American Comics: Starting from the Adventures of Jackie Chan

The equipment level of District 13 is obviously higher than that of S. H. I. E. L. D. The weapons in District 13 are basically all kinds of lasers, missiles, laser tanks and so on. S. H. I. E. L. D. Also needs cosmic magic to develop laser weapons.

The main character, a demon, is so rubbish. He has human thoughts, but he feels like an otaku and has no ambition.

Has the author not read The Adventures of Jackie Chan? The latest chapter actually says that demons are not smart? Do you believe that the eight demons who rule the world have no IQ? They are simply drained of wisdom and strength,

What the hell, the eight demons correspond to Bagua, and you have a ninth demon. How can you add another one to Bagua? This is nonsense.

After reading the previous article, the male protagonist was imprisoned for 500 years, and his mentality was really good. He was like a child. When he saw Daolosaurus, he immediately offered him immortality, and also said things like "will you refuse if I do this?", Which gave people the appearance of living in a young animation.

The world view is a bit broken. To be honest, if Marvel messes up Jackie Chan's Adventures, I will be speechless. If you want, just split it into two worlds.

You have to know that the world of Jackie Chan Adventures is a balance of good and evil. Since there is a ninth demon, the good side must have hidden power. Judging from the current situation, once you come out to cause trouble, as long as you are around, the righteous party will definitely reveal its hidden power. This is the worldview of Jackie Chan's Adventures. Either you rewrite the worldview at the beginning, or you don't rewrite the worldview, and you have to create this ninth devil. Does the righteous party have hidden power to restrain you? What are you doing? What kind of plane? It's really hard to resist. At the very least, you have to lay the foundation for the setting. This is a very simple thing to start with. Rewrite the world view or join the side of justice. There are only two hidden powers. Why not write it?

The article says that the protagonist has black energy that can attach to other demons and follow them out. Can the protagonist find this way to escape, but his predecessor doesn't know about it? Although the protagonist only traveled through time after the Holy Lord escaped, his predecessor knew the Holy Lord, and he could have escaped with the Holy Lord at that time. You can't think about this book in detail, it's full of holes

I saw Chapter 69. Didn't I say that I have written many novels about Jackie Chan's adventures? Why do you say that the Shadow Army is afraid of light? What the hell setting? I have never heard of this setting. You said that the shells have high damage and a wide range. I feel more afraid of light than anything when it explodes. I am really afraid of light. How can the Shadow Army come out during the day? Are there too few shadow armies fighting during the day?

Should I grab Dormammu's Dark Dimension later?

The protagonist has become a supermodel, and the demon has been greatly weakened. The eight demons are all the biological sons of Hei Qi, but you are no longer the same. Why should the eight demons not die? The demon's consciousness is so easy to deal with, so he has already played with it. The eight demons and the black energy coexist and never die. When the other demons confront the eight demons, who will the black energy help? The protagonist is such a supermodel that he can actually absorb the black energy of the other eight demons, seal the other demons, control the black energy, and is not afraid of righteousness. What are the other people doing except running around with him!

Wu Zetian's Ocean Heart skin is really the best image of the water demon, because in the setting, Bazaar is the queen of the underwater kingdom of Atlantis, similar to the mermaid form.

All those who write about the balance of good and evil are dead, because it is just an anime. If you look deeper, the balance of good and evil cannot be solved at all. The demons are sealed, and the protagonist is sealed? It has always been the case that evil does not prevail over good, and anime can only show that evil does not prevail against good, unless there is a drastic change, but most authors simply do not have the writing power.

This protagonist's name disgusts me deeply. It's already 2023. Can I use snacks to name the protagonist of a novel I wrote?

After reading it, it can be regarded as original, because the settings in both Marvel and Jackie Chan's Adventures have been changed by the author, and not a single bit is left.

You can tell something about the protagonist's name

The character design of the main character is quite nonsense. Sometimes he says he is a human, and sometimes he says he is a devil. It is an adaptive race. He traveled through time to replace the ninth devil, and the logic does not make sense in hell.

In fact, you can create your own demon. There is no need to create a ninth demon. Hell is not just about the eight demons. They are just gossips. If you force yourself to insert a ninth demon, it looks silly. Don't stuff it next time 😁

Travel Notes of the Maximum Level Madonna 😰

I feel sick and want to vomit, so don't watch the protagonist of the max level Madonna

After 500 years in hell, I still feel that I am a human being.

There are too many blockages. It has been sealed for 500 years. How is it possible that the mentality has not changed at all? What's more, you are now a devil, a devil

Now I'm reading chapter 135. I saw you apologized before, Holy Mother, and you won't continue like this. This time, the Holy Lord didn't succeed and just abandoned the book.

All I can say is that this subject matter is very good. I recommend someone else to write it

😰 The original text means Pangu Treasure Box. You can also learn from their transliteration of Panku Treasure Box without using your brain. There is also the Treasure of the Golden Rooster King. The original text means the Treasure of Qin Shihuang.

The ninth demon itself is unreasonable. In the original work, the eight demons correspond to Bagua. What does your ninth one correspond to? 😰

After reading about twenty chapters, I found it uninteresting and unexciting. There was no protagonist introduction and the plot was bland. It's said to be the Ninth Demon, but it turns out that he hasn't appeared or even shown his strength in more than 20 chapters. The plot is so bland that you can skip it and the writing is too stiff.

Seriously, have you ever seen a demon? How can you be so stupid just writing about devil 😰

The protagonist's presence is really low

So speechless😅