As a Player, I Want to Live Forever in the Dungeon.

Another twenty-four hour thing. If your brain can't convert it, just use hours!

I am almost annoyed to death by scratching my head and touching my nose It happens every once in a while (any time, anywhere) Is the protagonist growing fungus? Just want to do that

It's uncomfortable, the introduction is to survive the boss, and the protagonist buys life-burning skills and swordsmanship at the beginning.

It feels like the setting is a bit conflicting. Put it this way. According to the description in the novel, first you practice the top blue skill to the full level, and then your attribute points can no longer increase. Hey, at this time, you change to a purple level internal skill, and as soon as you practice it, your attribute values ​​rise straight up. It feels ridiculous. It's like an infinite flow world covered in game skin. (To put it simply, it's like when a person reaches the world's top level through exercise and fitness, and the attribute value has increased to the limit of the human body. At this time, someone said, I have a better way to exercise here, and then try it. Hey, the attribute value is just like a new person who has just started to exercise. With each level of life-burning technique, the cultivation speed becomes slower and slower. Got stuck at the end. Then after returning, I found that I need to buy two identical exercises and combine them to break through the upper limit of the exercises. Otherwise, you will not be able to practice, and you will be very rigid. Then after the protagonist breaks through the upper limit of the skill, he returns to the Novice Village, and the second copy starts. Then the life-burning skill is practiced so fast that it is ridiculous. Didn't he say that the Novice Village is at the limit before? And why did the cultivation speed soar again after breaking through the technique? In short, many aspects of the settings in this novel world are really unreasonable, almost as if they were set based on game mechanics. It's scary to think about it. Originally, I didn't think too much about it. Just like the first dungeon world that the protagonist experienced, it was all about telling stories, and I was just watching the story. Not bad either. But starting from the second dungeon, there were too many inner dramas for the protagonist, and too many novel settings. Sometimes the story was told, and sometimes the world setting was interspersed. I couldn't help but be led to think, and then I read with my brain, and everything felt awkward. I hope the author's third copy, "Slaying the Dragon," will tell the story well without adding too much water or writing so many inner monologues of the protagonist. In this way, the quality of the entire work will be much better.

This book. . . Just think of it as a copy of a game novel. . . The author's detailed explanation of what he set is too rigid. . . A lot of common sense is wrong. . . The sense of fragmentation is obvious, quite uncomfortable, and twisted 😰😰😰

The protagonist is working hard to upgrade again, and the female supporting characters are carried away by the plot 🤫

The writing was okay, but it was a bit different from the introduction. I came here based on the introduction, just like the first Kumu Taoist. I thought I would wait until he got old and could no longer walk to give him a knife!

Author, according to your setting, is a person who cannot reach level 1 in half a year a loser or a real boss?

Let me make a prediction here. This is a common problem of many authors who are super gods in the early stage and super ghosts in the middle and later stages. The characteristic of your book is that it develops over a long period of time, and the process of losing the watermelon and picking up the watermelon seeds is slowly getting colder. It's written like Infinite Flow, where enemies come in waves, and you just happen to defeat them. Reminds me of Dragon Ball Super Saiyan.

After reading a few chapters, I don't know @_@The plot is biased towards Tomato. The writing style gives people a childish feeling. The specific framework is still okay, but the author obviously can't grasp it.

Introduction Selling rat meat from a faucet, not to mention forming a team with a female teammate, isn't it the heroine! The protagonist doesn't need teammates regardless of his strength or what he says in his profile!

It's fine as a single player, but you have to form a team...

I hope the author will consider the actual situation of the protagonist when writing the performance of the protagonist. It really feels very fragmented.

Wen Zi Jing (Anonymous) Come in a hurry, don't meddle, the road is solid, it is difficult to fight. When encountering injustice, think about self-reliance. When encountering difficulties, don't shut yourself away. If you have many friends, you will have nothing to hide from; if you have few friends, you will have few misfortunes. If the enemy is not established, he will be in danger. If you strike first, you need to raise the ashes. Look for a backer, lean on your thighs, don't be self-sufficient, don't feel inferior. Selfish desires are the root of disaster. Take care of your life first, and then cultivate your character. The road is ahead, go steadily, keep looking, misfortunes will never stop. Although the treasure is good, don't take it by force. The truth of the Tao is the result of correction. If you go astray, retreat before you advance; when you encounter an opportunity, you will gain something later. Xi Hong, a good old man, was finally punished, how miserable. There is a sorcerer who has many schemes and is knocked unconscious and put in an iron pot. God of water and fire, if provoked, the pillar of heaven will fall, and his life will be fruitless. Lao Xuan Turtle has a happy nature, does not know how to hide, and suffers misfortune. Kuafu died, Yi shot down the sun, all turned into ashes, and fell after the calamity. The old witch ancestors were extremely powerful, cautious and thoughtless, but sad. In the past, the demon emperor had no one to look at, and he could not escape from the cruel things. From ancient times to the present, there have been many strong people. How many of them are left to this day? The Dragon and Phoenix tribes are unjust, strive for luck, and end up lonely. After the lich divided the heaven and the earth, they were provoked and all fell. When people get up, they sing rituals and music, saints and wise men help them, and there are many immortals. In my generation, bad luck is hidden, the path to immortality is complete, and wealth is achieved. Live in peace and contentment, worry about disasters, do things steadily, and reject cause and effect. Those who show off will be punished, regardless of their merits, only their duties. Avoid natural disasters and make changes; avoid man-made disasters and leave no pot. Pay homage to the seniors, respect those who have gone before, respect the saints and the strong, and gather merit. Burn incense diligently, cultivate yourself diligently, and gain immortality. Don't be lazy. The road is endless, the heart is boundless, the road is steady, and there is no empty space. The more confused your thoughts become, the harder it will be to achieve perfection. Don't worry too much. Now that I have heard of the Tao, there are many difficulties. The Sutra of Stable Characters is kept by the side of my hand.

Does a player count as a player if he cannot be resurrected?

Really, please ask the author to create a database for himself. . Your problem with data flying off as soon as you write them is really embarrassing. . I won't complain about your writing, plot or anything. . But the data changes back and forth, and the most outrageous thing is that in the Hundred Ghost World, family names can also change. . Very poor reading experience

Some settings are quite impressive and grand, but the performance suddenly becomes mediocre, and there is a bit of a gap.

It can't be just envy and jealousy. Infinity already violates entropy. As an ordinary human being, I will vote. You will live worse than death. Your opinion is not important. I am curious whether your cells are always reborn or do not change. Well, you should contribute your body to all mankind.

In the second world, the author also describes the Eastern and Western countries and gods in the real-life competition, as well as the description of the conflict between characters. It would have been a hit twenty years ago, but it is a pity that it was not created at the right time.

Chao Yao, an office worker, became the leader in the world. A large group of brothers followed him to make a living. Since I rescued a good and capable brother from Jiangzhou I drink a lot of wine every day, eat a lot of meat, and when trouble comes, I still have my brother to work for me, so I am very happy. ................. "Reported, Zhujiazhuang arrests my brother Liangshan!" "Bastard, get my thirty-six pounds of gold ring knife!" "Wait a minute, brother is the master of the village, don't touch it lightly, I am willing to go." "Good brother! For life!" ... ....... "Report, Chai Daguan people have been trapped in Gaotang Prefecture and are urgently waiting for rescue!" "Bastard, bring me the eighteen-pound wide-bladed ghost-headed knife!" "Wait a minute, my brother is the master of the village. Don't touch it lightly. I am willing to go." "Good brother! For life!" ............. "Report, there is a demon king of Mangdang Mountain who has made rude remarks and insulted me, Liangshan!" "Asshole, bring me my nine-pound wind-splitting sword!" "Brother is the master of the mountain stronghold and cannot be touched lightly. I am willing to go." "Good brother! For life!" ................ "Report , there is Zengtou City snatching the Zhaoye Jade Lion!" "Brother, bring me Yanling's sword!" "Brother, don't you advise me?" "Brother, have a good trip!" A few days later, Chao Yu, who had not been on the battlefield for a long time, was shot through the heart. ................ Chao Yao yelled and sat up from the bed, looked at his messy rental house, covered in cold sweat, picked up his phone and looked at the time, muttering to himself, "That's not right, am I not the protagonist?" Suddenly, a black-faced man said quietly behind him: "No, I am. Good brother, for life..." ... Dear readers, if you have time, come to "Water Margin of Destiny" to read and give some advice! ... I am occupying valuable space to promote it, and wish the author more than 10,000 updates every day, thank you.

The writing is good, but there are too many updates, which makes it unsatisfying to read.

It's actually pretty good. I've read about a hundred chapters, although there are some minor issues that I can't explain and the timeline seems a bit messy. But the most important thing is that the author's writing rhythm is a bit problematic. You could have written seven or eight hundred chapters for this subject matter, but you ended it before three hundred. The pace of the whole article is very fast, and the description of the battle is also a bit vague. Many things were mentioned in one stroke, so the battles, characters, events, and the world you portrayed have a somewhat random feeling. I look forward to your next good article. I will finish this first.

It looks pretty good. It would be better if the language is more refined.

Come on! The mythical world is synchronized with reality, doesn't the pig's foot appear once in a hundred years 😁

4 Votes, don't you want to add some points?

All the monthly votes have been voted for this month, and they are all booked now. Come on, author, how about adding some tips by the way? I haven't experienced it yet 🙂

There are so many things going on. I have been asking for leave recently, so I will make up for it today. Even

The author has published a new book, come and read it.