Chinese Students at Hogwarts

We are almost at the end of the chase, but why are things happening on the sidelines? If there is no heroine, there will be no heroine. Why are they starting to be paired with each other? The Goblet of Fire Dance section simply adds to the controversy, but the introduction still states that it is directed towards the original work, respecting the original work. The CP party may like it. I personally watched the direct black question mark, just like I watched NTR. When Hermione was looking for Aunt Rowling, there was also a description of meeting the parents. Now I personally feel that it is like giving away a girl. This thing is simply taboo in male videos. Otherwise, there should be no such description. Or else directly choose the heroine, and there can be a dance CP allocation meeting? I still use my own cp🤔 and I can't understand it. It's completely incomprehensible. It's like a stick in my throat right now. I'll put it away for a few days. If I can't bear it in the end, I'll just take it off the bookshelf. I just read it for comfort, but I didn't expect that I would be able to do this as I'm almost finished. 😅

I finally finished reading it. It's rare that I have any thoughts and write a review. I just finished reading the ending and I don't feel very good about it. I'll give it a 6 out of 10 points. Just looking at the content before fighting Voldemort, plus the feelings of Harry Potter fans, I can give it a 7.5 This book is one of the most complete ones among the fans who engage in Eastern cultivation systems in Harry Potter. It describes the feeling of the combination of superpowers and urban system in Harry Potter. It feels like one person but also has many differences. The development of the setting when reading the first half of the book was a big driving force for me to continue reading. The interesting plot is also one of the highlights of this book. The author is very good at deducing some interesting plots. This book should be the Harry Potter fan that made me laugh the longest. Some of the content that echoes the original work is also very funny. The following are the shortcomings that I personally think: 1. The author is a little too obsessed with current affairs, which leads to many places that are very dramatic. Patriotism is of course a good thing, but I feel that some of the plots are still unnaturally integrated and do not achieve a better effect than if they were not used. To be honest, I saw more of this kind of content before 2017, but now everyone doesn't write like this ( 2. Harry Potter is a world with a relatively low magic setting. I personally think that some of the magic in the later part of the book is a bit beyond the original setting (of course, it may be that I didn't pay attention to the explanation). It feels like the battle scenes are more The higher the level, the harder it is to write, which makes the decisive battle and the final battle a bit abstract, far less beautiful than the early stage (and the protagonist suffers a lot in the later stage, and such a large background is not used much in the battle except for money) 3. The pace suddenly accelerated from the Goblet of Fire. I originally thought it was a year after the end of the Goblet of Fire. , The war suddenly started and then ended. This also caused the fourth year's rhythm to be very different from the previous one. There was a lot less daily content and more content about the development of forces that was not interesting enough. 4. It may not be a shortcoming, but there are still a lot of deaths in the story, so the results are still there. The characters are written to death, and then repeatedly sensationalized, which I personally feel is a bit unworthy. At least I don't like this. Although there are many shortcomings in the writing, it is still good overall. If you are interested in the subject matter, you can at least read the content before it is released. If you can read it, the first half of the book will definitely not disappoint you.

I like this book very much. It is the best fanfic I have ever read. The ratio of Chinese and Western magic is very moderate at the moment. However, I am only in the third grade and the author is a little slow in updating. I am looking forward to the Goblet of Fire in the fourth grade. Also, can I find a girlfriend for the protagonist, as long as it does not destroy the main plot? The story of a single dog really feels like something is missing.

Zhang Xiao - a Chinese student at Hogwarts The novel is written from the perspective of the male protagonist. His father and mother are Taoist priests in Longhu Mountain. He is learning Taoism and magic at the same time. Modern people travel through the 1980s in England. The same year as Harry, Snake Yard , out-of-the-box and kind This is the first time I saw the protagonist of HP fan fiction entering the snake yard. The rhythm is tight and fast, The writing style is a bit white, The characterization is straightforward, not vivid and delicate enough The classroom content of this novel The expansion is not good, and the classroom content is not good. The Goblet of Fire competition is interesting and interesting, especially the last level that takes away the wands of the little wizards and lets them survive in the Muggle world with dollars for three days. I will never forget that Harry Ron Draco put on a lace skirt and danced with the Four Little Swans in order to make money, hahaha Neville uses Chinese kung fu to teach martial arts in the United States Cedric goes to Hollywood to act The plot of the third level of the Goblet of Fire competition is really exciting and funny

In fact, I personally feel that if the protagonist is familiar with the plot of the fanfic, he will not be integrated into the story from the beginning. It does not matter if it is infinite. However, if you want to vividly write the story of the protagonist and a group of original characters, I personally feel that the fact that he is familiar with the plot has completely prevented him from integrating. He is directly at a higher level than the original characters in terms of perspective and thinking. The above is just my personal understanding, and I respect the different opinions of others.

Zhang Xiao

The extent to which everyone can be a joy

The last dozen or so chapters have felt very watery, and I can't stand them anymore. Is this inspiration running out?

Africa has its own unique magic, and India has its own unique magic carpet. There is no reason why the East should be exactly the same as the UK, right? Those who use Shensan to talk about things are really drunk. Rowling is a typical nationalist, and that's okay. She writes her own books as she likes. In her books, Britain is the center of everything. To be honest, people have never considered the East at all. After all, the country's sense of existence was not strong at that time. In the era of Fantastic Beasts, everyone is greedy for the Chinese market. They begin to add Chinese elements to movies without making any effort to understand them. They just put in some specious things. You say it is a unicorn, but who is willing to admit that the local dog is a unicorn! As for the Qing Dynasty magician and the Chinese Minister of Magic, there is a high probability that it is for Chinese elements. I would rather believe that it is a wizard from cnhk and cntw than a local wizard. According to Rowling's own setting, British wizards participated in the World War. There is no reason that Chinese wizards are all weak traitors, right? Judging from China's population base, it is not a problem that the number of wizards exceeds that of Britain by ten times. Even if there are only a thousand people out, fighting the Opium War is just like playing the game, it is all bugs So I think the correct answer is to abandon Rowling's oriental setting and see if the author can construct a logical and self-consistent story.

I hope there won't be a heroine, I'm really disgusted with the heroine Hermione (just my personal opinion) The author's writing is really good! ! I almost didn't click on the book because of its title. It feels like it's the most logical and consistent book I've ever read about the fusion of Eastern and Western Hogwarts settings!

If the author finishes writing this book, it will bring about an epic change in the entire HP novel world - just like the sister next door's "Hogwarts on the Bite of the Tongue", which will become a long-lasting legend - this is my conclusion. Undoubtedly, the author worked hard to write this book - Taoism, as a native religion in China, is indeed a good entry point. Moreover, the author revealed his efforts between the lines - such as the protagonist's Taoist background and magic (very authentic), and the conflict between the protagonist and Malfoy, which shows the difference between Chinese and British culture (although there is a stereotype - but this stereotype is more of Rowling's original creation - especially the arrogance of Angsa culture embodied by Rowling - this is chauvinism doctrine and the influence of the British Sun Never Sets era, as well as Rowling's history and mathematics, which can be said to be against the five scum, have little to do with the author), and the author has tried his best to make up for the loopholes caused by Rowling's subconscious "Orientalism" as a "Western" person, and tried to improve "China" under HP's world view - China with the Han nationality as the main body. This is a historic work. In a small way, it improves HP's world view; in a big way, it cleans up the colonial cultural legacy of the colonial empires in the 19th and 20th centuries to a certain extent. The Sinicization and decolonization of HP is a long-term work. The author and {"NickName":"Half a Fat Chicken with a Round Face","UserId":9720762} next door have discussed this topic from some aspects, which can be said to be a milestone. But - as I said before, the author also has stereotypes - such as classic Western family problems (the reflection of Malfoy and the protagonist talking about family), and so on; this is a product of the resurgence of nationalism in the country under the Internet today, and it can be seen that the author tried his best to overcome it, and we do not need to be overly harsh. Legend, as a legend, is a milestone and a groundbreaking one. The emergence of the author's book has proved that we Chinese people have reflected on this IP and even the modern world system dominated by the West, and has also laid a foundation for future generations. Regardless of whether the book is finished or not, its meaning has been realized. I hope that in the future, more high-quality fans will appear to achieve further development for the Chinese interpretation and decolonization of HP IP. Justinian III Serisnus on his travels. Chengdu, Sichuan, 2024/2/12.

The writing behind it is really messy. I would rather the author didn't write about eunuchs. Some scenes give people the aesthetic feeling of opening a supermarket on Chang March Road.

The front part is pretty good, and the integration with the East is relatively natural, and it can basically achieve logical self-consistency. But the recent point of whitewashing the Dursleys and setting up a church and letting Dudley join is really unacceptable... What Harry did to the Dursleys in the original book was at best relief and forgetfulness, but not forgiveness. The only person in the Dursley family who changed his attitude was Dudley, because he was saved and realized his mistake, so he bowed his head first. Petunia and Vernon can't be cleared up by just saying "I lost my sister too". Because Petunia is jealous of Lily and hates Lily. When Vernon's sister humiliated Harry's parents, she didn't feel inappropriate or angry because one of them was her sister. From the beginning to the end of the contact and interaction between the two families, it was Petunia's own attitude and words that determined Vernon and Dudley's attitudes towards the Potters. And her usual attitude towards Harry was more like she was angry at his mother and used her child to find balance - it doesn't matter that you are beautiful and can do magic, you are not dead and you expect me to give your son a place to live. It is said that Dumbledore forced her to raise Harry. Harry's blood magic was extended to her by Dumbledore, which means that Petunia herself is also protected by Lily's blood magic. The Dark Lord's life and death were uncertain after he went to the Potter's house. Wouldn't the Death Eaters take it out on Lily's Muggle sister? Even the pure-blooded Aurors of the Longbottom family had not escaped. Petunia did not support Harry and blood magic did not take effect. How could she and her Muggle husband save their lives from the Death Eaters? Wouldn't the letter Dumbledore left explain the reasons and stakes? As for the cost of raising a child, have you forgotten that Lily is a legitimate Muggle and has a household registration record in ordinary society. Harry can go to school normally, which at least shows that the adoption has gone through a normal process in ordinary society. Then, the relevant British welfare system will take effect on Harry, and the Dursley family will receive the subsidies that should be given. Their family didn't spend any money on Harry either. Saying that Harry's magic riot caused trouble. If Dudley didn't chase Harry and bully him, he wouldn't have the idea of ​​hiding, and the magic wouldn't take him to the roof. As long as he is friendly to Harry, he will not want to resist or contradict others. The magical troubles the Dursleys encountered were all due to "flirtation first" and abuse first. If Harry hadn't been suppressed into an Obscurus and blown up their family to the sky, they should have been enjoying themselves secretly. Of course Harry can reconcile with the Dursleys, but it should be the Dursleys who realize that they have made mistakes first. The church was originally a very suitable opportunity. Harry put the Dursleys in danger because of his own reasons. Although the Dursleys treated him badly, he still felt guilty because of his kindness. Putting Petunia's "lost sister" remarks here, it makes sense for both parties to face Lily's blood protection and realize how much advantage their family has taken, thus prompting reconciliation. But what's the point of making up a plot where Harry first uses magic to bully Dudley... Does it mean that to whitewash Dursley, do you have to discredit Harry? Dudley had the same experience of being rescued by Harry in the church. He had just begun to grow up and ease the relationship, but then he was fooled by the church again. After all, the church doesn't have a positive image here, and what it says is more effective in sowing discord... I can only say that I hope Dudley will really have some brains in the author's writing, and think clearly about the relationship between closeness, distance, and interests. Don't give him a plot where he doesn't differentiate between good and bad, confronts the protagonist group, and causes trouble and delays.

When the author is writing, he should not overestimate the power system. Things like cultivating immortals will be very strange when they come out. However, traditional folk customs can be added, such as Feng Shui, painting talismans, raising ghosts, zombies, etc. Just refer to the Maoshan Celestial Masters and Feng Shui Masters from before the starting point. It is absolutely antique and can match the level of power. In fact, the painting style can be more biased towards that of the Pre-Qin Qi practitioners. The painting style of the Pre-Qin Qi practitioners and these wizards is the most suitable. The same is unsystematic, the same seems crazy and primitive, the same is the study of various magical creatures (The Classic of Mountains and Seas)

Let me talk about the evaluation first. It is good-looking (limited to challenging Aurors in front of the stadium). The world view of this book has a certain originality. The early stage is still within the scope of Harry Potter, and the later stage is direct. . . No evaluation. First of all, the author is very careful and fills every pit, which is very good. But later on, he fills in the pits for the sake of filling them, regardless of whether the plot is reasonable or not, which is terrible. Secondly, as a fanfic, you can create unique features and spread your imagination, but if you go from a magic novel to saving the world and fighting the doomsday, is it too far-fetched? There are many characters in the original work, especially Snape. You are just a passerby here, and even the beloved with unforgettable eyes, you play riddles all day long. Most of the fanfics are meant to make up for the regrets of the original work, rather than digressing too much into the later stages of the story. From the early stage, the writing style is very good and the story is compact, but I don't know if it is for other reasons. The later content is completely compiled for the sake of editing. It has been separated from the magical world and gives people the feeling of a doomsday novel. I thought the Slytherin explanation from the beginning would be carried through to the end, but it turned out that there was a wave of forced explanations at the end, and the true Slytherin spirit that was particularly good in the early stage disappeared in the later stage. Starting from the Goblet of Fire, you can feel that the author is trying hard to express a grand atmosphere, but you are just a passerby. Occasionally coming to a few paragraphs is completely coping. Instead of doing this, it is better to emphasize the writing and make the characters more full and three-dimensional like the original three schools. The battle in the stadium, especially the death of Voldemort, is a bit like Qiao Shan's version of three fights with white-bone demons. What's the matter, rush to reincarnate, why are you in a hurry. The bad ending brought down the whole work. I think you wrote very well before Goblet of Fire. Because of this, shouldn't a good child pay more attention to its later development? Especially the groundbreaking creations of Aunt Petunia, Sirius, Malfoy and others make people feel reasonable, unexpected, and particularly excellent. But in the end you were really speechless, so I patiently forced myself to finish reading the ending. I hope the author can have time to think about the plot at the beginning of Goblet of Fire and rewrite it. It can be longer and slower, and the characters in the original work can be three-dimensional. Slytherin, Uncursed, etc. At the beginning can be slowly filled in. Don't finish it in one or two chapters. This is not worth the long foreshadowing. However, generally speaking, the work is remarkable. The first few volumes are very exciting. Just because of the deep love and deep responsibility, the later volumes are deeply hated. The words may be a bit blunt, I hope the author doesn't mind. Alas, I really think of your ending. . .

What can I say? The author has a lot of ideas, but it is very disturbing to watch. He obviously lost control later on and started to run wild. Church, mold, modern weapons, he obviously wanted everything, but he didn't put it together well. The part after fourth grade is really unwatchable.

After reading two chapters, um~ the mortal protagonist who can evade the Death Curse many times, um, he thought the Death Curse was as fast as a turtle crawling... And then he could kill the wizard who was a Death Eater with one shot. The wizard didn't know that he had never seen this pistol. I pfft... Xiao Bai Wen

Well, I don't know what to say, so let's talk about why I like this book When I was a child, I read the original book written by Aunt Rowling. At that time, I was thinking, there is magic in the West, but what about the Taoism of my ancient Eastern country? Which one is strong and which one is weak? Since then, I have been looking for HP fans from time to time, and finally found this book a few months ago. During this period, I also read many HP fans. This one perfectly fits my imagination, so I highly recommend this book 👍

After the completion of Haipu's story, this is the only HP fanfic that I can personally read 😁. The characters' personalities are not necessarily extremely restored, but they are also very high. At least each character's personality and style can capture the main points, and it doesn't look too dramatic. The plot arrangement is also good, and the protagonist's style is relatively comfortable. I don't think the protagonist is "disgusting". There are only two things that I personally feel are obviously unreasonable or have bugs. One is that the protagonist does not doubt Lockhart at all, because Lockhart's change is very sudden for the protagonist. The author describes the change in Lockhart's mentality, but the author and the readers know it, but the protagonist does not. Since we don't know, it's a little unreasonable for a "trash" in the original work to suddenly become 🐮, or at the time when Tom's notebook disappeared, and the protagonist is not suspicious at all. But this is harmless, and the author also gave some explanations. I accept the author's explanation but retain my own opinion 😜 The second point I think is a bug, which is the combat effectiveness of the protagonist and professors when they fight the basilisk and Lockhart possessed by Voldemort. Lockhart is a wizard whose strength has been neglected for a long time, and even according to his graduation level, he should not be a powerful wizard, probably at the level of an ordinary wizard or slightly stronger. And Tom's Horcrux in the diary is probably his memory from fifth and sixth grade (I forget whether he was in fifth or sixth grade). I don't think Voldemort at this time is much stronger than Professors like McGonagall, and may not even be stronger than McGonagall. After all, Voldemort's strength should be significantly improved after graduation. According to Dumbledore, it is through many dangerous transformations and experiments that the gap with other wizards will be significantly widened. Voldemort in the fifth and sixth grade should not be stronger than the professor, or his strength may be limited. But in this book, Lockhart possessed by Voldemort can fight Mags Snape + Flitwick 1v3. This is just the magical strength of Voldemort + ordinary Lockhart who has fifth- and sixth-year fighting skills~ The protagonist of the duel class is full of firepower, which only makes Flitwick feel a little threatened. Even if his strength is improved later, he will not force the professor, right? Then the problem arises. The protagonist cannot defeat Flitwick, but Flitwick + McGonagall + Snape cannot defeat Tom in the fifth and sixth grades. Then the professor said that he can deal with the Basilisk by himself, although it will be very troublesome, but the protagonist has such difficulty in dealing with the Basilisk. He has to rely on three dragons and phoenixes, and finally the protagonist's grandfather intervenes. So this combat power is a bit chaotic, right? Except for the above two points that I personally feel have problems or lbugs, I felt very good after reading the whole book 😄

Sister Bird

First of all, the work is good, which makes me read this work with high expectations. The author's early settings, foreshadowing, and additions to the worldview gave me a feeling of sudden enlightenment, and everything fell into place. For example, the explanation of the silent spell and the evolution of magic in history, as well as the results of Eastern and Western superpower research, I like these settings very much. However, since the start of the competition, the plot has gradually declined. The plot originally driven by the protagonist has become led by the protagonist. Due to the accelerated pace of the narrative, many details have been brushed aside due to the regency, and the emotional rendering has become weak and even a bit pretentious due to the decline of the plot. For example, the sacrifice in the later period, due to the rush of the plot, it is difficult for the protagonist's pain and sacrifice to impress the readers. The choice of the ending and the nationwide charge created a strong sense of separation from the rhythm of the previous plot. Overall, this work can be regarded as the best among all HP fan works. The whimsy and exquisite settings in the early stage are amazing, and the classic pretentious slap in the face in the middle stage is also reasonable. However, the later filling in of holes and making up for the world view made the plot weak. I believe the author is capable of writing better, but I guess a lot of plot was cut out in the second half due to political factors. 7/10

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It's night. Qing Palace on Longhu Mountain The 61st generation Celestial Master recalled all the disciples who came down from the mountain. "The emperor's star is swaying, and the fire is high. The Qing Qi has been exhausted, and China is in danger." "Master, the change of dynasties is the law of heaven, why do you say this?" "The Taishi of the Ming Dynasty ordered Liu Bowen to cut off all the dragon veins in the world, leaving only the dragon veins of the Ming Dynasty, so as to I never thought that there was a poisonous snake in Changbai Mountain that sucked up the resentment of the dragon veins in the world. It became a climate and was eventually defeated by the Manchu Dynasty. However, the poisonous dragon was not a real dragon. The dragon veins in the world were extinct. The Manchu Qing Dynasty could do evil for a while, but now the poisonous dragon will die, and no dragon veins will continue. , And the remnant of the poisonous dragon cannot bring happiness to the people and give birth to a real dragon." "But is it really necessary to have dragon veins? Is it impossible to build a country without dragon veins?" "Idiot, it is not for the sake of building a country that we need dragon veins. Before the founding of the country, the dragon vein system combined with earth veins and luck to maintain the seal of Jedi Heaven. If this seal was broken, the consequences would be disastrous. Pindao decided to hold a Luotian Festival to find a way to break the situation. "Seven days later. The Heavenly Master looked up at the hexagram and laughed. "Master, what does this hexagram mean?" "You and Qing Shu will have a son in the future, which will be the key. However, due to the origin of the West, this son cannot practice Taoism after his birth. He can only practice Taoism when the fate comes." "What? "For fate?" "It's wonderful." "... Then I'll go and work hard with Qing Shu now?" "The priority is to protect the seal and seal the mountain!"

It is highly recommended to start rewriting Goblet of Fire. The latter part is seriously off track, and the good content of the previous volumes has been wasted!

The little heavenly master Zhang Xiao who requested the manuscript!

After reading the book for so long, let me analyze it (Doge): The main contradiction in the development of the plot is still the crisis caused by the noseless monster. However, by comparing other HP fan novels and Libao's obscure foreshadowing of the troubled times of Eastern demons, I feel that the boss is the boss, but not the final boss. And if student Arrogance wants to participate in the so-called "final battle", he must have the strength to join Lao Deng and Lao Tianshi in top-level games. Some HP fans use the system to solve the problem of strength span, while others, such as Professor Magic, use the professor's perspective to cleverly avoid the age problem. But as a student of the same level as Harry, Arrogance wants to make a leap in strength. Age is a big problem. And I think that to solve this problem, the basis is Arrogant's combination of East and West - first of all, according to Li Bao's setting, there is no magic, so the source of power may be the soul, spirit, and heart (I'm not sure if there is a heart), and Western magic highlights a freewheeling, no boundary, but from Lao Deng (I understand everything) The power of love), Lao Fu (complete indulgence and depravity, wanting to rule everything), and Grindelwald (overthrowing the law of secrecy for the greater good), the three of them have great ambitions similar to Western Buddhism (whether good or bad). This shows that my power of thinking is really very powerful, and Arrogance, as a Taoist inheritor, is called self-cultivation. This kind of polishing of the spiritual realm may be one of the opportunities for strength to soar. Second, to put it more loftily, the West emphasizes attributing great power to itself, while the East relies on great power and the heaven and earth. Arrogantly, as the "stitch monster" between the East and the West, using magic as a fulcrum to leverage the power of heaven and earth is also a major feature (you can see it in the Void Talisman section). How to combine the two and unify them will be another opportunity. Third, Daoji emphasizes the dual cultivation of life and life, that is, there is also the bonus of physical strength. I personally think that physical strength can be a comeback in Western plots where monsters fight without noses, but it should not be like the so-called muscle mage who uses the big swing fist as a flat-A weapon. Perhaps this aspect of power can be improved in the Eastern plot of conquering demons? What do you think @lipei and fellow water friends (don't comment if you don't like it)

I think there must be an emotional line for the heroine. I can't imagine the whole Longhu Mountain to hold the wedding of the Little Celestial Master. It has such a strong sense of history and China, as well as the collision of East and West.

In addition to Zhang Xiao's line drawings, "Xiaojiu Gourd" also drew a line drawing of the Qingluan Society's badge. This Qingluan looks like an auspicious beast in New Year pictures! But I had no idea what would happen if I put it into the badge. Then I saw Wuhu! This kind of mixture of Chinese and Western feeling! That's what this book is for! (omitting the rainbow farts of group friends here) This post should have ended here, but There is even a luminous version!

The first half is very well written, the setting is well stitched together, and it makes you want to continue reading. The various world views are also well complemented. As for the problems with the Goblet of Fire and the ending, it is obviously caused by the author's lack of writing skills, and the big scenes were not handled well. After the Goblet of Fire ends, let's stabilize the rhythm. It's better for Voldemort in the fifth year and the final destruction of the world in the sixth year. There is also time to describe more supporting characters. (Maybe many book friends are very dissatisfied with the destruction of the world, but after all, so much has been laid out before 23333)

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