Journey to the West: My Father Li Shimin

I rewarded it just to say something. This book seems to be really annoying. Whether it is to break the situation before setting off or to take advantage of the trend, it is all excellent. Since I met the monkey, no matter the disaster or experience, I just copied the original work and added a spoonful of chicken soup. This is the first time I have seen a good foundation ruined like this. Farewell😒

Rewarding for comments makes me feel depressed and unhappy. What is the difference between your book and the original? Just added some chicken soup theory. I became a monk in order to break the situation, but in the end I really thought I was a monk? Good guy, you didn't even eat the fruit of life when it was served to you, but you just found an excuse. You said that after taking the scriptures, you will not be short of longevity, right? But I don't believe that this fruit of life can only increase longevity and not strengthen your body. If you don't have the immortal scriptures and Taoism, and if you don't take the miraculous medicine, you will just be a mortal going to the Western Heaven. Dear book friends, you can go directly to read the original work. Except for the change of the person who takes the scriptures at the beginning, the rest is basically the same.

Is this a serious Journey to the West? Or is it the kind of novel with Journey to the West?

That fisherman dared to catch carp, but Carp and Li Datang explicitly banned the catching of carp! The fisherman was directly put in jail, interrogated and beheaded. The fortune teller instigated the fisherman to catch carp for his own consumption and was punished by one level. Moreover, the fish is also golden, which obviously reflects the royal family. What is the difference between this and rebellion? The crime is unpardonable and he should be arrested and executed immediately!

There are more changes, otherwise it would be better to read the original work

Big brother! The part about saving Sun Wukong, and the rest. The protagonist's tone of voice and words are exactly the same as that of the old version of Journey to the West. . . . Exactly, how can I put it, except that you changed the name of the protagonist, I felt like I was watching an old version of Journey to the West, but the part about the Dragon King of Jinghe River and the part about the underworld were really good. . . The layout of the time traveler can no longer be seen later. The character of the protagonist, the tone of voice, and the time traveler's thinking all seem to have disappeared, turning into another Tang Monk. . . . The kind that can perfectly substitute for the original Tang Monk in Journey to the West. . . .

It's okay, I thought it was another one that traveled through decades, and I didn't know it was Journey to the West, let alone that the sky was full of gods, Buddhas, demons and ghosts. That kind of thing makes me very embarrassed. It's like a story we learned when we were kids. The protagonist is so stupid.

The book "Journey to the West" is all about human relationships, and the protagonist's breakthrough is quite good, especially in terms of bribing Judge Cui. Being a Tang Monk himself is great, and it is also good to go to Xitian to work in the establishment. This prince's status is easy to squeeze in, and directly squeezes out Jin Chanzi's establishment. The backstage is also very hard.

Finally reached the critical node. If pig's feet is according to the original text, then it is the script of Guanyin (perhaps Tathagata). Pigfoot has to write his own specious script, hopefully it's sexy enough

At first I thought it was okay, and the ideas were relatively novel. However, there will be copies of Journey to the West later, and I hope more polishing can be done.

This book looks pretty good, but there are too few chapters.

The writing is okay. But it's a bit too close to the original work. For example, I felt that Wukong was too thin and worried that he would not be able to defeat the six bandits. Another example is that Wukong is wearing thin clothes. Will he freeze? You probably want Goku to think you care about him. But you didn't describe the protagonist's inner thoughts. The protagonist is a time traveler. He must be very different. This was done. Forget it if the protagonist doesn't eat meat. Anyway, if my strength is in place, there will be a lot of delicious food if I go back to being a vegetarian. Like sesame sauce or something. What we want to see is a different performance of a time traveler protagonist, rather than watching Tang Seng again. This Tang Monk is just more intelligent and no longer pedantic. This is better than that pedantic Tang Monk. What are the other differences?

The protagonist can follow the original work, but there must be a lot of psychological activities. Be reasonable, otherwise you won't look like a time traveler at all

Weird, and again, is the Tang Emperor a human king?

Reward ψ(｀∇´)ψ for correcting a typo for the author

It's awesome. The author's Chinese skills are not weak.

Invest in you! Don't enter the palace!

Now I have seen that the protagonist becomes a monk and also got the cassock. Well, this part is pretty good so far, but after reading the comment area, it seems not so good. I hope the latter part is not so bad. Author, come on, come on, come on. It doesn't matter if you write slowly, but it's not okay if you write poorly.

Let's see how you survive three dozen white-bone spirits and the daughter country. The most exciting parts of Journey to the West are the Bone Demon and the Kingdom of Women. If it is well written, this book will be wonderful.

My father, Zhang Erhe My father, Zhang Erhe My father, Zhang Erhe

Will humanity in the mythical world engage in ethnic and racial discrimination? For example, humanity likes the Han people, and only the Han people are considered human beings. It even encourages the Han people to massacre and enslave other human races.