Writer: Only 16 Years Old, Me? the Ancestor of Internet Literature?

These three words came to my mind. The technique of retrospection, the writing style that mixes the old and the new, and the protagonist wandering between maturity and immaturity. The supporting characters and plot seem to be deliberately trying to wash away calculation and shrewdness, creating the innocence, enthusiasm and hope of the millennium era. This is the beginning of the web article. Every old man always looks back on the beginning of the century meaningfully. What is the beginning of the web article? The more you read, the characters become the author's expression tools rather than him, because what this book wants to write about is the agitation of the gods and their results. What even needs to be written is the spirit of writing. For example, this book is not literate. This book is about respecting teachers. The author of this book is actually an excited reader...

Very weird! This article has an ancient flavor to it, like old meat with an old skeleton and fresh skin.

What a strange experience. When reading this book, don't put yourself in the role of the protagonist. It feels much better if you think of the protagonist as your daughter.

How about this book? There was one that was also written by an internet writer and I saw it at the Tomb of the Demonic God. I couldn't bear it and ran away!

There are very good points of refreshing articles, which are suitable for large quantities. On the other hand, it is like reviewing the entire development history of online articles, which is quite interesting. It is said that the good boy updates tens of thousands of articles a day. Do all authors have to follow suit? 😁

It's well written, readable, and fluent. Good luck to the author. Let me give you a small suggestion. The system reward feedback given by the Internet author is insufficient. Specifically refers to the cash reward. Although 10 yuan was very good in terms of consumption level in 1999, it is not enough to drink a cup of milk tea now. The feedback from young readers seems to be poor. For example, I can't imagine what 10 yuan could buy in 1999? How do you live on a salary of 600 a month? Appropriately increasing consumption to improve life segments can increase the value of cash rewards. You can refer to why the author of the chronology spends time writing about what a few dollars can buy. This is all to enhance the purchasing power of those few dollars and increase the sense of experience for readers. It is also cool to compare it with the current price level. In the 1970s, 20 yuan could buy a pig, but now you can buy a pair of socks. It's a bit similar to the type of cool novel about killing a Maserati for 1 yuan, but not so exaggerated.

Why is this book recommended by Toad?

The author's name of this good boy is too sloppy

. . . . What's cool about this is the mechanical journal writing method

The protagonist is a robot? ? ? Is the system for 2050? Why does it feel like the system is from 1980? Why does no one care that the 16-year-old protagonist writes a novel like Living with a Stewardess? ? ? ? ? Does it turn out to be a ghost blowing out the light once you smoke it? ? ? Anyway, you can't use your hands and your brain, right? ? ?

Then you should go to the Taiwan Forum. The least number of Chinese online articles should appear in Taiwan

Later, you can create a group by yourself, write online IPs, shoot movies, TV shows, and make games. It will be so vindictive that it will be really painful to watch. . .

The writing is good, but as of now, the system accounts for a bit too much, and the protagonist is not highlighted. I feel that the protagonist is a bit weakened, and the sense of presence is not prominent.

How should I put it? From watching the whole story, I feel like the protagonist is like an emotionless robot. Most of the plot advancement relies on system text, and some climax plots are also written like a running account. Writing this kind of novel with no ups and downs in the plot and no fluctuation in emotions depends too much on the writing style. I feel that the author does not have such writing power.

Interesting. Is this a book written by Zhihu Lao Deng from that post forum?

You can't become a literary giant by writing online articles, and you may not even be able to become one even if you write serious literature!

It's pretty good, but the dialogue is a bit awkward. Just keep it up and start slaughtering 400,000 words.

There is a kind of plainness that is the real feeling. If you add more, it won't be enough.

The plot of this book is very comfortable and smooth just by reading the online version, but when it comes to the female characters, it is particularly strange, that is, the kind of women who do not exist in reality.

What should I say? This is the update. Can you learn from the protagonist and be your own protagonist for once? You can't even sign up for 100,000. You can at least sign up for 10,000 or 20,000. Come on, I'm optimistic about you. You will be the next generation of tentacle monsters.

The first few chapters are written quite peacefully! Either add characters or add emotional drama. Or write more about the inner scenes, such as the author thinking about which novel to copy and which website to send the novel to. You haven't written anything. The system just typed and uploaded the novel. The story is too flat. Like a running account. Not feeling any better

The content of the online article is not exciting, starting a business is not exciting, it is just like a diary, I can't hold on anymore...

I finished reading it in one go and it felt pretty good. I would like to support it with a small monthly ticket. The overall plot is good. Whether it is the plot or Goldfinger, I like it. The selection of books can also give people a lot of memories, and the content is quite satisfying. A few suggestions about this book It feels like the author is playing a word game that reincarnates a literary giant. All the descriptions are about describing the feedback this game brings to players. The whole game is a bit mechanical, so the character descriptions are not vivid enough and tend to be more NPC-like. The plot advancement is also like the game moving forward step by step, which feels a bit dull.

There are too few novels written about novels. I think your writing is very good. There was a very good one before. The development of Internet literature from 1990 to 2000, and it was also pretentious. I have never read it before after 2000. It was novel and very interesting. Other readers said it was not good and asked the author to write Zhu Tianwen. The author stopped writing and just stopped crying. I hope the author can continue writing and have a conclusion.

I've read it halfway through, and I feel it's well written, with a few typos.

Write well and check it yourself.

One day passed, another day passed

Does the protagonist build the website platform himself?

The first ten chapters are very comfortable, but I personally have no interest in writing a novel. I clicked into this novel because I was attracted by the various genres created by the protagonist in the introduction, and I didn't want to read any composition 😐

I've given you the votes. I need more authors, but it's not enough.