cultivating immortals, but it doesn't capture the hero's extraordinary spirit at all Let's write about survival in the apocalypse. The sense of crisis in the apocalypse is not expressed, the water is terrible, and a crisis is over before you can react. What on earth is the protagonist busy with? Not to mention a lot of messy character relationships, the character image is so thin that people can't tell what your character is... The author obviously did not grasp the exciting point of this kind of post-apocalyptic survival story Suggestions for improvement 😥

The author, please check the information. You write a lot of things that are very problematic. For example, under an electromagnetic attack, military vehicles will basically not be paralyzed, and mechanical diesel vehicles will not be affected! Many cars can run at temperatures above minus 50 degrees Celsius but cannot shut off! The aircraft can take off at most one day after the electromagnetic attack is over, and piston propeller aircraft can fly around the world without any problem! Etc!

The author talks so much nonsense that he just thinks he is short of money. The logic problem is really big. I don't know if it is due to poor family relations and depression and suicidal disorder. Let's not mention that he doesn't care about the safety of his parents or even his own safety and survival. It doesn't matter. Do you want to give up the book after seeing this? Is there any plot behind the book where your head is caught in a door?

My suggestion is to stop reading, start with a pile of books, and change to another one.

Selling dog meat as sheep's head has nothing to do with shelter wool. The cliché plot changes from map to wave and a lot of realm instructions are added to each wave. It is recommended for insomniac book lovers to pay attention to it as it has a certain sleep-aiding effect.

I'm so verbose that I don't know what I want to write about. Let's write about rebirth in the apocalypse, with systems and immortality. Some books about martial arts and internal energy have been published. The key is to write some short stories about home affairs. After reading 140 or 50 of them, I feel that they are all to hide my own specialness, rebirth/system/space/immortal cultivation. There is no fun at all in writing these major elements of the novel.

It's chapter 300. It's been seven or eight years since I was reborn, and I'm still keeping track of the running accounts. Sometimes I haven't seen the protagonist in several chapters. I've already reached the sixth level of foundation building, and I'm still like an ordinary person. There's nothing, really, nothing outstanding about me. What are you doing after you're reincarnated? Still cultivating?

Picking it up for the third time, I still couldn't help but curse: It's a very good setting, but it's written like this

Full score 💯, the author's book now has a score of 95, and he is working hard to update it.