Pokemon: The Unofficial Champion

I think it's quite outrageous. Soraya was born about ten days ago. When he came back from the expedition, he felt that his combat power was insufficient. The solution was neither to intensify training of Soroa nor to replenish his combat power, but to hatch new eggs? ? ? Explorer! One baby isn't enough to fight with, so you decide to raise two babies? ? Soraya, you haven't even trained yet! On the first day of my life, I went to the elf center to play for five hours. . . Zoroark is a squishy guy with high attack speed and high attack speed. He can get by with some weight-bearing to keep him moving. Do you think you have worked hard? If you hug him when you go out and say you don't have enough fighting power, aren't you delaying your elf growth? . .

No, whoever has the ability to hallucinate can really fly when he turns into a bird, and can really dive when he turns into a fish. Kurama Yakumo and Aizen are not so awesome. This is not an illusion, it is a wish come true. If the author confuses this, it will look very weird.

Judging from the current progress, it is very comfortable. There are not too many cheating descriptions. It focuses on the interaction between micro-travel and elves. It is also very easy to get along with the characters. There is no feeling that the male partner is the younger brother and the female partner is in the harem. I will be very happy if the author can keep it up.

I would like to give the author a suggestion. If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, you don't have to write them. The part about Lin Tianwang made me cry so hard that my toes were pulled out of the three bedrooms and one living room. There was no reasonable foreshadowing. I arranged the plot to send the girl off to make her cry. Now I feel uncomfortable when I see her being written╯╰

Recommended Copywriting A sudden time travel, what should an unarmed ordinary person do to survive in the dangerous mountain forest? When you are trapped in a swamp and unable to recover, can you just close your eyes and wait for the short journey through time to end The Pokémon world, which is both warm and dangerous, is waiting for the exciting collision between the protagonist and it! "Brief Description of the Work" The protagonist of the novel, Yu Zhou, was looking for a way out in the dangerous countryside and mountains. He finally escaped the dangerous snakes, but ended up trapped in a swamp. The green caterpillar and Bobo met by chance and offered him a helping hand. It begins with the protagonist receiving the kindness of Pokémon, and tells the story of Yu Zhou step by step becoming a top wilderness survival master and Pokémon encyclopedia after walking out of the mountains and forests. "Reason for Recommendation" The novel identity setting of the protagonist as a secret explorer. The protagonist does not have the identity of both a breeder and a champion trainer, just like in Pokémon fan fiction in the traditional sense. His story focuses on exploring unknown secrets, supplemented by warm, leisurely and comfortable daily life, deepening the bond with himself and wild Pokémon, which always inspires my desire to read. The author has a thorough knowledge of Pokémon, making it easier to handle. A mission system is arranged for the protagonist, giving him the ability to view special attributes, analyze the environment, and provide basic survival guarantees, but does not provide powerful Pokémon enhancement props. While ensuring the normal development of the adventure plot, the fun point does not appear to be brainless, and the improvement does not appear to be abrupt. The author is good at describing Pokémon in wild and semi-artificial environments. You can capture the video and take photos with both hands, and the beautiful moments when the Pokémon cubs are born will be recorded. It feels like writing a cute pet article. The lovely elves are portrayed in a very three-dimensional way, just like rua~ The protagonist goes about his daily life that is unique to other trainers, and at the same time, he does not lose his social attributes. From his childhood friends to his best friends, the wonderful clubs in college, and the senior sister who "has evil intentions" against him... Everything enriches the protagonist's life. In a world with a relatively harmonious setting like Pokémon, there should be more pleasant life. Yu Zhou knew how to repay his kindness. He was grateful to Green Caterpillar and Bobo, who met by chance but were able to lend a helping hand and save their lives. He left a mark to repay his kindness in the future, full of positive energy! The interaction with Pokémon during the trip was relaxed and pleasant, and the treatment was sincere and peaceful, which is rare and valuable! The supporting characters, whether they are little brothers or potential heroines, have their own independent thoughts and are not reduced to the protagonist's appendages. "Something you may need to pay attention to" Perhaps because I watch Pokémon fandom more often, I am always wary of the protagonist's initial development of a high-potential female Pokémon. The little Zoroa and the wild Pokémon are jealous of each other in front of their master, and they can be said to be dependent on each other. But she was able to detect the strange thoughts of her senior sister towards her master, and thus planned to "protect" her master. This really alarmed me. Pokémon novels seem to be like this. The cute elf is female. Maybe it's an unintentional move by the author, but it's just my random imagination. It will definitely be a point that needs to be dealt with in the middle and later stages, and I hope the author can notice and control it well. "Work information" Book title: Pokémon: The Superscript Author: Mixed Meat Sauce Type: Light novel·Derivative fanfic Tags: New Ideas Adventurer Pokémon Number of words: 120,000 Status: Serial Recommendation index: ★★★★☆ (4/5) "Recommended group" ①Readers who like Pokémon fan fiction; ②Readers who like a pleasant and warm daily life; ③Readers who like to explore secret places and seek the unknown. "Similar Recommendations" None at the moment, I have found only this one so far (PS: The copy is written in the style of a deep-sea boss) #New book trial reading#

From the point where the protagonist goes to snatch treasures from the secret realm, the perception drops by several levels. It becomes cliche and rotten. I don't understand it at all. The first few dozen pictures are pretty good. But when I see the protagonist going to snatch things from the secret realm, I delete the book immediately. An overly deliberate design will make the protagonist look brainless.

It feels like the following is just a random yy about eating 7 Nazis. An elf hunter found out that he had a dream, but instead of killing him and silencing him, he captured him and handed him over to the Alliance? In the past, he tried various ways to prevent the alliance from knowing that he had Mew, but in the end, he was exposed for the so-called purpose of not letting Mew see him killing people, including Mana Fei in the back. . . Enn. . . Personally, I feel incredibly depressed

I want to read the story told in the introduction, not the story of growing up on the way to the introduction

I feel that the author's positioning between hallucination and transformation is not very clear, and it seems a bit distorted.

I spent some money to read Chapter 199, which is about the journey before the big and small dreams parted ways, and I didn't want to read any more. emmm, inexplicably, it feels a bit watered down. It means that there are not too many details. I just have some ideas to write and expand on the outline, but I don't add too many details. It still has a visual sense of the outline. Then he said in his acceptance speech that there is currently no female protagonist. . . Ten thousand people don't believe it, because basically in daily life and travel, the male protagonist's brother has no sense of existence. Lu Chuan is basically a tool man, a tool man to let the male protagonist and Manafei meet. As for the other little brother named Lu, he is not even a tool man, he is just a background at best. Looking at the female characters, all current female characters are basically interested in the male protagonist. The author said that in order to highlight the charm of the male protagonist, there is a description of the female character feeling fascinated and shaking her head from time to time. But it's really not necessary. Male charm does not have to be all set off by female admiration. Appropriately increase the interaction and getting along with brothers, and defeat the opponent neatly in battle, a deep understanding of wild survival knowledge and Pokémon, and hard work during training. These are the charm points of the male protagonist. Simply enchanting a few girls will not make readers feel the charm of the male protagonist. At best, they can experience the pleasure of being secretly loved by high-quality women, and then they still think that it is a pity that they have to travel and explore with Pokémon and do not want to have too many ties. In fact, there are enough ties, and even Soraya's presence is sometimes not as strong as that of the female characters. Anyway, after reading almost two hundred chapters, I am basically certain that there will be a heroine in this novel, and I think I can decide on the heroine choice. After all, she has a strong sense of presence. She comes to help in the kitchen and gets along well with the male protagonist. She likes to hum and hum. She bursts into tears in front of the male protagonist after three or four appearances. The tsundere Lin Tianwang, Ms. Lin Cuiyi, who is in her twenties, is a perfect sight for the female protagonist. She is also the male protagonist's boss in the alliance and is responsible for reviewing the male protagonist's videos and helping him cover up. I don't believe her role will be reduced in the future. In general, the plot is a bit watery, the details are poor, the charm of the male protagonist is not highlighted, the female characters are relatively inferior, and the other male characters are too cannon fodder, and there are not many descriptions. It can be read as a daily novel, focusing on a Pokémon novel that combines leisure and exploration.