The Golden Elixir Is a Star. Do You Call This Cultivating Immortality?

Be inspired and creative. Everything is very messy, the main line is vague, the characters are vague, and the supporting characters are just tools. Many new books like to write about crazy people, or people who are as cold as ice and don't care about anything. It's not that I want to write this kind of thing, it's just that I can't write the emotions, anger, sorrow, and joy, and I can't write the complete logic of the character's behavior. Just happiness, how to express happiness, and why you are happy. Different characters express happiness differently. People who can write emotions well are very good. Why do you write crazy or devoid of emotions? It simply cannot establish a character image. For example, he is a passionate, careful, or confident person. It's so different, but you still have to control the character's reactions and rationalize them. A generous person will not care about anything, and a rigorous person will not yell about making a mistake. Well, it would be nice to leave the framework behind, upgrade the notes, and add some clever jokes.

This update is too 6, focusing on doing whatever you want. According to this rhythm, many book friends will be lost, no one will see the results, and the results will not be good. In the end, the author will enter the palace, and it is better to give up first.

To say that it is really new, it can be seen that it is a fusion of multiple routines. Invincible flow, pretending to be a pig to eat the tiger, spawning monsters in the secret realm of the dungeon, chatting with the master's wife + empress, anti-shady savior, peerless genius, taking the sect to flight, mental illness buff... There are many elements that are very harmonious, even if they are sewn together, they are very good. But the taste is still the taste of those routines. The advantage is that if you like various types, you can try it.

In fact, the framework is still interesting, and some of the plot design is okay, but the emotional line is really unbearable for the characters and the characters are too thin to bear the emotions without any foreshadowing. The female characters are like flies and mindlessly stick to the protagonist "stinky egg". The cool points of multiple worlds intertwined or the simple mindless cool writing will not offend people.

Please vote monthly. I feel that there is still a lot of content behind, but the results are not very satisfactory. I am afraid that he will be cut off in half. I hope that every book I follow will have a perfect ending 🙂 If the author suddenly gets cut off in half, I hope I will not read his book in this life 🌹

I feel good after reading it. The content is generally interesting. The latter part does seem a bit rushed as the author said, but it can be considered a complete story and it is worth reading.

Why is there such a big gap between the early and late stages of this book? The author didn't write it himself in the early stage, right?

Ni Ma, read a novel about cultivating immortals and return a knife to me. If they don't meet in the future, I have to send you a knife. It's such a shame. It made me feel scratched all over after reading it. I have just finished reading the first copy. It is worth recommending at the moment. The plot will make readers empathize. I was in a shortage of books, so I found a novel with a slightly new idea. I have been a bookworm for more than ten years.

The author should not be too stressed. Those who ask you to update are those who like your books. Hitting is intimacy, scolding is love. Update well and don't be affected by comments. Everyone who has commented likes to read your book. Strive for the fourth update today. Don't go through the tribulation now. Practice your qi for two and a half years before going through the tribulation (there are too many inner demons out there that you can't control).

There is a very thoughtful book. You can check out Bear Wolf Dog's Tomorrow's Tribulation, it should be of great help to you.

Is this the end? , The backend of the Great Governance is not very good. The strength of the main protagonist has surpassed that of the original world, and the backend is very chaotic.

If you are sentimental, you can even wear a wedding dress He is ruthless, and he is not worthy of being an immortal.

Just finish 4 chapters in one day. Can't the author come up with a rule for adding updates? You are the slowest author I can read and update.

I'm curious when the author will update it? And can it not be so watery?

The author should pay attention to his health. Alas, things are unpredictable.

There are too few updates. I haven't read it for half a year and only updated a few pictures 😒

If the author only had the two cool points in the introduction, that would be okay. Besides the Heavenly Dao Foundation Establishment and the Stellar Golden Pill, is there anything else? What Nascent Soul? What transformation? Isn't the content in the introduction the author's trump card? If it's just an ace, it's better to show up quickly. It will drag on for hundreds of chapters. How many people will survive until that time? It's not necessary to cut it.

It's a good novel. The author directly bypasses the aspect of lowering intelligence and pretending to be smart, and skips the awkward pitfall of most authors who don't have enough IQ and want to force their IQ to slap people in the face. He concentrates on writing about killing monsters and upgrading, and then comes out with the most original and effective cool points that shock everyone. It's commendable. I sincerely recommend it, but the middle and later stages must involve emotional scenes and a show-off ending. If it ends too quickly, it will definitely be bad. After all, the image of the male and female protagonists has not been fully drawn yet. However, as a newcomer, the author lacks excellent writing skills and it is difficult to write well. If this book is not bad in the later stage, it can be half a god.

At your age, why do you give up on updating? How do you sleep? Can you sleep at your age? Great time, not enough updates. I came back to watch it again👀

Update soon! Author, write according to this!

Although this novel has various shortcomings, such as unstable updates, over-the-top plot, and awkward abstraction of some plots, it is undeniable that the author's control of the entire novel has not deviated much, and the overall framework is within grasp. Although the fourth game is long and watery, after the fourth game, a large part of the main plot has been advanced, which at least allows readers to see that the game serves the main plot, unlike some novels that completely ignore the development of the main plot under the guise of heaven. Moreover, the game exists relatively independently and does not affect the viewing of the main world plot.

I don't know why the crazy protagonist feels childish after watching it too much. He always plays some childish jokes.

There are many pits and foreshadowings in Lezi's book. If you look carefully, you may not be able to understand it. There are many things that the author has not explained. Some people think this is the failure of the author. He did not lose the setting and talked nonsense. Even the character of the protagonist is crazy and plays the role of the world. My personal opinion is very good. People come here crying, go away smiling, and just have fun watching it. I hope the author can update ten times a day, which is too few. By the way, there should be multiple heroines, right?

If he were normal, I would have read it. The problem is that the writing is too nonsensical. The protagonist is a psychopath, and I am not. There is no sense of immersion at all. Moreover, the other supporting characters are also like fools. They were poisoned after reading about 20 chapters 😅

You can't interrupt this book, you have to read it in one sitting. If you interrupt, your mind will come back 😂😂

I'll just look at the author, Heavenly Dao Foundation, Stellar Golden Pill, what else will he make up later, and what new tricks can this divine infant come up with?

When I saw the copy of martial arts in the military camp, the original style had completely changed into the style of an ordinary assembly line wholesale article. Descriptions such as "cold smile", "contempt" and "already dead" could not be the original author's writing style. All I can say is that it will either be sold to a studio or it will be developed into AI. Brothers, you can withdraw

Am I dazzled? Yesterday I saw that the 40,000 monthly ticket has now become several thousand

Hello author, I have copied your book on other platforms. The feedback from readers is very good, it is very popular, and there are many rewards. I plan to mention a new car again. I hope you will update a few more chapters so as not to affect my income or make my readers anxious. Thank you.

It's quite uncomfortable to watch. The protagonist is a "psychopath". In the dungeon of Moon Moon Continent, the protagonist is a "psychopath". His eyes can see some information that ordinary people can't see, so he may have some language that is different from ordinary people. Later, he starts to become mentally ill. He goes his own way and needs other people to understand his style of communication. In general, it is difficult to assume the perspective of the protagonist. Half of the 51% is scanning quickly, and the other half is telling myself that this is a psychopath. Now I can't stand it anymore. I'm older and it's hard to read Shuang's illogical novels.